शाम ढलते ढलते

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कल फिर सहर मे होगी, मुलाकात चलते चलते
सूरज कह गया था ये, शाम ढलते ढलते

पलकों मे समेटे रखा, मरने नही दिया,
ख्वाब सभी सच हो गये आँखों मे पलते पलते,

तासीर थी जुदा मेरी, कुछ तेरा असर हुआ,
पीलापन आ ही जाता है उबटन को मलते मलते

बाति खुद जली, खोया तेल का वज़ूद
रात बहूत मश-हूर हुआ, चिराग जलते जलते,

है "बेक़रार" उदास, शाखों को देख-कर
वक़्त तो लगता ही है फलों को फलते फलते,,,

kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2011, 04:56:21 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 03, 2011, 04:24:56 AM
कल फिर सहर मे होगी, मुलाकात चलते चलते
सूरज कह गया था ये, शाम ढलते ढलते

पलकों मे समेटे रखा, मरने नही दिया,
ख्वाब सभी सच हो गये आँखों मे पलते पलते,

तासीर थी जुदा मेरी, कुछ तेरा असर हुआ,
पीलापन आ ही जाता है उबटन को मलते मलते

बाति खुद जली, खोया तेल का वज़ूद
रात बहूत मश-हूर हुआ, चिराग जलते जलते,

है "बेक़रार" उदास, शाखों को देख-कर
वक़्त तो लगता ही है फलों को फलते फलते,,,

kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte


Wah..!! Bahut Khoob..  Usual Smile Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause
Bekarar ji lekin pehle Huh?Huh??? mark kyon hai..?
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Baddiya peshkash Bekarar ji,excellent  Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2011, 08:22:18 AM »
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कल फिर सहर मे होगी, मुलाकात चलते चलते
सूरज कह गया था ये, शाम ढलते ढलते

पलकों मे समेटे रखा, मरने नही दिया,
ख्वाब सभी सच हो गये आँखों मे पलते पलते,

तासीर थी जुदा मेरी, कुछ तेरा असर हुआ,
पीलापन आ ही जाता है उबटन को मलते मलते

बाति खुद जली, खोया तेल का वज़ूद
रात बहूत मश-हूर हुआ, चिराग जलते जलते,

है "बेक़रार" उदास, शाखों को देख-कर
वक़्त तो लगता ही है फलों को फलते फलते,,,

kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte

bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2011, 09:14:50 AM »
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khoob!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2011, 10:05:48 AM »
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Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab bahut achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe .... Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
         



Quote from: bekarar on August 03, 2011, 04:24:56 AM


kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

Achcha Matla kaha janab daad daad Usual Smile         

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

Kia kahne janab achcha khayaal hai.. Usual Smile         

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

Hmmm ? Kuch naya khayaal hai.. achcha hai.. Usual Smile         

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob achcha sher
hai daad daad Usual Smile         

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte

Achcha Maqta kaha hai janab ... daad
Sher aur bhi behtar ho sakta tha .. Usual Smile         



Achchi kalaam par dil se daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Sahaab likhte rahiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2011, 11:43:56 AM »
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कल फिर सहर मे होगी, मुलाकात चलते चलते
सूरज कह गया था ये, शाम ढलते ढलते

पलकों मे समेटे रखा, मरने नही दिया,
ख्वाब सभी सच हो गये आँखों मे पलते पलते,

तासीर थी जुदा मेरी, कुछ तेरा असर हुआ,
पीलापन आ ही जाता है उबटन को मलते मलते

बाति खुद जली, खोया तेल का वज़ूद
रात बहूत मश-हूर हुआ, चिराग जलते जलते,

है "बेक़रार" उदास, शाखों को देख-कर
वक़्त तो लगता ही है फलों को फलते फलते,,,

kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte

Huemsha Ki tarah bahutttttttttt Khooooooob Sanjeev Bro..

har ek A'shaar lajwaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Wah..!! Bahut Khoob..  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Bekarar ji lekin pehle Huh?Huh??? mark kyon hai..?

bahoot shukriya Mohammad touhid ji...aapne padha aur housla-afzai ki.....aur aapne jis mark ki baat ki hai..wo mujhe najar nahi aa raha,,,,
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Quote from: bekarar on August 03, 2011, 04:24:56 AM
कल फिर सहर मे होगी, मुलाकात चलते चलते
सूरज कह गया था ये, शाम ढलते ढलते

पलकों मे समेटे रखा, मरने नही दिया,
ख्वाब सभी सच हो गये आँखों मे पलते पलते,

तासीर थी जुदा मेरी, कुछ तेरा असर हुआ,
पीलापन आ ही जाता है उबटन को मलते मलते

बाति खुद जली, खोया तेल का वज़ूद
रात बहूत मश-हूर हुआ, चिराग जलते जलते,

है "बेक़रार" उदास, शाखों को देख-कर
वक़्त तो लगता ही है फलों को फलते फलते,,,

kal fir sahar me hogi, mulakaat chalte chalte
suraj kah gaya tha ye, shaam dhalte dhalte

palkon me samete rakha, marne nahi diya,
khwab sabhi sach ho gaye aankhon me palte palte,

taasir thi juda meri, kuch tera asar hua,
peelapan aa hi jaata hai ubtan ko malte malte

baati khud jali, khoya tel ka wazood
raat bahoot mash-hoor hua, chirag jalte jalte,

hai "beqrar" udaas, shakhon ko dekh-kar
waqt to lagta hi hai falon ko falte falte
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 03, 2011, 10:05:48 AM
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab bahut achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe .... Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
         



Achchi kalaam par dil se daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Sahaab likhte rahiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


parwaz sahab...aapki dariyadili dekh kar rashq hota hai....har adna si koshish ko aapki taarif khaas bana deti hai.....bahoot bahoot shukriya janab.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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har ek A'shaar lajwaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

is pyare se comment ke liye dil se abhar...khwaish bhai   Usual Smile
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