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«Reply #16 on: March 24, 2012, 07:05:18 AM » |
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Hasan saheb bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2012, 08:22:37 AM » |
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Tanowar ji shukriya
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«Reply #18 on: March 24, 2012, 09:46:30 AM » |
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Pramod ji shukriya
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«Reply #19 on: March 24, 2012, 10:45:29 AM » |
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Bahut hi khoob, bahut bahut mubaarke, dil khush ho gaya Please correct me, if I am wrong 1. "vagranaa" should not be "varna" 2. "apne" should not be "apan" or "hum bhi" 3. "amn" should not be "aman" सितमगर आज तक देखा नहीं एसा ज़माने में |
गुज़ारी ज़िंदगी सारी जिसे हमने मनाने में ||
अदालत में मुक़दमे की तरह होती है उल्फ़त भी |
गुज़र जाते हैं कितने साल इक इंसाफ़ पाने में ||
कोई सुनना अगर चाहे तो उसको ही सुनाते हैं |
वगरना हमको दिलचस्पी नहीं कुछ भी सुनाने में ||
अगरचे आज तक अपनी कभी क़ीमत नहीं आंकी |
मगर इतना तो तय है हम न बिकते चार आने में ||
क़लम को छोड़ कर अपने उबर सकते थे ग़ुरबत से |
अगर हम ध्यान दे लेते ज़रा दौलत कमाने में ||
ज़रा दो बोल मीठे बोल कर तो देखिये सबसे |
नहीं क़ीमत कोई लगती किसी से प्यार पाने में ||
कभी किरदार को हमने नहीं समझा बुजुर्गों के |
लगे रहते हैं हम तो सिर्फ़ उनके बुत बनाने में ||
तरफ़दारी हमेशा अम्न की हम करते आये हैं |
हमें तो बस मज़ा आता है रिश्तों को बचाने में ||
सताया किस तरह हमको हमारे अपने लोगों ने |
बड़ी तक़लीफ़ होती है ये ‘सैनी’ को बताने में ||
डा०सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Sitamgar aaj tak dekhaa naheeN esaa zamaane meN. Guzaaree zindagee saaree jise hamne manaane meN.
Adaalat meN muqadme kee tarah hotee hai ulfat bhee. Guzar jaate haiN kitne saal ik insaaf paane meN.
Koi sunnaa agar chahe to usko hee sunaate haiN. Vagranaa hamko dilchaspee naheeN kuchh bhee sunaane meN.
Agarche aaj tak apnee kabhee qeemat naheeN aankee. Magar itnaa to tay hai ham n bikte chaar aane meN.
Qalam ko chhod kar apne ubar sakte the ghurbat se. Agar ham dhyaan de lete zaraa daulat kamaane meN.
Zaraa do bol meethe bol kar to dekhiye sabse. NaheeN qeemat koi lagtee kisee se pyaar paane meN.
Kabhee kirdaar ko hamne naheeN samjhaa buzurgoN ke. Lage rahte haiN ham to sirf unke but banaane meN.
Tarafdaaree hameshaa amn kee ham karte aaye haiN. HameN to bas mazaa aataa hai rishtoN ko bachaane meN.
Sataayaa kis tarah hamko hamaare apne logoN ne. Badee taqleef hotee hai ye ‘saini’ ko bataane meN.
Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #20 on: March 24, 2012, 11:44:55 AM » |
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«Reply #21 on: March 24, 2012, 12:31:15 PM » |
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Pankaj ji shukriya
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«Reply #22 on: March 24, 2012, 03:39:55 PM » |
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mukesh ji shukriya
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«Reply #23 on: March 25, 2012, 01:49:31 AM » |
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qais ji shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: March 25, 2012, 08:25:44 AM » |
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shihab ji shukriya
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«Reply #27 on: March 25, 2012, 10:00:19 AM » |
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Saini Sahab,
Achchha matla kaha hai...
baki ke she'r bhi khoob hain...waah waah
Dili mubaarkbaad kubool farmaayen. Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #28 on: March 25, 2012, 01:49:10 PM » |
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mann.mann ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #29 on: March 26, 2012, 04:06:23 AM » |
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Sky tears ji shukriya
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