सोच के दीप जला कर देखो

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चश्मा नया लगा कर देखो,
पर्दें ज़रा हटा कर देखो !!
भोर हुई, जब भी हम जागे,
अपनी नियत जगा कर देखो !!


वो पथ्थर भी शायद पिंघले,
उसको गले लगा कर देखो !!
मसले सब हल हो जायेंगे,
सोच के दीप जला कर देखो !!

अब्बू से कहते हो अक्सर,
सूट नया सिला कर देखो !!
कितनी आसाँ है ये दुन्या,
घर से बाहर जा कर देखो !!

कैसे जलते हैं ये जंगल,
तूफानों में आकर देखो !!
फिर शायद रौशन हो जाओ,
हवा से हाथ मिला कर देखो !!

(Title सोच के दीप जला कर देखो is taken from  तरही मुशायरा organized by "Aaj ki Ghazal" in 2010
मिसरा "सोच के दीप जला कर देखो" शायर जनाब मुहम्मद मुनीर ख़ाँ नियाज़ी की ग़ज़ल से लिया गया है।
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2014, 12:39:27 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2014, 03:53:11 AM »
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चश्मा नया लगा कर देखो,
पर्दें ज़रा हटा कर देखो !!
भोर हुई, जब भी हम जागे,
अपनी नियत जगा कर देखो !!


वो पथ्थर भी शायद पिंघले,
उसको गले लगा कर देखो !!
मसले सब हल हो जायेंगे,
सोच के दीप जला कर देखो !!

अब्बू से कहते हो अक्सर,
सूट नया सिला कर देखो !!
कितनी आसाँ है ये दुन्या,
घर से बाहर जा कर देखो !!

कैसे जलते हैं ये जंगल,
तूफानों में आकर देखो !!
फिर शायद रौशन हो जाओ,
हवा से हाथ मिला कर देखो !!

(Title सोच के दीप जला कर देखो is taken from  तरही मुशायरा organized by "Aaj ki Ghazal" in 2010
मिसरा "सोच के दीप जला कर देखो" शायर जनाब मुहम्मद मुनीर ख़ाँ नियाज़ी की ग़ज़ल से लिया गया है।
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चश्मा नया लगा कर देखो,
पर्दें ज़रा हटा कर देखो !!
भोर हुई, जब भी हम जागे,
अपनी नियत जगा कर देखो !!


वो पथ्थर भी शायद पिंघले,
उसको गले लगा कर देखो !!
मसले सब हल हो जायेंगे,
सोच के दीप जला कर देखो !!

अब्बू से कहते हो अक्सर,
सूट नया सिला कर देखो !!
कितनी आसाँ है ये दुन्या,
घर से बाहर जा कर देखो !!

कैसे जलते हैं ये जंगल,
तूफानों में आकर देखो !!
फिर शायद रौशन हो जाओ,
हवा से हाथ मिला कर देखो !!

(Title सोच के दीप जला कर देखो is taken from  तरही मुशायरा organized by "Aaj ki Ghazal" in 2010
मिसरा "सोच के दीप जला कर देखो" शायर जनाब मुहम्मद मुनीर ख़ाँ नियाज़ी की ग़ज़ल से लिया गया है।
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2014, 11:18:52 AM »
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