....मैं ज्यादा नहीं रुकने काबिल...

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....मैं ज्यादा नहीं रुकने काबिल...
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कुछ पल सह लो,सब्र रखो,
मैं ज्यादा नहीं रुकने काबिल...

उखड गयी पतवारे,सांस की,
नजर में दूर तक नहीं साहिल..

कभी समझे नहीं,राज यार के ,
राज-ए-यार से  ,रहे जाहिल..

वो करता रहा दुए,मेरे फनाही की,
हम रहे,उसकी मासूमियत के काइल..
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2011, 04:52:43 PM »
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Quote from: pratikdubey83 on December 26, 2011, 03:13:42 PM
....मैं ज्यादा नहीं रुकने काबिल...
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कुछ पल सह लो,सब्र रखो,
मैं ज्यादा नहीं रुकने काबिल...

उखड गयी पतवारे,सांस की,
नजर में दूर तक नहीं साहिल..

कभी समझे नहीं,राज यार के ,
राज-ए-यार से  ,रहे जाहिल..

वो करता रहा दुए,मेरे फनाही की,
हम रहे,उसकी मासूमियत के काइल..
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2011, 06:32:30 PM »
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Pratik Jee Aadaab!

Janab khayaal behad khoob rahe aur ashar bhi achche
lafzoN meiN piroye haiN aapne.. Usual Smile

Aik achchi kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye
likhate rahiye.. Khush rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khudaa Hafez.. Usual Smile   
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2011, 06:37:37 PM »
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bahoot Khoob Pratik ji.. bahoot umda !

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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2011, 05:06:10 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2011, 05:22:38 AM »
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waaaaaah bahoooot khooooooooob
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2011, 01:47:04 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob janaab
daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2011, 05:48:33 PM »
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AAAP SABHIIII KA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA.........

AAP KE PROTSAHAN AUR APNE PAN KI CHHAYA SADA AISE HI BANAYE RAKHIYE...

AUR KAHI BHI KOI GALTI NAZAR AYE...PLEASE MUJHE USE SUDHARNE ME MADAT KARE...MERI GAZLO ME KOI CORRECTION HO TO BATATE RAHIYE.....

DHANYAWAD
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