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Ek kavi ki dastan
Dil ke dardon ko juban dene wale wale
kavi hote hai sab kuch loota dene wale
koi kaise samjhega inke jajbaton ko
ye to mashur hai aansu chupa lene wale
ke har dard me muskaan hai har lamha
ye to hoty hai roty ko hansa dene wale
har ghadi ek naya jajba hai ek nayi shaan
ye janab hai jamin ko aasman banane wale
har lamha rehte hai khwabon ki duniya me
ye kalakaar hain khwabon ko banane wale
kabhi udaas hai kabhi baithe hai hanske
inke andaaj hai duniya ko rijhane wale
nikal jaty hai "Raahi" Pyaar ki raah pe
badi door tak jaty hai kalam chalane wale
By : Rahul Soni Raahi
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2013, 06:15:35 PM » |
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Rahi2001
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2013, 02:56:11 AM » |
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sarfira
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2013, 03:27:22 AM » |
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Raahi sahab
bht dino baad padhare hain aap
aur janaab aapne apna post wrong section me q post kia??
itni achi kalaam pr kise daad de smjh nhi aa rha
aapki likhi hui h ya kisi famous hindi poet ki--clear kare--
fir daad denge
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2013, 07:20:08 AM » |
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beautiful poetry...
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2013, 09:37:00 AM » |
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Raahi sahab
bht dino baad padhare hain aap
aur janaab aapne apna post wrong section me q post kia??
itni achi kalaam pr kise daad de smjh nhi aa rha
aapki likhi hui h ya kisi famous hindi poet ki--clear kare--
fir daad denge
iska matlab to ye hua sir ji ke ab aap ko ham pe bharosa nahi raha mana ke bade din baad aaye par aaj bhi ham apni hi kalam ka jalwa lekar aaye hain ek kavi hone ke naty ham dusre ki kalam ki khub hifajat karty hai aur N.M. likhty hai ye hamari hi hai baki aap ki marji wise maine section me dhyan nahi diaya tha aap batayen kahan dalna chahiye tha ise ? |
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2013, 09:41:24 AM » |
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good
beautiful poetry...
shukriya saini ji aur aqsh ji meri kalam ko padhne ke liye |
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2013, 09:57:23 AM » |
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aap par to pura bharoa hai-- aapko humari daad tabhi mil gai jab humne aapse puch lia k ye aapki hai ya kisi famous poet ki!  khafa na hoie sahab wese misclanious section me post kar skte the aap ---- aate rahie khus rahie |
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2013, 09:59:31 AM » |
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aap par to pura bharoa hai-- aapko humari daad tabhi mil gai jab humne aapse puch lia k ye aapki hai ya kisi famous poet ki! khafa na hoie sahab wese misclanious section me post kar skte the aap ---- aate rahie khus rahie sir ji aisi daad aap dubara na den to hamare liye behtar hoga ab ham kuch post nahi kar pa rahe hain pata nahi kya utpatan khulta hai shayad ye daad ka asar ho koi aur bhi hamen shaq ke dayre me le aaya hai  |
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2013, 11:43:41 AM » |
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sir ji aisi daad aap dubara na den to hamare liye behtar hoga ab ham kuch post nahi kar pa rahe hain pata nahi kya utpatan khulta hai shayad ye daad ka asar ho koi aur bhi hamen shaq ke dayre me le aaya hai aap par koi shaq nhi kisi ko kuch prob hoga shayad aur agr humari bat se aapke dil ko thes pahuchi ho to hum maangte hain aapse--sorry aate rahie khus rahie |
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2013, 11:46:13 AM » |
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aap par koi shaq nhi kisi ko
kuch prob hoga shayad
aur agr humari bat se aapke dil ko thes pahuchi ho to hum maangte hain aapse--sorry
aate rahie
khus rahie
are nahi sir ji aap ki baat ka hame jara bhi bura nahi laga kya karen raahi han a to jara manchale hai na kadmo ka koi thikana hai na baton ka  aap sahi kah rahe hai aaj kal 60 minuts ke baad hi dusri post dali ja sakti hai submit poetry section me Admin ji ne kia hai ye sab |
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2013, 12:20:56 PM » |
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60 mint nhi shayd 2 hrs ka gap hai ek post k bad-- aur Rahi sahab hum khud hi feel ho gya ki aapko bura lag gya humari bato ka-- aapse guzarish h ki iss Sarfire ki bat ka bura na mane dekhie to hum kitne serious ho gye ye soch kr ki aapko bura lg gya humari bato se-- -- sarfira hai par bhola bhala aur sacha hai ji bura na mane sf ka dil to bachcha hai ji god bless u dear khus rahie |
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2013, 02:10:55 AM » |
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Ek kavi ki dastan
Dil ke dardon ko juban dene wale wale
kavi hote hai sab kuch loota dene wale
koi kaise samjhega inke jajbaton ko
ye to mashur hai aansu chupa lene wale
ke har dard me muskaan hai har lamha
ye to hoty hai roty ko hansa dene wale
har ghadi ek naya jajba hai ek nayi shaan
ye janab hai jamin ko aasman banane wale
har lamha rehte hai khwabon ki duniya me
ye kalakaar hain khwabon ko banane wale
kabhi udaas hai kabhi baithe hai hanske
inke andaaj hai duniya ko rijhane wale
nikal jaty hai "Raahi" Pyaar ki raah pe
badi door tak jaty hai kalam chalane wale
By : Rahul Soni Raahi
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Rahi2001
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2016, 12:08:07 AM » |
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beautiful thanx suman ji |
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on eTI community..
