ग़र इंसा....अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

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ग़र इंसा कोशिश करता रहे बार बार
दुनिया की किसी शै से नहीं सकता वो हार


ग़र इंसा मन में रखे हमेशा अच्छे विचार  
रास्ते का सन भी बन सकता है गले का हार


ग़र इंसा याद रखे अपनी जननी को हर बार
हो नहीं सकता किसी नारी का दामन तार तार


ग़र इंसा न रुके बढ़ाता ही रहे कदम दो चार
किसी भी दरिया को कर सकता है वो पार


ग़र इंसा लुटाता रहे बस प्यार ही प्यार
ख़ुदा भी बनके “मीत” आ जायेगा उसके द्वार



Gar Insaan Koshish Karta Rahe Baar Baar
Duniya Ki Kisi Shaii Se Nahi Sakta Vo Haar


Gar Insaan Man Mein Rakhe Hamesha Achche Vichaar
Raaste Ka San Bhi Ban Sakta Hai Gale Ka Haar


Gar Insaan Yaad Rakhe Apni Janni Ko Har Baar
Ho Nahi Sakta Kisi Naari Ka Daaman Taar Taar


Gar Insaan Na Ruke Badhata Hi Kadam Do Chaar
Kisi Bhi Dariya Ko Kar Sakta Hai Vo Paar


Gar Insaan Lutata Rahe Bas Pyaar Hi Pyaar
Khuda Bhi Banke “Meet” Aa Jaayega Uske Dwaar
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 06:15:39 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah waah Amit ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 06:55:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bhut khub
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 07:01:18 AM »
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ग़र इंसा याद रखे अपनी जननी को हर बार
हो नहीं सकता किसी नारी का दामन तार तार


very nice feelings and a great post...congrats Meet ji!
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 07:11:43 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah waah Amit ji bahut khoob
Many many thanks Saini Ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 07:49:22 AM »
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bahut achhi utsah wardhak, prerna dayak poem hai.takhallus ka bhut khubsurat use kiya hai.3rd sher bahut pyara hai. meet ji , congrats.
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 09:38:03 AM »
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Bohat Khub!!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 11:31:21 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bhut khub
Many Many Thanks Rajan Ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 11:36:50 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut khoob aapne likha hai Amit jee. dheron dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 07:01:43 PM »
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ग़र इंसा कोशिश करता रहे बार बार
दुनिया की किसी शै से नहीं सकता वो हार


ग़र इंसा मन में रखे हमेशा अच्छे विचार  
रास्ते का सन भी बन सकता है गले का हार


ग़र इंसा याद रखे अपनी जननी को हर बार
हो नहीं सकता किसी नारी का दामन तार तार


ग़र इंसा न रुके बढ़ाता ही रहे कदम दो चार
किसी भी दरिया को कर सकता है वो पार


ग़र इंसा लुटाता रहे बस प्यार ही प्यार
ख़ुदा भी बनके “मीत” आ जायेगा उसके द्वार



Gar Insaan Koshish Karta Rahe Baar Baar
Duniya Ki Kisi Shaii Se Nahi Sakta Vo Haar


Gar Insaan Man Mein Rakhe Hamesha Achche Vichaar
Raaste Ka San Bhi Ban Sakta Hai Gale Ka Haar


Gar Insaan Yaad Rakhe Apni Janni Ko Har Baar
Ho Nahi Sakta Kisi Naari Ka Daaman Taar Taar


Gar Insaan Na Ruke Badhata Hi Kadam Do Chaar
Kisi Bhi Dariya Ko Kar Sakta Hai Vo Paar


Gar Insaan Lutata Rahe Bas Pyaar Hi Pyaar
Khuda Bhi Banke “Meet” Aa Jaayega Uske Dwaar


good one.......!
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2013, 07:10:51 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Meet jee.
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2013, 12:49:17 AM »
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ग़र इंसा याद रखे अपनी जननी को हर बार
हो नहीं सकता किसी नारी का दामन तार तार


very nice feelings and a great post...congrats Meet ji!
thanks a lot Shara ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2013, 04:01:42 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2013, 02:46:32 AM »
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ग़र इंसा लुटाता रहे बस प्यार ही प्यार
ख़ुदा भी बनके “मीत” आ जायेगा उसके द्वार

Bahut khoob amit jee
khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2013, 06:21:05 AM »
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bahut achhi utsah wardhak, prerna dayak poem hai.takhallus ka bhut khubsurat use kiya hai.3rd sher bahut pyara hai. meet ji , congrats.
इस होसला अफज़ाई के लिये बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया हसन जी
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