हम बन गये हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है.-सुधीर अश्क

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«Reply #15 on: December 16, 2013, 07:48:32 PM »
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aapka likha hamen padhne ko mila
hum samajhte hain mukaddar ki baat hai
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«Reply #16 on: December 16, 2013, 07:51:31 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob super............. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #17 on: December 16, 2013, 09:26:48 PM »
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वो  पा  गये   मुकाम,मुकद्दर  की  बात  है.
हमको मिला न नाम,मुकद्दर  की बात  है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

वो  जगमगा  रहें  हैं,किसी   आफताब  से,
हम  बन  गये  हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

दोनों  जहाँ  की  प्यास  हमारे  नसीब  में,
उनके  लबों  पे   जाम, मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

पढ-पढ  के  महफिलों  में,मेरे कलाम ही,
उनको  मिले   इनाम, मुकद्दर  की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ता-उम्र की मेहनत-ओ-मशक्कत के बावज़ूद,
ये   गर्दिशे   अय्याम,  मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ  अश्क  तिरा  नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Sudhir sir,
i hv'nt word to comment.
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«Reply #18 on: December 17, 2013, 12:01:01 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khoobsoorat ghazal Sudhir jee, bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #19 on: December 17, 2013, 03:40:10 AM »
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रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ अश्क तिरा नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है.

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #20 on: December 17, 2013, 01:03:04 PM »
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वो  पा  गये   मुकाम,मुकद्दर  की  बात  है.
हमको मिला न नाम,मुकद्दर  की बात  है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

वो  जगमगा  रहें  हैं,किसी   आफताब  से,
हम  बन  गये  हैं शाम,मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

दोनों  जहाँ  की  प्यास  हमारे  नसीब  में,
उनके  लबों  पे   जाम, मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

पढ-पढ  के  महफिलों  में,मेरे कलाम ही,
उनको  मिले   इनाम, मुकद्दर  की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ता-उम्र की मेहनत-ओ-मशक्कत के बावज़ूद,
ये   गर्दिशे   अय्याम,  मुकद्दर की बात है. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

रूखसत के वक्त ही सही,पर आया लबों पर,
ऐ  अश्क  तिरा  नाम, मुकद्दर की बात है. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Sudhir sir,
i hv'nt word to comment.


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«Reply #21 on: December 17, 2013, 01:06:10 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waaaaaah waaaaaah sudhir sahab kya kehne ish ghazla ke.. bahut hi khooooob.. Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: December 17, 2013, 01:33:15 PM »
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WO  PAA  GAYE  MUKAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.
HUMKO  MILA   NA NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

WO  JAGMAGAA  RAHE  HAIN,KISI  AAFTAAB   SE,
HUM BAN GAYE HAIN SHAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

DONO   JAHAN  KI  PYAAS,HUMAARE  NASEEB  ME,
UNKE   LABON  PE   JAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

PAD-PAD  KE  MAHFILON  ME,MERE   KALAAM  HI,
UNKO   MILE      INAAM, MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

TAA-UMR  KI  MEHNAT-O-MASHAKKAT  KE BAVAJOOD,
YE   GARDISH-E-AYYAAM,MUKADDAR   KI BAAT HAI.

RUKHSAT KE WAQT HI SAHI,PER AAYAA LABON PER,
AIE  ASHQ  TERA   NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sudhir ji... kamaal ki peshkash rahi... sabhi ashaar bahut khoooooob rahe... dili daaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega...
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«Reply #23 on: December 17, 2013, 01:35:16 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khoobsoorat ghazal Sudhir jee, bahut bahut mubarakbaad.

Shukriya Iftekhaar ji.
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«Reply #24 on: December 17, 2013, 01:36:01 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waaaaaah waaaaaah sudhir sahab kya kehne ish ghazla ke.. bahut hi khooooob.. Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Tauheed Sahab.
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«Reply #25 on: December 17, 2013, 01:37:09 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya


WO  PAA  GAYE  MUKAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.
HUMKO  MILA   NA NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

WO  JAGMAGAA  RAHE  HAIN,KISI  AAFTAAB   SE,
HUM BAN GAYE HAIN SHAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

DONO   JAHAN  KI  PYAAS,HUMAARE  NASEEB  ME,
UNKE   LABON  PE   JAAM,MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

PAD-PAD  KE  MAHFILON  ME,MERE   KALAAM  HI,
UNKO   MILE      INAAM, MUKADDAR KI BAAT HAI.

TAA-UMR  KI  MEHNAT-O-MASHAKKAT  KE BAVAJOOD,
YE   GARDISH-E-AYYAAM,MUKADDAR   KI BAAT HAI.

RUKHSAT KE WAQT HI SAHI,PER AAYAA LABON PER,
AIE  ASHQ  TERA   NAAM,MUKADDAR  KI BAAT HAI.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sudhir ji... kamaal ki peshkash rahi... sabhi ashaar bahut khoooooob rahe... dili daaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega...

Shukriya Aqsh ji.
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«Reply #26 on: December 22, 2013, 12:57:33 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
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