जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया. :Hindi Poets

Sudhir Ashq

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जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.
जीना मेरा दुश्वार हो गया.

प्यार,मुहब्बत,वफा का रिश्ता,
यारों अब व्यापार हो गया.

चोर डकैतों के गिरोह में,
शामिल थानेदार हो गया.

रिश्वत देकर काम कराना,
सच में,शिष्टाचार हो गया.

गीत गजल की दुनिया पाकर,
अश्क का बेडा पार हो गया.
-सुधीर अश्क


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2013, 04:11:45 PM »

good,sir


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nandbahu

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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2013, 07:03:16 PM »

very nice


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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2013, 07:57:42 PM »

waah waah bahut bahut mubaarak ho


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aqsh

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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2013, 08:33:09 PM »

kya baat hai bahut khoob...


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~Hriday~

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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2013, 11:07:41 PM »

Hi Sudhir ji,

The post is very nice. Nicely written. But the section where you are posting is not the correct one.

Please do not post your own compositions under 'Famous Poets and their Poetry' section. It is meant for sharing poems from famous poets. Your self composed posts you need to submit under 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari' section.

When you click on submit poetry, you see a drop down where 'Dosti/ Friendship Area' is there by default. when you click on the drop down and move towards the bottom, you will get the section 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari'. Under that, there are many sub sections. You can post your poem in any of those sections as per the type of poem you are submitting.

Thanks
Hriday


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mkv

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Re: जबसे तुमसे प्यार हो गया.

«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2013, 02:41:18 PM »

प्यार,मुहब्बत,वफा का रिश्ता,
यारों अब व्यापार हो गया.

javaab nahee.. Applause


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