A Love Story Between Two Friends... Rishi

by Rishi Agarwal on January 23, 2011, 07:39:23 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 5240 times)
Rishi Agarwal
Guest


Hey Friends,
Today I M Going To Tell A Love Story..
Between Two Friends..
It Is Divided Into Six Parts..
Each Day I Will Tell U One Part..
Hope You Will Like This Story..

Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 07:59:49 PM »
Haan toh Rishi bhai,
pehla part kidhar hai..
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2011, 08:07:11 PM »
First Parts

Have You Ever Been In Love With Your Best Friend ?

If Yes Then This Is A Stroy Which U Will UnderStand..

There Was A Boy And A Girl.. They Were Best Frnds For Years And Years..

They Could Talk For Hours On The Phone And Msg Each Order For Days..

When They Were Together Not A Single Sad That Could Cross There Minds..

Every Thing Was Great Till One ...


Girl :- What ? But Y.. ?

Boy :- I Am Sorry, Bye


[He Disconnected The Phone]

[ And She Felt As If Somebody Closed The Door On Her Face ]



Every Thing Else Flashed Is & It Was Then
That She Relaised How Much He Means 2 Hours..

To Be Contnued..
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2011, 04:55:56 PM »
Looking frwrd to the next part... Feared. Feared.
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 05:45:57 PM »
Part 2nd Of The Story


In The Morning She Woke Up From A Phone Call..
It Was The Boye..

Boy : Hey,

Girl : I Am So Glad That U Called Me..
       What Happened With U Yesterday ?

Boy : I Was Busy

[ Girl Understood That Something was Wrong But Could Not Ask ]

[ Silence ]

Boy : U Know.. We Should Stop Talking..

Girl : Thought

[ Boy Cut The Call ]
 
Girl : Call The Boy But Boy Not Pick Up The Phone And Answer Any Msg..

[ Girl Was Worried That Somthing Was Wrong ]

At Night She Could Not Sleep..
She Was Sitting In Her Room Cring
Her Mind.. Tears..  


To Be Continued For 3rd Part...
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 05:39:12 PM »
Part 3rd

Broken..

It Was The Answer To Everything His Words Were
Pounding On Her Heart Wanted To Jump Out..


He Was The Only 1 Why ? She Screamed At The To Her Voice..
 
She Decided To Make A Last Try And Get Home Back..

Girl :- Hii

Boy :- Why Are You Calling ?

Girl :- I Need To Tell you Something..

Boy :- Go Ahead..

Girl :- I Just Wanted You To Know One Thing For We Stop Talking..

Boy :- Tell Me..

Girl :- U Know In These Days I Realised How Much You Mean To Me..
        I Love You

(He Disconnects The Phone)

To Be Continued For Part 4th..
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2011, 04:31:03 AM »
Part 4th..


She Broke Off.. She Tried,
May Be He Doesnot Really Care About Her
She Thought, He Was Not Her Frnd In The 1st Palace..

Tears Were Slowly Running Worst
She Left House With A Note..


Five Hours Later...

Phone Rang in The Boy's Room
Boy Pick up The Call..

(It Was Girl's Mom..)

The Girl Was In The Hospital, Got Hit By Car..

Boy Reached To The Hospital..

She Was Opened Eyes With His Name..

He Took Her Hand..

Boy :- I M So Sory Its All My Fault..
But I Promise You.. When You Get Better
I Will Make It Up To You..

Girl Had Tears In Her Eyes..


To Be Continued For 5th Part....

Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2011, 06:17:08 PM »
Part 5th

Girl :- I Would Not Get Better..

Boy :- No.. No Donot Say That Dear..

Girl :- Just Tell Me One Thing Why Did You Do It ?
 
(Boy Told Her That He Has Heart Problem And He Did Not Want Her To Be
 Worried And There Was Risk That He Could Have Died...

Boy :- I Did It Because I Love U

Girl :- I Love U Too..

To Be Continued...
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 07:25:11 PM »
Part - 6th

(Silence)

Both Of Them Having Tears In There Eyes..
After A Minute Boy Kissed On Girl Forhead..

Then Sudden Crisis Happened,
Boy Felt Sudden Pain In His Heart,
Taken To Operation Theater..

He Was Operated For About 6 Hours..

For The Girl Every Second Of This 6 Hours Were Like A Year...

She Was Just Praying And Cring
And Wishing To Grant Him Life..

The Time Was Running Very Slowly For Her...

After 6 Hours Doctor Come Out,
And Said Boy Is No More..

Girl Made A Request To See Him Last Time...

She Went To Him, Boy Lying On Bed,
She Gazed Him 4 A Minute Then Kissed Him
on His Forhead And Lied Over Him..

After Some Time Doctor Come to Take Her

But What He Saw ? That Girl Was Dead...


Moral:- If U Love Someone Dont Hold Back Your Feelings..

Bcoz Love Is The Reason To Live ..

Love Is Beautiful


Rishi Agarwal  
Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2011, 07:58:32 PM »
Nice nice sharing Rishi jee..!
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2011, 08:04:05 PM »
Nice nice sharing Rishi jee..!

Shukriya Rahim Ji
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2011, 09:22:02 PM »
Very sad and heart touching story Rishi ji.thanks for sharing. icon_thumleft
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2011, 04:12:58 AM »
yar rulayega kya---
mujhe aisi chijen poadhkar bahut dukh hota hai.
ekdum dil ko lagti hain.
mai pyat mohabbat ke ehsaason se khud ko duur rakhta hun---
by the way--
ye kisi ki personal sachhi story hai---aur aisa hota hai aur hua hai.
bahut touching yar--
Logged
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2011, 08:27:03 AM »
hmmm.... very touchy story rishi ji.....
bht saare emotions ko is choti si story bakhoobi dala hai aapne.....
luv d feelings of dis story...
bht bht khoob.....
Logged
kritika sharma
Guest
«Reply #14 on: January 30, 2011, 08:37:35 AM »
Heart touching story ......ooh shit ...mujhe rona aa raha h but ..sorry..i will not cry ....... awesome !!
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 23, 2024, 07:44:05 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]

[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]

[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]

[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]

[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]

[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]

by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]

[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]

[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.126 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer