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Kal mai bahut gehri nind me so rhi thi... Dher sare chamkeele khwaab bikhre hue they mere charon taraf... Aisa lag rha tha ki jaise aasmaan me udte hue baadlon k sath luka-chipi khel rhi hoon mai... Har ek sitare pe apna naam likhne me khoi hui thi mai... Ki achanak hi kisi k aahat pe nind khul gyi. "Jra dekhun to kaun hai" mene kasmsa k karvat lia... Arey, ye to meri dadi hain..! Maa..dekho na papa b aaye hain mujhe pyar krne... Hai na papa...!!? Mgar ye kya! Aap log udaas kyo hain? Papa maa se ye kya rhe hain aap ki "Nimmi...tumhari kokh me ldki pl rhi hai...girva do ise.." Nhiiiiiii....papa nhi... Dadi aap b nafrat krti hain mujhse? apne hi zaat se? ...kyo kr rhe hain aap log aisa?? Maa... Mai mrna nhi chaahti... Bta do inhe! Bahut se sapne hain mere...inhe ye samjhao na maa! Mai jeena chaahti hoon... Khuli hwa me saans lena chaahti hoon... Bolo maa!!! Tum chup kyo ho?? Kyo ja rhi ho inke sath... Ye log mujhe andheron me le ja rhe hain... Bcha lo maa... Mujhe bcha lo tum..!!!! Aaaaaahhhhh... Maa.... Kitna shor ho rha hai yahaan.. Apne hatho ko mere kano pe rkh do... Chupa lo mujhe... Jaldi karo maa!!!! Bahut dar lag rha hai. Kyo nhi sun rhi tum meri aawaaj?? Meri aah suno maa... Ye safed kapdon me lipte log.. Mera khoon kar denge...! Dekho na maa kaise-kaise aujaar baras rhe hain mujhpar... Meri choti choti ungliyon ko cheer rhe hain ye... Mujhe tumse juda kr rhe hain maa... Kyo nhi kehti tum ki mai tumhari beti hoon... Tumhare jigar ka tukda..! Btao maa... Kya galti hai meri?? Ldki hoon faqat yhi na!! To kya hme jine ka haq nhi... Hme bojh samjhte ho?? Papa... Aap ko b dya nhi aati mujhpar... Meri cheekh dehlati nhi aapko...? Bcha lijiye mujhe... Pls papa! Mai aaphi ka ansh to hoon. Aaaah.... Mera dam ghut rha hai... Chor do mujhe... Mat ghoto mera gla... Mai jeena chaahti hoon... Aaahhh... Bcha lo mujhe..! Bcha lo mujhe...! Aa...aa...aa...hh...hh... Ba...c...h...a.... Lo... Mu....j...h....e.... . ~~~~the end~~~~ . A request-"pls save girls"
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2012, 03:41:23 AM » |
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Jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam h. Aapne etne achche tarike se ham sab ko ak msg de diya h. Bhut khoob nhut achche aap es hi tarah aese topics ke bare m likhti rahe. Bhut khusi huyi aapke jajbat jankar. Or kalam bhi bhuuut saandaar or jaandaaar h. Etne achche jajabat ham tak pahunchane ka sukriya.
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2012, 05:28:01 AM » |
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Bechain Dhadkan
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2012, 06:05:56 AM » |
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Kal mai bahut gehri nind me so rhi thi... Dher sare chamkeele khwaab bikhre hue they mere charon taraf... Aisa lag rha tha ki jaise aasmaan me udte hue baadlon k sath luka-chipi khel rhi hoon mai... Har ek sitare pe apna naam likhne me khoi hui thi mai... Ki achanak hi kisi k aahat pe nind khul gyi. "Jra dekhun to kaun hai" mene kasmsa k karvat lia... Arey, ye to meri dadi hain..! Maa..dekho na papa b aaye hain mujhe pyar krne... Hai na papa...!!? Mgar ye kya! Aap log udaas kyo hain? Papa maa se ye kya rhe hain aap ki "Nimmi...tumhari kokh me ldki pl rhi hai...girva do ise.." Nhiiiiiii....papa nhi... Dadi aap b nafrat krti hain mujhse? apne hi zaat se? ...kyo kr rhe hain aap log aisa?? Maa... Mai mrna nhi chaahti... Bta do inhe! Bahut se sapne hain mere...inhe ye samjhao na maa! Mai jeena chaahti hoon... Khuli hwa me saans lena chaahti hoon... Bolo maa!!! Tum chup kyo ho?? Kyo ja rhi ho inke sath... Ye log mujhe andheron me le ja rhe hain... Bcha lo maa... Mujhe bcha lo tum..!!!! Aaaaaahhhhh... Maa.... Kitna shor ho rha hai yahaan.. Apne hatho ko mere kano pe rkh do... Chupa lo mujhe... Jaldi karo maa!!!! Bahut dar lag rha hai. Kyo nhi sun rhi tum meri aawaaj?? Meri aah suno maa... Ye safed kapdon me lipte log.. Mera khoon kar denge...! Dekho na maa kaise-kaise aujaar baras rhe hain mujhpar... Meri choti choti ungliyon ko cheer rhe hain ye... Mujhe tumse juda kr rhe hain maa... Kyo nhi kehti tum ki mai tumhari beti hoon... Tumhare jigar ka tukda..! Btao maa... Kya galti hai meri?? Ldki hoon faqat yhi na!! To kya hme jine ka haq nhi... Hme bojh samjhte ho?? Papa... Aap ko b dya nhi aati mujhpar... Meri cheekh dehlati nhi aapko...? Bcha lijiye mujhe... Pls papa! Mai aaphi ka ansh to hoon. Aaaah.... Mera dam ghut rha hai... Chor do mujhe... Mat ghoto mera gla... Mai jeena chaahti hoon... Aaahhh... Bcha lo mujhe..! Bcha lo mujhe...! Aa...aa...aa...hh...hh... Ba...c...h...a.... Lo... Mu....j...h....e.... . ~~~~the end~~~~ . A request-"pls save girls"
ya khuda... Itne gehre jajbaat!!!!! Itne asarangej alfaaj!!!!! Aapki soch aapka andaaz sb kuch bahut hi juda juda sa hai~~~ aapki ye kalaam tareef se ooper ki cheej hai~~~ i have no words to explain my feelings... God bless you
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dolly
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2012, 07:04:34 AM » |
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gud one kohinoor.....gud msg...n veryyyy nicelyyy expressed.....blessings....
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dolly
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2012, 07:05:15 AM » |
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gud one kohinoor.....gud msg...n veryyyy nicelyyy expressed.....blessings....
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Kohinoor
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 08:41:24 AM » |
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Jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam h. Aapne etne achche tarike se ham sab ko ak msg de diya h. Bhut khoob nhut achche aap es hi tarah aese topics ke bare m likhti rahe. Bhut khusi huyi aapke jajbat jankar. Or kalam bhi bhuuut saandaar or jaandaaar h. Etne achche jajabat ham tak pahunchane ka sukriya.
tareef ke liye behad shukriya parvana ji...
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sarfira
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2012, 08:57:32 AM » |
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tareef krne ko shabd nhi-- wese bhi ye tareef karnewali post nahi h-- samjhne ki baat hai--
god bless u dear
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saahill
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2012, 08:59:12 AM » |
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kohinoor nahi koinoor ho ap itna sacha dard aise paigham ki jaroorat hai aj dunya ko
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mkv
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2012, 09:12:16 AM » |
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awesome feeli ng..
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Kohinoor
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2012, 10:42:36 AM » |
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Kohinoor
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2012, 11:33:40 AM » |
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ya khuda... Itne gehre jajbaat!!!!! Itne asarangej alfaaj!!!!! Aapki soch aapka andaaz sb kuch bahut hi juda juda sa hai~~~ aapki ye kalaam tareef se ooper ki cheej hai~~~ i have no words to explain my feelings... God bless you
thanks bechain ji.
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2012, 01:10:21 PM » |
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beautifully expressed
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Kohinoor
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2012, 12:20:44 AM » |
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gud one kohinoor.....gud msg...n veryyyy nicelyyy expressed.....blessings....
thanks dolly
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