ये हसीन ख्वाब छोडिये.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on November 11, 2014, 04:36:18 PM
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एक गज़ल मिसरा-ए-तरह
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छोडिये जनाब छोडिये.
ये हसीन ख्वाब छोडिये.

आप उम्रदार शख्स हैं,
आदतें खराब छोडिये.

उम्र ये छिपती कहाँ,
बालों से खिज़ाब छोडिये.

बाखुदा मैं डरता नहीं,
बेवज़ह का दाब छोडिये.

इश्क में न जाने कितनी हुईं,
ज़िन्दगी खराब छोडिये.

इश्क में भी है इक नशा,
छोडिये शराब छोडिये.

ज़िन्दगी में और भी हैं गम,
इश्क का हिसाब छोडिये.

जो अना बेचकर के मिले,
अश्क वो खिताब छोडिये.

-सुधीर अश्क

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CHHODIYE JANAAB CHHODIYE.
YE HASEEN KHWAAB CHHODIYE.

AAP UMR DAAR SHAKS HAIN,
AADATEN KHARAAB CHHODIYE.

UMR YE CHHIPTI KAHAN,
BAALON SE KHIJAAB CHHODIYE.

BAKHUDA MAIN DARTA NAHI,
BEWAJAH KA DAAB CHHODIYE.

ISHQ ME N JAANE KITNI HUI,
ZINDAGI KHARAAB CHHODIYE.

ISHQ ME BHI HAI IK NASHA,
CHHODIYE SHARAAB CHHODIYE.

ZINDAGI ME AUR BHI HAIN GUM,
ISHQ KA HISAAB CHHODIYE.

JO ANA BECHKAR KE MILE,
ASHQ WO KHITAAB CHHODIYE.


-SUDHIR ASHQ
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2014, 05:23:28 PM »
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dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaad
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waah waah bahut khoob.
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bahut hee umdah, dheron daad.
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ek rau ke saath dheron daaad
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2014, 03:22:14 AM »
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bahut khub dhero daa.................d
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Sudhir Ashq saheb,
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Bahut umda ghazal kahi hai, meri daad qubool farmayein
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wah wah....bahut khub Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2014, 08:15:07 AM »
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वाह.....वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही खूब.....

जो अना बेचकर के मिलता हो,
अश्क वो खिताब छोडिये.

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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on November 11, 2014, 04:36:18 PM
एक गज़ल मिसरा-ए-तरह
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छोडिये जनाब छोडिये.
ये हसीन ख्वाब छोडिये.

आप उम्रदार शख्स हैं,
आदतें खराब छोडिये.

उम्र हरगिज़ छिपती नहीं,
बालों से खिज़ाब छोडिये.

बाखुदा मैं डरता नहीं,
बेवज़ह का दाब छोडिये.

इश्क में न जाने कितनी हुईं,
ज़िन्दगी खराब छोडिये.

इश्क में भी है इक नशा,
छोडिये शराब छोडिये.

ज़िन्दगी में और भी हैं गम,
इश्क का हिसाब छोडिये.

जो अना बेच के मिले,
अश्क वो खिताब छोडिये.

-सुधीर अश्क

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CHHODIYE JANAAB CHHODIYE.
YE HASEEN KHWAAB CHHODIYE.

AAP UMR DARAAZ icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower SHAKS HAIN,
AADATEN KHARAAB CHHODIYE.

UMR HARGIZ CHHIPTI NAHI,
BAALON SE KHIJAAB CHHODIYE.

BAKHUDA MAIN DARTA NAHI,
BEWAJAH KA DAAB CHHODIYE.

ISHQ ME N JAANE KITNI HUI,
ZINDAGI KHARAAB CHHODIYE.

ISHQ ME BHI HAI IK NASHA,
CHHODIYE SHARAAB CHHODIYE.

ZINDAGI ME AUR BHI HAIN GUM,
ISHQ KA HISAAB CHHODIYE.

JO ANA BECH KE MILE,
ASHQ WO KHITAAB CHHODIYE.


-SUDHIR ASHQ









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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2014, 11:47:02 AM »
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bahut khub.....
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