दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है. :Hindi Poets

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बज्म में तन्हाइयों का जिक् है.
अन्छुई परछाइयों का जिक् है.

जिसने पाला,वो उसी को डस गये,
ऐसे कुछ हरजाइयों का जिक् है.

जिन्दगी की दास्तां में कुछ नहीं,
उम् की रूसवाइयों का जिक् है.

पतझर बना दिया,जिसने बसंत को,
दिल की उन अंगडाइयों का जिक् है.

शायरी में अश्क की पढ लीजिये,
दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.
- सुधीर अश्क


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2013, 07:04:15 PM »

:clapping:bahut khoob sudhir ji.


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2013, 07:13:09 PM »

bahut khoob Sudhir Ji Clapping Smiley


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2013, 07:13:37 PM »

Waah waah waah bahut khoob sudhir ji


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2013, 07:36:13 PM »

MARHABAA MARHABAA MARHABAA


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2013, 09:07:06 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 23, 2013, 07:01:57 PM

bahut khoob...........!


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2013, 12:25:52 AM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 23, 2013, 07:01:57 PM

bahot khoob
lajawaab poetry
daad kubul karen


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2013, 12:50:30 AM »

Very Nice. Wah Ji Wah Clapping Smiley


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2013, 05:57:35 AM »

bhut khub ji


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2013, 03:42:04 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: दर्द की गहराइयों का जिक् है.

«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2013, 10:10:05 PM »

Hi Sudhir ji,

The post is very nice. Nicely written. But the section where you are posting is not the correct one.

Please do not post your own compositions under 'Famous Poets and their Poetry' section. It is meant for sharing poems from famous poets. Your self composed posts you need to submit under 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari' section.

When you click on submit poetry, you see a drop down where 'Dosti/ Friendship Area' is there by default. when you click on the drop down and move towards the bottom, you will get the section 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari'. Under that, there are many sub sections. You can post your poem in any of those sections as per the type of poem you are submitting.

Thanks
Hriday


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