मुहब्बत का होगा असर धीरे -धीरे.-सुधीर अश्क

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मिलने    लगी   है   नज़र धीरे - धीरे.
मुहब्बत  का  होगा  असर धीरे  -धीरे.

सूनी  पड़ी  अपनी  दिल  की डगर पे,
आ   जायेगें   वो     मगर  धीरे -धीरे.

पा जाओगे तुम भी मंजिल यकीनन,
चलते   रहोगे      अगर   धीरे   -धीरे.

किसी को समझना नहीं इतना आसाँ,
समझना   पड़े   उम्र  भर  धीरे - धीरे.

दो पल की खुशियों की चाहत में यारों,
कटा  उम्र   का  यूँ  सफर   धीरे -धीरे.

-सुधीर अश्क

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MILNE LAGI HAI  NAZAR DHEERE-DHEERE.
MUHABBAT KA HOGA ASAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

SOONI PADI APNI DIL KI DAGAR PE,
AA JAAYENGE WO MAGAR  DHEERE-DHEERE.

PAA JAAOGE TUM BHI MANZIL YAKINAN,
CHALTE   RAHOGE AGAR  DHEERE-DHEERE.

KISI KO SAMJHNA NAHI ITNA AASAAN,
SAMJHNA PADE UMR BHAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

DO PAL KI KHUSHION KI CHAHAT ME YARON,
KATA UMR KA YUN SAFAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

-SUDHIR ASHQ.
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2013, 05:58:08 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on July 09, 2013, 05:54:21 PM
मिलने    लगी   है   नज़र धीरे - धीरे.
मुहब्बत  का  होगा  असर धीरे  -धीरे.
if you could writehoga mohabbat ka asar dheere-dheere rather sound melodious,sir
सूनी  पड़ी  अपनी  दिल  की डगर पे,
आ   जायेगें   वो     मगर  धीरे -धीरे.

पा जाओगे तुम भी मंजिल यकीनन,
चलते   रहोगे      अगर   धीरे   -धीरे.

किसी को समझना नहीं इतना आसाँ,
समझना   पड़े   उम्र  भर  धीरे - धीरे.

दो पल की खुशियों की चाहत में यारों,
कटा  उम्र   का  यूँ  सफर   धीरे -धीरे.

-सुधीर अश्क

superb,sir
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2013, 06:08:01 PM »
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 Applause
  nice , sudhir ji
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KISI KO SAMJHNA NAHI ITNA AASAAN,
SAMJHNA PADE UMR BHAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

DO PAL KI KHUSHION KI CHAHAT ME YARON,
KATA UMR KA YUN SAFAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

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bahut achchi peshkash sudhir ji. sabhi ashaar toh khoob hai par mujhe yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye. aapko hazaron dili daad is kalaam par.
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Sudhir Jee Aadaab... !


Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar meiN behad khoobsurti nazar aayi...

Aur yeH quoted ashaar toH bus laa jawaab rahe..
Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on July 09, 2013, 05:54:21 PM

किसी को समझना नहीं इतना आसाँ,
समझना   पड़े   उम्र  भर  धीरे - धीरे.

दो पल की खुशियों की चाहत में यारों,
कटा  उम्र   का  यूँ  सफर   धीरे -धीरे.

-सुधीर अश्क

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-SUDHIR ASHQ.
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किसी को समझना नहीं इतना आसाँ,
समझना   पड़े   उम्र  भर  धीरे - धीरे.

दो पल की खुशियों की चाहत में यारों,
कटा  उम्र   का  यूँ  सफर   धीरे -धीरे.

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waah waah sudhir jee..
Behad umda peshkash..happy9
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KISI KO SAMJHNA NAHI ITNA AASAAN,
SAMJHNA PADE UMR BHAR DHEERE-DHEERE.

Bahut Khoob Sudhirji
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