लडखडाओगे,न पूछेगें जमाने वाले.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 27, 2013, 06:35:56 PM
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यूं पिलाने को पिला देगें,पिलाने वाले.
लडखडाओगे,न पूछेगें जमाने वाले.

ये बताओ,कभी देखी है तुमने भी मंजिल,
तुम जो आये हो,मुझे राह दिखाने वाले.

बेवफा वो हैं,मगर इतने भी नहीं,
मुझको न याद करें,मुझको भुलाने वाले.

दिल मेरा दिल नहीं,जख्मों की नुमाइश है,
इक नज्ञर देख ले,तू रूठ के जाने वाले.
              - सुधीर अश्क
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2013, 07:46:53 PM »
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यूं पिलाने को पिला देगें,पिलाने वाले.
लडखडाओगे,न पूछेगें जमाने वाले.

ये बताओ,कभी देखी है तुमने भी मंजिल,
तुम जो आये हो,मुझे राह दिखाने वाले.

बेवफा वो हैं,मगर इतने भी नहीं,
मुझको न याद करें,मुझको भुलाने वाले.

दिल मेरा दिल नहीं,जख्मों की नुमाइश है,
इक नज्ञर देख ले,तू रूठ के जाने वाले.
              - सुधीर अश्क



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यूं पिलाने को पिला देगें,पिलाने वाले.
लडखडाओगे,न पूछेगें जमाने वाले.

ये बताओ,कभी देखी है तुमने भी मंजिल,
तुम जो आये हो,मुझे राह दिखाने वाले.

बेवफा वो हैं,मगर इतने भी नहीं,
मुझको न याद करें,मुझको भुलाने वाले.

दिल मेरा दिल नहीं,जख्मों की नुमाइश है,
इक नज्ञर देख ले,तू रूठ के जाने वाले.
              - सुधीर अश्क



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