हम तिरे गांव में आ गये.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on April 04, 2013, 03:41:57 PM
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दर्द की छांव में आ गये.
हम तिरे गांव में आ गये.

छाले जो तेरे हाथों में थे,
वो मेरे पांव में आ गये.

वो तराने जो कुहू-2 में थे,
कौए की कांव में आ गये.

मेरी शह,मात भी मुझको ही,
कैसे हम दांव में आ गये.

तिश्ननगी कम हो कुछ इसलिये,
धूप से छांव में आ गये.

   -सुधीर अश्क
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Dard ki chhaanw me aa gaye.
Hum tere Gaanw me aa gaye.

Chhale jo tere hathon me the,
Wo mere paanw me aa gaye.

Wo tarane jo kuhu-kuhu me the,
Kauve ki kaanw me aa gaye.

Meri Shah aur maat bhi mujhko hi,
Kaise hum danw me aa gaye.

Tishnagi kum ho kuchh isliye,
Dhoop se chhanw me aa gaye.

        -SUDHIR ASHQ
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 04, 2013, 03:41:57 PM
दर्द की छांव में आ गये.
हम तिरे गांव में आ गये.

छाले जो तेरे हाथों में थे,
वो मेरे पांव में आ गये. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

वो तराने जो कुहू-2 में थे,
कौए की कांव में आ गये. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

मेरी शह,मात भी मुझको ही,
कैसे हम दांव में आ गये.

तिश्ननगी कम हो कुछ इसलिये,
धूप से छांव में आ गये.

   -सुधीर अश्क
**********************

Dard ki chhaanw me aa gaye.
Hum tere Gaanw me aa gaye.

Chhale jo tere hathon me the,
Wo mere paanw me aa gaye.

Wo tarane jo kuhu-kuhu me the,
Kauve ki kaanw me aa gaye.

Meri Shah aur maat bhi mujhko hi,
Kaise hum danw me aa gaye.

Tishnagi kum ho kuchh isliye,
Dhoop se chhanw me aa gaye.

        -SUDHIR ASHQ



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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2013, 05:18:25 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 04, 2013, 03:41:57 PM
दर्द की छांव में आ गये.
हम तिरे गांव में आ गये.

छाले जो तेरे हाथों में थे,
वो मेरे पांव में आ गये.

वो तराने जो कुहू-2 में थे,
कौए की कांव में आ गये.

मेरी शह,मात भी मुझको ही,
कैसे हम दांव में आ गये.

तिश्ननगी कम हो कुछ इसलिये,
धूप से छांव में आ गये.

   -सुधीर अश्क
**********************

Dard ki chhaanw me aa gaye.
Hum tere Gaanw me aa gaye.

Chhale jo tere hathon me the,
Wo mere paanw me aa gaye.

Wo tarane jo kuhu-kuhu me the,
Kauve ki kaanw me aa gaye.

Meri Shah aur maat bhi mujhko hi,
Kaise hum danw me aa gaye.

Tishnagi kum ho kuchh isliye,
Dhoop se chhanw me aa gaye.

        -SUDHIR ASHQ



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So Cute.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Sudhir Ashk saheb,
                   bahut umda kalaam kaha hai aapne..................
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 04, 2013, 03:41:57 PM
दर्द की छांव में आ गये.
हम तिरे गांव में आ गये.
main shahr mein rahti hoon aur yahaan zakhm aur dard dono saath rahte hain icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
छाले जो तेरे हाथों में थे,
वो मेरे पांव में आ गये.
transformation ka iss se badaa jaadoo main ne nahin dekha ji ---TRANSFORMATION  mein bhi nahin Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
वो तराने जो कुहू-2 में थे,
कौए की कांव में आ गये.
isliye aaj-kal tumhaari awaaz mujhe achi lagti hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
मेरी शह,मात भी मुझको ही,
कैसे हम दांव में आ गये.
nahin samjhi ye kya hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
तिश्ननगी कम हो कुछ इसलिये,
धूप से छांव में आ गये.
phir bhi pyaas to rahti hi hai. lekin thand mein to aur bhi pyaas nahin lagni chaahiye phir bhi paani peete hain
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   -सुधीर अश्क
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Dard ki chhaanw me aa gaye.
Hum tere Gaanw me aa gaye.

Chhale jo tere hathon me the,
Wo mere paanw me aa gaye.

Wo tarane jo kuhu-kuhu me the,
Kauve ki kaanw me aa gaye.

Meri Shah aur maat bhi mujhko hi,
Kaise hum danw me aa gaye.

Tishnagi kum ho kuchh isliye,
Dhoop se chhanw me aa gaye.

        -SUDHIR ASHQ


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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2013, 10:39:16 AM »
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Very Heart Touching composition Likhi Hai Sudhir Ji. Dheron Daad. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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