- Broken Dreams -

by Meena on September 22, 2005, 04:53:22 PM
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Meena
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i read this little poem and thot of sharing it with u friends...

As children bring their broken toys
With tears for us to mend,
I brought my broken dreams to God
Because He was my friend.

But then instead of leaving Him
In peace to work alone,
I hung around and tried to help
With ways that were my own.

At last I snatched them back and cried,
"How could you be so slow"
"My child," He said, "What could I do?
You never did let go."
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2005, 09:22:53 PM »
good one meena!!
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2005, 04:36:00 PM »
thank u  :D
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2005, 01:47:21 PM »
nice one meenu sis......!!! Usual Smile
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mili_genie
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2005, 05:47:53 AM »
good one ........... meenaji bahot acche ....... Usual Smile
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