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by jeet jainam on January 03, 2013, 03:11:25 PM
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Ye daulat bhi le lo, ye shoharat bhi le lo
bhale chin lo mujhase meri javani
magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka savan
wo kagaz ke kashti, wo barish ka pani
muhalle ke sabase nishani purani
wo budhiya jise bache kahate the nani
wo nani ke baton mein pariyon ka dera
wo chahare ke jhuriryon mein sadiyon ka phera
bhulaye nahi bhool sakata hai koi
wo choti si raten wo lambi kahani
kadi dhup mein apne ghar se nikalana
wo chidiya wo bul-bul wo titali pakadana
wo gudiya ke shadi mein ladana jhagadana
wo jhulon se girna wo gir ke sambhalana
wo pital ke challon ke pyare se tohafe
wo tuti hui chudiyon ke nishani
kabhi ret ke unche tilon pe jana
gharonde banana banake mitana
wo masum chahat ke tasvir apni
wo khwabon khilaunon ke jagir apni
na duniya ka gham tha na rishton ke bandhan
badi khubasurat thi wo zindagani,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2013, 03:58:15 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2013, 04:00:20 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2013, 05:50:42 PM »
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Mr. Jeet, you are making lots of post and in wrong section.

This section ie. Hindi Poets is for sharing post of famous Hindi poets , not just any arbitrary posts. And if this is your own poetry then share in proper section, You can find all section by clicking Forum at top of every page. And if you have any question or doubt then please use : User support and suggestion

And if you are unsure about original poet then use :
Share poetry you like and its subsection.

In the last but most important Yoindia Shayariadab is not a FB or Twitter or SMS sharing site, its community of real poetry enthusiast, we are not here for just copy-paste poetry, rather we encourage people to write there own poetry and also want people to respect poetry by giving them proper credit. Its better to write SINGLE but your own poetry once a month than copy-pasting just random poetry from various sources daily.

So try to understand nature of this community / shayari bazm and respect it.   Hence I request to help us to decide whether its your own work or work of a famous poet or just unknown writer so that we can move it proper section.

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This Nazm is sung Lt. Jagjeet Singh, I am not sure if he wrote it itself. Still, its request to all that try to honor original creator of poetry and also try to post them in proper section.
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2013, 02:33:36 PM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2013, 01:32:00 PM »
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waah waah
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