मान जाओ 'परम' मेरा कहना......

by Anaarhi on December 01, 2013, 01:59:19 PM
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वो जो रूठा ही था बहाने से,
क्या भला मानता मनाने से.

राह दुश्वार हो न जाएं कहीं,
पास आने की - दूर जाने से.

बैरी* दिल में ही बस गया था- मैं,
कैसे बचता फ़रेब खाने से.

क़िस्त सर पर चढ़ी थी सूरज की,
क़र्ज़ ली छाँव शामियाने से.

मान जाओ ‘परम’ मेरा कहना,
ठेस लगती है आज़माने से.

“परम” ०१/१२/२०१३

एक प्रश्न…..

आख़िरश* क्या हुआ तुझे हासिल ,
ख़ाक में रंगे जाँ मिलाने से.

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wo jo rootha hi thaa bahaane se,
kya bhalaa maanta manaane se.

raah dushwaar ho n jaeiN kahiN,
paas aane ki - door jaane se.

bairi dil mein hi bas gya thaa main,
kaise bachtaa fareib khaane se.

qist sar par chadhi thi sooraj ki,
qarz li chhavN shaamiyane se.

maan jaao ‘param’ mera kahna,
thhes lagti hai aazmaane se.

“param” 01/12/2013

ek parshn….

aakhirash kya hua tujhe hasil,
khaaq mein rang e jaaN Milane se..


(* बैरी = वैरी, दुश्मन ; आख़िरश = आख़ीर को, ultimately, )
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2013, 03:12:01 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob , beautiful,,,,,
dheron dheron daad...

Khaaq Se Hi To Mili Hai Zindagii Apnii....
Kya DareiN IsmeiN rang e jaaN Milane se...
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2013, 03:14:40 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2013, 03:48:26 PM »
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वो जो रूठा ही था बहाने से,
क्या भला मानता मनाने से.

रस्ते दुश्वार हो न जाएं कहीं,
पास आने के - दूर जाने से.

बैरी* दिल में ही बस गया था- मैं,
कैसे बचता फ़रेब खाने से.

क़िस्त सर पर चढ़ी थी सूरज की,
क़र्ज़ ली छाँव शामियाने से.

मान जाओ ‘परम’ मेरा कहना,
ठेस लगती है आज़माने से.

“परम” ०१/१२/२०१३

एक प्रश्न…..

आख़िरश* क्या हुआ तुझे हासिल ,
ख़ाक में रंगे जाँ मिलाने से.

---------------------

wo jo rootha hi thaa bahaane se,
kya bhalaa maanta manaane se.

raste dushwaar ho n jaeiN kahiN,
paas aane ke - door jaane se.

bairi dil mein hi bas gya thaa main,
kaise bachtaa fareib khaane se.

qist sar par chadhi thi sooraj ki,
qarz li chhavN shaamiyane se.

maan jaao ‘param’ mera kahna,
thhes lagti hai aazmaane se.

“param” 01/12/2013

ek parshn….

aakhirash kya hua tujhe hasil,
khaaq mein rang e jaaN Milane se..


(* बैरी = वैरी, दुश्मन ; आख़िरश = आख़ीर को, ultimately, )

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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2013, 04:55:59 PM »
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waaah waaahh janaab
kya kehne
bht bht khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2013, 06:47:23 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut aalaaa
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nyc,...............
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Waaaaaaaaah bahut khooooooooob param ji.... dheron dheron daaaaaaad....
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2013, 01:34:11 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob , beautiful,,,,,
dheron dheron daad...

Khaaq Se Hi To Mili Hai Zindagii Apnii....
Kya DareiN IsmeiN rang e jaaN Milane se...

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया जनाब Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' साहब
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2013, 05:08:51 PM »
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राह दुश्वार हो न जाएं कहीं,
पास आने की - दूर जाने से.
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2013, 05:11:00 PM »
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bahut khoob  icon_flower
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Param jee behad khoob ghazal, bahut pasand aai, yuN likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye.
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waah waah bahut khoob
तहे दिल से शुक्रगुज़ार हूँ जनाब S K Saini साहब
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