'CANCER' ROG HAI MUJHKO........K@HIN@@R

by Kohinoor on June 05, 2012, 04:29:34 AM
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Bda hi dard hai mujhko...
Cancer rog hai mujhko...
Ulti khoon ki hoti hai...
bdi tkleef hoti hai...
Saamne maut ka chehra
mgar jine ki hai khwaish...
Saansen ruk ruk k aati hain...
Dhadkan tej chalti hai...
To bda hi dar lgta hai..
K maa ka sahara choot jayega...
Aashiyana toot jayega..
Ptni jinda lash bn jaye...
Bacchon ki aankh me aansu...
Aise khwaab dikhte hain...
To aansu ldiyon ki surat
aankhon k kor se hai behta..
Nind toot jati hai...
Jine ki namumkin si khwaish
bdi shiddat se uthti hai...
Aur machalkar toot jati hai...
To galti maan leta hoon...
Aur sbse ye kehta hoon...
K 'TANBAKU' jaanleva hai
tumhari jaan le legi...
Dekho ye jindgi meri
sabak le lo jra mujhse..
Tambaku chor doge sb
chalo wada karo mujhse...
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2012, 05:25:57 AM »
Nice . Very  touching  and  inspirational .
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2012, 05:58:57 AM »
bahut bhaut bhaut khoob dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2012, 09:46:29 AM »
Waah waah Kohinoor, ghazab ka kalaam, inspirational. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau, But I also agree to Sarfira bhai.
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2012, 02:20:17 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut khoob Kohinoor ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2012, 02:54:59 PM »
bohot acche kohinooe ji.....
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2012, 03:26:04 PM »
Very Very Nice Creation Kohinoor  !!! Tons of claps Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 04:10:32 PM »
Sirf aankho me aansoo ye post padh kar..
Har us patient ke liye meri prayers jo lad rahe hai is disease se. Sirf himmat...jo hara saktee hai is beemari ko. jeene ki chahat kabhee khatma nahi honi chahiye patient ke dil se..
medicines are secondary.
Kabhee na ho kisi ko ye jaanlewa rog..yahi duaa hai meri..

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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 04:40:06 PM »
bahut achha creation kohinoor ji hridayspashi aur prernadayee.
    jo log ye kahte hein ki ye chhodi nahi ja sakti unhen mera nivedan hai ki meri atmakatha(dhoomrapan ki aadat ke bare mein)internet (hindi bhasha mein)  par jaroor paden 30 varshon ki aadat kis tarah chhooti 1997 mein, sab vivran milega vahaan. mujhe nahi malum mein yahan  link de sakta hoon ya nahin, jo saathi chahen unhen mein pm karne ya is aadat ko chhudvane mein madad karne ke liye taiyaar hoon.
{in fact yadi admin sahab permission den to uska english rupantar mein apni is site yoindia par post kar sakta hoon jo kai varsh tak ek site par thi ab vo site band ho gayee hai}

dhoomrapan se door raho
sada tum tandurust raho

-- ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2012, 05:08:55 PM »
nice mesage for those take tobaco
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2012, 07:10:43 PM »
Hello Bahenaa...!


It's a real sprit of writter... Nice massage...
Bahut bada khayaal aur bahut umdaa kaam kiya hai...
Aise post likhana bahut badi baat hai...

And Jo aapne likha waqai bahut bada kaam kiya...
Salut to my little biggies sister... Usual Smile

Keep posting...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
                 

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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2012, 07:57:26 PM »
nice one motivational ...

Intezar !
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2012, 02:38:27 AM »
aapka yeh kalam padkar dil roya kohinoorji.

humare dad ko na tambakku ki aadat thi na hi ciggy ki. But unhe cancer hua aur wo chal base...2 mahina regular radiations and regular Chemotherapy lene ke baad bi bacha nahi paye hum...  sad5

Nice creation. daad hazir hai
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2012, 10:02:03 AM »
Very nice
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Kohinoor
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2012, 05:55:19 AM »
Waah waah Kohinoor, ghazab ka kalaam, inspirational. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau, But I also agree to Sarfira bhai.
Koi jb chor de tumko...
Bda hi chot de tumko...
To usko bhool jaao.!!!
Na fir naam lo uska
nafrat surat se kr lena..
Use njarandaaj kr dena...
Haan muskil jra hogi
ajiyat dil ko bahut hogi..
Mgar ye kaam kr loge to
bda sukoon paoge
thandak dil me utregi
khwaish jine ki fir hogi
to kisi aise ko apna lena..
Jise apno ne thukraya ho..
Ya gareeb bacchon k
hnsi ka sabab bn jana...
Kisi lachaar ki jra mdad kr doge..
To tum ye jaan jaoge
k tumhara dard nhi gehra...
Cigrette chor hi doge..
Tambaku k sare packet fir utha k phek doge...
Kisi k kaam aaoge
to sukoon ki maut paaoge..
Warna hzaron logon ki manind
gumnami k andheron me
tadap k bikhroge
aur apne aap se ldte-ldte...
Maut bs pa hi jaoge!
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Sf and Iftakhaar
mai aap logon ki baaton se sehmat nhi hoon.
You r totalay wrong...
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