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वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

by Sudhir Ashq on February 22, 2013, 09:33:10 PM

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दिल कभी गमजदा नहीं होता.
वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

आशियां हम भी बना लेते अगर,
दरमिंया फासिला नहीं होता.

बात वो इस तरहा छुपाते हैं,
जैसे हमको पता नहीं होता.

मैं खतावार हूं,तो दुनियां में,
कोई भी पारसा नहीं होता.

तुम न मिल पाये,मुकद्दर अपना,
वरना, होने को क्या नहीं होता.
- सुधीर अश्क


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2013, 11:10:38 PM »

bahut khoob , jaanab.


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2013, 11:14:30 PM »

wah wah


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2013, 12:52:34 AM »

बात वो इस तरहा छुपाते हैं, जैसे हमको पता नहीं होता

bahut hi khoobsurat Usual Smile


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2013, 12:53:11 AM »

laajawaab ek rau qubool karen


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2013, 03:35:22 AM »

bhut khub ji


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2013, 09:57:25 AM »

wah


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2013, 03:49:32 PM »

बहुत खूब सुधीर जी, ढेरों दाद Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2013, 07:34:43 PM »

kya baat hai. bahut achcha likha hai aapne. dheron daad qubool kare


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Re: वो अगर बेवफा नहीं होता.

«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2013, 09:29:55 PM »

Hi Sudhir ji,

The post is very nice. Nicely written. But the section where you are posting is not the correct one.

Please do not post your own compositions under 'Famous Poets and their Poetry' section. It is meant for sharing poems from famous poets. Your self composed posts you need to submit under 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari' section.

When you click on submit poetry, you see a drop down where 'Dosti/ Friendship Area' is there by default. when you click on the drop down and move towards the bottom, you will get the section 'Shayari (Poetry) or Shayari'. Under that, there are many sub sections. You can post your poem in any of those sections as per the type of poem you are submitting.

Thanks
Hriday