मुफ़लिसी का भंवर /Muflisee kaa bhanwar.............................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: May 03, 2012, 06:46:51 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwww. Ghazab, shaandar, kya khoob likha Saini Jee aapne.
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भंवर  से मुफ़लिसी के आज  तक उबरा  नहीं ‘सैनी’|

मगर सच ये भी है कि टूट  कर बिखरा नहीं ‘सैनी’||
  jaan boojh kar muflisi ka dramaa karte ho.tum kya ho main jaanti hoon. koi baaba-waabaa nahin bann jaao ge.apni nautanki abb band bhi karo. mere saath ho warna tum ALLAH jaane kya hota phir tumhaara.  Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

लगे रहते हैं कोशिश में   मुझे  बरबाद  करने  की |

पका कर खा लेंगे मुझको अरे बकरा   नहीं  ‘सैनी’||
 
tumhein aur pakaa kar kaa jaaein kise hazam ho ge tum. tumhein main ne rokaa hua hai warna tum kito.n ko khaa jaao aur dakaar bhi na lo DR sahab.
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शिकायत एक ही  रहती है  मेरी   जान-ए-जाना को |

अभी तक इश्क़ में  उलझा हुआ सुधरा  नहीं ‘सैनी’||
sahi hai bilkul sachh . is mein  main ne ghalat kya kah diya. ye muh aur masoor ki daal. kuch to apni umr aur bachcho.n ka kyaal karo ji drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie

कहा जो आपसे   होगा   भलाई    में  कहा होगा |

अगर ख़ुद ने भी ग़लती की है तो मुकरा नहीं ‘सैनी’||
pataa nahin baahar kya gul khila ke aate ho. aur mujh se kitna sach kahte ho. ab kaun inquiry kare. maan leti hoo.n hamesh tumhaari baat.
mujhe maaloom hai kita sach kahtr ho tum.
 tumhaare jhoot pe bhi hamein pyaar aataa hai
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बड़ा  ही  नर्म  दिल  उसका हमेशा ही वो लोगों की |

हिमाकत  पे  शरारत  पे  कभी बिफरा नहीं ‘सैनी’||

ye koi badappan nahin hai tumhaari main hi tumhein kahti rahti hoon react na karo sabhi ko samjhe. ye credit mujhe jaata hai
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बड़ी ख़्वाहिश है कहने की  मगर  वो कह  नहीं पाता |

अदब में आज तक भी इस लिए निखरा नहीं ‘सैनी’||
kya khawahish hai. bol do. main bhi to sunoo zara. kya kami hai tumhaare adab mein. itni taaliyaan to milti hain. abb kyaa ek ek ghzal mein band baajaa wale ko bulwaaya jaaye. bade aaye ...
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कोई इसरार करदे तो  वो  झट  से  मान जाता  है |

बुरा थोड़ा सही  है  पर  गया गुज़रा  नहीं  ‘सैनी’||
 
ek dumm gaye guzre ho ji. apna koi waqaar hi nahin rakha hai. kabhi rindo.n ki mehfil mein kabhi juaariyon ki mehfil mein aur to aur ashiqo.n ko apne kalaam sunaa kar unhein jalaane pahu jaate ho. kiti baar manaa kiya. bazm-e-adab ko iss tarah kharaab naa karo. per meri sunte kahaan ho. sirf apni man maani.
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डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Bhanwar   se   muflisee   ke  aaj tak ubraa naheeN ‘saini’.
Magar  sach ye bhee hai ki toot kar bikhraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Lage   rahte  haiN   koshish   meN mujhe barbaad karne kee.
Pakaa  kar   khaa lenge  mujhko  are bakraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Shikaayat  ek   hee   rahtee   hai  meree jaan-e-jaanaa ko.
Abhee   tak   ishq   meN uljhaa hua sudhraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Kahaa   jo   aapse  hogaa    bhalaai   meN   kahaa   hogaa.
Agar khud ne bhee ghaltee kee hai to mukraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Badaa  hee   narm  dil   uskaa   hameshaa hee vo logoN kee.
Himaakat  pe  sharaarat   pe  kabhee bifraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Badee   khwaahish hai kahne kee magar vo kah naheeN paataa.
Adab   meN   aaj   tak bhee is liye nikhraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Koi   israar   karde  to    vo   jhat   se maan jaataa hai.
Buraa   thodaa   sahee hai par gayaa guzraa naheeN ‘saini’.

Dr.Surendra Saini




maine jo kahaa thik kahaa. apni baat se nahin jaao.n gi. tum ab sudhro na sudhro meri balaa se.
per aise hi khoobsurat aur dilchasp kalaam likhte raho ji..!
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«Reply #23 on: May 05, 2012, 01:15:50 AM »
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hasan bhai jaan shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: May 05, 2012, 05:58:19 AM »
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ghazal hain sakshq ki soorat, ki jiske dil mein zazbaa go
jo khud ko rakh nishaane par, chalaye teer joro se

bahut khub raha hai saini sahab, i have enjoyed reading this submission, reflects a clear and clean mind.
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«Reply #27 on: May 06, 2012, 10:01:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause too good Saini Ji !!
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