तुफान - by Umrav Jan Sikar

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उनकी बेरुखी पर हम करते रहे गिला।
उनकी तरफ से हमें, सही जवाब ना मिला॥

आंधियों ने किया जब,  तुफां आने का इशारा।
हमें अपने हाल पर छोड़ा, खुद कर गये किनारा॥

तुफानों के वेग में,  हमसे किश्ती न संभली।
बह गये बहाव में, हमारी दिशाएं भी बदली॥

किसी ने बताया कि उनके वहां महफिलें सजी।
मेरी बरबादी पर हंसे, खूब तालियां बजी॥

-- Umrav Jan Sikar
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2015, 08:20:53 PM »
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Umrav Singh Jee bahut hee khoobsurat  kavita hai, dheron dheron daad + RAU.
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2015, 06:19:50 AM »
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बेहद खूबसूरत ढेरो दाद कबूल करे
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2015, 07:46:16 AM »
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खूब कहा
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2015, 09:14:10 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on August 08, 2015, 08:20:53 PM
Umrav Singh Jee bahut hee khoobsurat  kavita hai. Janaab mujhe kuchh confusion ho rahaa hai ke yeh aap khud kee hai yaa ke kisee famous kavi kee likhee hai. Gar yeh aapkee nahin to phir kavita ke neechey aapkaa nahin uss kavi kaa naam honaa chahiye ke jis ne likhee hai. Darasal aapkee sabhi poems mein yeh problem hai. Iss ko aap clarify kar saktein hain. Gar aapkee nahin to thank for sharing, gar aapkee hai to bahut bahut daad.
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2015, 09:19:28 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 09, 2015, 07:46:16 AM
खूब कहा

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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2015, 09:56:21 AM »
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behad umda peshqash waaaaaahhhhh daaaaaaaaaadddddd
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2015, 10:31:44 AM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on August 09, 2015, 09:56:21 AM
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behad umda peshqash waaaaaahhhhh daaaaaaaaaadddddd

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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2015, 02:05:29 PM »
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Quote from: Umrav Jan Sikar on August 09, 2015, 09:14:10 AM
सर,
    ये सारी रचनाएँ मेरी लिखी हुई है इसीलिए रचना के नीचे मेरा नाम लिखता हूँ।आप confusion में मत रहिए।
   शंका जाहिर करने के लिए धन्यवाद।


Bahut khoobsurat Rachnaa hai Janaab, Isske liye main ne aapko Rau diyaa hai.
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Bahut khoobsurat Rachnaa hai Janaab, Isske liye main ne aapko Rau diyaa hai.
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2015, 11:00:23 AM »
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Quote from: Prabha prakas on August 10, 2015, 12:26:34 PM
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