हम बन गये हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है.-सुधीर अश्क

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वो  पा  गये   मुकाम,मुकद्दर  की  बात  है.
हमको मिला न नाम,मुकद्दर  की बात  है.

वो  जगमगा  रहें  हैं,किसी   आफताब  से,
हम  बन  गये  हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है.

दोनों  जहाँ  की  प्यास  हमारे  नसीब  में,
उनके  लबों  पे   जाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

पढ-पढ  के  महफिलों  में,मेरे कलाम ही,
उनको  मिले   इनाम, मुकद्दर  की बात है.

ता-उम्र की मेहनत-ओ-मशक्कत के बावज़ूद,
ये   गर्दिशे   अय्याम,  मुकद्दर की बात है.

रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ  अश्क  तिरा  नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

-सुधीर अश्क

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WO  PAA  GAYE  MUKAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.
HUMKO  MILA   NA NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

WO  JAGMAGAA  RAHE  HAIN,KISI  AAFTAAB   SE,
HUM BAN GAYE HAIN SHAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

DONO   JAHAN  KI  PYAAS,HUMAARE  NASEEB  ME,
UNKE   LABON  PE   JAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

PAD-PAD  KE  MAHFILON  ME,MERE   KALAAM  HI,
UNKO   MILE      INAAM, MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

TAA-UMR  KI  MEHNAT-O-MASHAKKAT  KE BAVAJOOD,
YE   GARDISH-E-AYYAAM,MUKADDAR   KI BAAT HAI.

RUKHSAT KE WAQT HI SAHI,PER AAYAA LABON PER,
AIE  ASHQ  TERA   NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

-SUDHIR ASHQ
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2013, 04:01:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on December 16, 2013, 03:56:42 PM
वो  पा  गये   मुकाम,मुकद्दर  की  बात  है.
हमको मिला न नाम,मुकद्दर  की बात  है.

वो  जगमगा  रहें  हैं,किसी   आफताब  से,
हम  बन  गये  हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है.

दोनों  जहाँ  की  प्यास  हमारे  नसीब  में,
उनके  लबों  पे   जाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

पढ-पढ  के  महफिलों  में,मेरे कलाम ही,
उनको  मिले   इनाम, मुकद्दर  की बात है.

ता-उम्र की महनत-ओ-मशक्कत के बावज़ूद,
ये   गर्दिशे   अय्याम,  मुकद्दर की बात है.

रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ  अश्क  तिरा  नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

-सुधीर अश्क

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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2013, 04:06:44 PM »
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वो  पा  गये   मुकाम,मुकद्दर  की  बात  है.
हमको मिला न नाम,मुकद्दर  की बात  है.

वो  जगमगा  रहें  हैं,किसी   आफताब  से,
हम  बन  गये  हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है.

दोनों  जहाँ  की  प्यास  हमारे  नसीब  में,
उनके  लबों  पे   जाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

पढ-पढ  के  महफिलों  में,मेरे कलाम ही,
उनको  मिले   इनाम, मुकद्दर  की बात है.

ता-उम्र की महनत-ओ-मशक्कत के बावज़ूद,
ये   गर्दिशे   अय्याम,  मुकद्दर की बात है.

रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ  अश्क  तिरा  नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

-सुधीर अश्क
Ashq ji bhut umda ghazal peash kari hai ap nay Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on December 16, 2013, 04:06:44 PM
Ashq ji bhut umda ghazal peash kari hai ap nay Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Waah Sudhir saheb , Bahut khoob . Pahle 4 sher mukammal Bahr mein bhi hain . Bahut bahut mubarakbad aur duaaein .
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Waah Sudhir saheb , Bahut khoob . Pahle 4 sher mukammal Bahr mein bhi hain . Bahut bahut mubarakbad aur duaaein .

Shukriya Hasan Sir,
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waaahhhh, bahut bahut khoob Sudhir Jee...
Ek RAU ke sath Dheron daad kabool karein....
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Shukriya Musaahib ji.Aapka aabhaaree hun.
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waah waah bahut khoob

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bahut bahut khoob super............. Thumbs UP

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aapka likha hamen padhne ko mila
hum samajhte hain mukaddar ki baat hai
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