मिलने आये / Milne aaye....................SAINI

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मिलने   आये फूलों से |
दामन उलझा  शूलों से ||

बेबस   लंगड़े लूलों  से |
क्यूँ बैठे   माज़ूलों   से ?

अब तक क्या सीखा हमने ?
जीवन की इन  भूलों से ||

मीठे    नग़में ग़ायब हैं |
सावन के उन झूलों  से ||

बेमौसिम बहलाओ  अब |
दिल काग़ज़ के फूलों से ||

जीना   उसको आता है |
जो वाक़िफ़ मअमूलों से ||

सब के सब ज़रदारों  को |
ख़तरा है महसूलों   से ||

बच्चे क्या टीचर भी गुम |
सरकारी स्कूलों     से ||

झगड़ा तो माली से  था |
हम लड़ आये फूलों से ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Milne   aaye   phooloN   se .
Daaman   uljhaa   shooloN se.

Bebas   langde   looloN   se.
KyooN  baithe   maazooloN se?

Ab  tak  kyaa  seekhaa hamne?
Jeewan   kee  in  bhooloN se.

Meethe  nghmeN  ghaayab haiN.
Saawan   ke  un   jhooloN se.

Bemausim     behlaao      ab.
Dil   kaaghaz  ke phooloN se.

Jeenaa   usko    aataa   hai.
Jo   waaqif    mamooloN   se.

Sab  ke   sab  zardaaroN  ko.
Khatraa  hai   mahsooloN  se.

Bachhe kyaa teechar bhee gum.
Sarkaaree     skooloN     se.

Jhagdaa  to  maalee  se thaa.
Ham   lad   aaye  phooloN se.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 04:44:09 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sir
Applause Applause
Ab tak kya seekha hamne, jeevan ke in bhoolo se Applause Applause laajavaab
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 05:08:39 PM »
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waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dr saini ji.. Bahoot Umda peshkesh !


Nysha !
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 06:18:39 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 07:10:35 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab behad gazab karte haiN aap jo itni choti bher meiN
apne khayaaloN ko piro lete haiN.. Usual Smile

Behad khoob aur umdaa kalaa kahi hai.. sabhi ashaar khoob
rahe.. par in ashaaroN ke kia kahne behad khoob janab behad
gazab ke khayaal haiN yeH .. Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubarak baad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile    

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Ab  tak  kyaa  seekhaa hamne?
Jeewan   kee  in  bhooloN se.


Jhagdaa  to  maalee  se thaa.
Ham   lad   aaye  phooloN se.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2012, 06:38:00 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 05, 2012, 10:05:59 AM
मिलने   आये फूलों से |
दामन उलझा  शूलों से ||

बेबस   लंगड़े लूलों  से |
क्यूँ बैठे   माज़ूलों   से ?

अब तक क्या सीखा हमने ?
जीवन की इन  भूलों से ||

मीठे    नग़में ग़ायब हैं |
सावन के उन झूलों  से ||

बेमौसिम बहलाओ  अब |
दिल काग़ज़ के फूलों से ||

जीना   उसको आता है |
जो वाक़िफ़ मअमूलों से ||

सब के सब ज़रदारों  को |
ख़तरा है महसूलों   से ||

बच्चे क्या टीचर भी गुम |
सरकारी स्कूलों     से ||

झगड़ा तो माली से  था |
हम लड़ आये फूलों से ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Milne   aaye   phooloN   se .
Daaman   uljhaa   shooloN se.

Bebas   langde   looloN   se.
KyooN  baithe   maazooloN se?

Ab  tak  kyaa  seekhaa hamne?
Jeewan   kee  in  bhooloN se.

Meethe  nghmeN  ghaayab haiN.
Saawan   ke  un   jhooloN se.

Bemausim     behlaao      ab.
Dil   kaaghaz  ke phooloN se.

Jeenaa   usko    aataa   hai.
Jo   waaqif    mamooloN   se.

Sab  ke   sab  zardaaroN  ko.
Khatraa  hai   mahsooloN  se.

Bachhe kyaa teechar bhee gum.
Sarkaaree     skooloN     se.

Jhagdaa  to  maalee  se thaa.
Ham   lad   aaye  phooloN se.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 



Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2012, 07:37:51 AM »
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shukriya mukesh ji
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Nysha ji bahut bahut shukriya
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley VERY GOOD
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 05, 2012, 10:05:59 AM
मिलने   आये फूलों से |
दामन उलझा  शूलों से ||

बेबस   लंगड़े लूलों  से |
क्यूँ बैठे   माज़ूलों   से ?

अब तक क्या सीखा हमने ?
जीवन की इन  भूलों से ||

मीठे    नग़में ग़ायब हैं |
सावन के उन झूलों  से ||

बेमौसिम बहलाओ  अब |
दिल काग़ज़ के फूलों से ||

जीना   उसको आता है |
जो वाक़िफ़ मअमूलों से ||

सब के सब ज़रदारों  को |
ख़तरा है महसूलों   से ||

बच्चे क्या टीचर भी गुम |
सरकारी स्कूलों     से ||

झगड़ा तो माली से  था |
हम लड़ आये फूलों से || iss sher ne to bazm loot liya ji

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Milne   aaye   phooloN   se .
Daaman   uljhaa   shooloN se.

Bebas   langde   looloN   se.
KyooN  baithe   maazooloN se?

Ab  tak  kyaa  seekhaa hamne?
Jeewan   kee  in  bhooloN se.

Meethe  nghmeN  ghaayab haiN.
Saawan   ke  un   jhooloN se.

Bemausim     behlaao      ab.
Dil   kaaghaz  ke phooloN se.

Jeenaa   usko    aataa   hai.
Jo   waaqif    mamooloN   se.

Sab  ke   sab  zardaaroN  ko.
Khatraa  hai   mahsooloN  se.

Bachhe kyaa teechar bhee gum.
Sarkaaree     skooloN     se.

Jhagdaa  to  maalee  se thaa.
Ham   lad   aaye  phooloN se.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 




saini ji ek baat main yahaan kahta chaloon ki. ALLAH ne waqayi aap ko kaaam likhne ki azeem nemat diya hai. aap iss tarh likhte rahein. main itni koshish karta hoon per aapke aaas-paas bhi nahin bhatak pataa. saath hi yahaan main HASAN SAHAB ki bhi tarif karta chaloon. nihayat khoobsurati se ghazal ko anjaam dete hain. aap logo ke kalaam mein mujhe ek pokhtagi nazar aati hai. main bhi aap jaisa likhna chahata hoon. per ye toh ALLAH ki nemat hai. har kisi ko nahin milti
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Adil saheb aapkee is mahabbat kaa main kaise shukriya kahoon theek se lafz bhee naheen ban rahe filhaal aapkaa pyaar mujh par bhaaree hai
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