मैं भी एक आफताब रखता हूँ.-सुधीर अश्क

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प्यार में  इतनी ताब रखता हूँ.
उनकी खातिर गुलाब रखता हूँ.

उनको देखूँ तो देखता ही रहूँ,
ख्वाईशें बेहिसाब रखता हूँ.

तिश्नगी दिल की मिटाने के लिये,
पूरी बोतल शराब रखता हूँ.

जिन्दगी के हसीन ख्वाबों का,
लम्हा-लम्हा हिसाब रखता हूँ.

आपके हर सवाल का यारों,
सीधा- सीधा जवाब रखता हूँ.

वो अगर रोशनी के मालिक हैं,
मैं भी एक आफताब रखता हूँ.

एक दो शेर अपनी ग़ज़लों में,
अश्क मैं लाजवाब रखता हूँ.

-सुधीर अश्क


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PYAAR ME ITNE TAAB RAKHTA HUN.
UNKI KHATIR GULAAB RAKHTA HUN.

UNKO DEKHUN TO DEKHTA HI RAHUN,
KHWAISHEN BE-HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

TISHNAGI DIL KI MITAANE KE LIYE,
POORI BOTAL SHARAAB RAKHTA HUN.

ZINDGI KE HASEEN KHWAABON KA,
LAMHA-LAMHA HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AAPKE HAR SAWAAL KA YARON,
SEEDHA-SEEDHA ZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

WO AGAR ROSHNI KE MALIK HAIN,
MAIN BHI AIK AAFTAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AIK-DO SHER APNI GHAZALON ME,
ASHQ MAIN LAZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2013, 03:12:13 PM »
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bahut khoob ashk ji.achhi ghazal ke liye dili mibarakbaad.
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2013, 03:36:19 PM »
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Sudhir Jee Aadaab...!


Achchi kalaam kahi hai janab bahut khoob... bade hi khoob ashaar rahe.. Usual Smile

Aur is dafa bhi aapka maqta behad khoob raha... Usual Smile
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2013, 03:38:36 PM »
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sudhir saaheb, bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne, seedha sateek sa aur pyare alfaazoN se bhara hua, umeed karta huN aage v aapki kalam se aise hi ahche kalaam nikalte raheNge... aur meri taraf se, dheroN daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2013, 03:50:16 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 04, 2013, 02:53:23 PM
प्यार में  इतनी ताब रखता हूँ.
उनकी खातिर गुलाब रखता हूँ.

उनको देखूँ तो देखता ही रहूँ,
ख्वाईशें बेहिसाब रखता हूँ.

तिश्नगी दिल की मिटाने के लिये,
पूरी बोतल शराब रखता हूँ.

जिन्दगी के हसीन ख्वाबों का,
लम्हा-लम्हा हिसाब रखता हूँ.

आपके हर सवाल का यारों,
सीधा- सीधा जवाब रखता हूँ.

वो अगर रोशनी के मालिक हैं,
मैं भी एक आफताब रखता हूँ.

एक दो शेर अपनी ग़ज़लों में,
अश्क मैं लाजवाब रखता हूँ.

-सुधीर अश्क


*********************************

PYAAR ME ITNE TAAB RAKHTA HUN.
UNKI KHATIR GULAAB RAKHTA HUN.

UNKO DEKHUN TO DEKHTA HI RAHUN,
KHWAISHEN BE-HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

TISHNAGI DIL KI MITAANE KE LIYE,
POORI BOTAL SHARAAB RAKHTA HUN.

ZINDGI KE HASEEN KHWAABON KA,
LAMHA-LAMHA HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AAPKE HAR SAWAAL KA YARON,
SEEDHA-SEEDHA ZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

WO AGAR ROSHNI KE MALIK HAIN,
MAIN BHI AIK AAFTAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AIK-DO SHER APNI GHAZALON ME,
ASHQ MAIN LAZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ

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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2013, 03:51:02 PM »
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Wah Wah!! Sudheer Jee!!! Lajawaab Ghazal kahi hai aap ne. Har ashaar ek se bad kar ek hai. Mujhe bohat hi pasand aayi hai.
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2013, 04:59:11 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 04, 2013, 02:53:23 PM
प्यार में  इतनी ताब रखता हूँ.
उनकी खातिर गुलाब रखता हूँ.

उनको देखूँ तो देखता ही रहूँ,
ख्वाईशें बेहिसाब रखता हूँ.

तिश्नगी दिल की मिटाने के लिये,
पूरी बोतल शराब रखता हूँ.

जिन्दगी के हसीन ख्वाबों का,
लम्हा-लम्हा हिसाब रखता हूँ.

आपके हर सवाल का यारों,
सीधा- सीधा जवाब रखता हूँ.

वो अगर रोशनी के मालिक हैं,
मैं भी एक आफताब रखता हूँ.

एक दो शेर अपनी ग़ज़लों में,
अश्क मैं लाजवाब रखता हूँ.

-सुधीर अश्क


*********************************

PYAAR ME ITNE TAAB RAKHTA HUN.
UNKI KHATIR GULAAB RAKHTA HUN.

UNKO DEKHUN TO DEKHTA HI RAHUN,
KHWAISHEN BE-HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

TISHNAGI DIL KI MITAANE KE LIYE,
POORI BOTAL SHARAAB RAKHTA HUN.

ZINDGI KE HASEEN KHWAABON KA,
LAMHA-LAMHA HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AAPKE HAR SAWAAL KA YARON,
SEEDHA-SEEDHA ZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

WO AGAR ROSHNI KE MALIK HAIN,
MAIN BHI AIK AAFTAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AIK-DO SHER APNI GHAZALON ME,
ASHQ MAIN LAZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ


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sudheer  bhai  ,  very  nice ......
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kya baat hai sudhirji. is baar toh bahut hi achchi ghazal kahi hai. sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai. bahut khoob. likhte rahiye. aapko meri dili mubarakbad qubool ho..
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Waah waah Sudhir jee bahut hi khoob, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2013, 12:09:31 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 04, 2013, 02:53:23 PM
प्यार में  इतनी ताब रखता हूँ.
उनकी खातिर गुलाब रखता हूँ.

उनको देखूँ तो देखता ही रहूँ,
ख्वाईशें बेहिसाब रखता हूँ.

तिश्नगी दिल की मिटाने के लिये,
पूरी बोतल शराब रखता हूँ.

जिन्दगी के हसीन ख्वाबों का,
लम्हा-लम्हा हिसाब रखता हूँ.

आपके हर सवाल का यारों,
सीधा- सीधा जवाब रखता हूँ.

वो अगर रोशनी के मालिक हैं,
मैं भी एक आफताब रखता हूँ.

एक दो शेर अपनी ग़ज़लों में,
अश्क मैं लाजवाब रखता हूँ.

-सुधीर अश्क


*********************************

PYAAR ME ITNE TAAB RAKHTA HUN.
UNKI KHATIR GULAAB RAKHTA HUN.

UNKO DEKHUN TO DEKHTA HI RAHUN,
KHWAISHEN BE-HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

TISHNAGI DIL KI MITAANE KE LIYE,
POORI BOTAL SHARAAB RAKHTA HUN.

ZINDGI KE HASEEN KHWAABON KA,
LAMHA-LAMHA HISAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AAPKE HAR SAWAAL KA YARON,
SEEDHA-SEEDHA ZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

WO AGAR ROSHNI KE MALIK HAIN,
MAIN BHI AIK AAFTAAB RAKHTA HUN.

AIK-DO SHER APNI GHAZALON ME,
ASHQ MAIN LAZAWAB RAKHTA HUN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ







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