facebook story

by deepansh on June 09, 2013, 08:59:49 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1023 times)
deepansh
Guest
Ek ladka ladki facebook pe
mile
kahi kisi
post pe.
Pehle like, fir comment
fir chat post pe baat.
Kabhi hasi
kabhi mazak
kabhi khatti meethi fariyad
fir add as friend
aur confirm friend
wo notification accept ka
wo anjaani si khushi
fir msg me baat
jaan pehchaan aur subah
shaam
yaad.
Wo subah good morning kehna
aur raato ko jag jag k good
night
kehna
wo din me 10 baar uske msg ka
wait
karna
aur msg padh k akele akele
hasna
kahani fir kuch aage badhi
dono me fir pyaar badha
pyaar me izhaar hua
izhar ka iqraar hua
sab kuch achha chal rha tha
dono khush the.
Ladki k kai aur frnd the.
Kisi ne ladki ko kaha k wo
ladka
bura
hai
ladki ko trust nahi hua
aur fir bhi ladke se pyar
karne lagi
par us din k baad ladki k
manme
shak
janam le chuka tha
aur shak ne uske pyar ko
dhire
dhire
khaana shuru kar diya
wo ladke k 1 min late repl y ko
bhibewafai
kehne lagi
usne ye bhi na socha k
ladkajob
karta
hai.
Fir bhi ladka pehle jaisa tha
us se
jyada
baat karne laga
dhire dhire ladki ko kisi aur
se
pyar ho
gaya
usne ladke ko block kar diya
ladke ka dil tut gaya
ek pyaar ka ghar tut gaya
ladka haar chuka tha
usne facebbok use karna band
kar diya
wo ladki aaj bhi khush nahi
hai
kisi k
sath
aur us ladke ko dhundhti bhi
hai
yaad
kar k
par ladka chale gaya tha
wo ladka bhi khush hai apne
aap
me
kuch kahaniya aisi bhi hoti
hai..
moral - zindagi me kisi ko
khone
kbaad
hi
uski keemat ka ehsaas hota
hai.
Logged
Mantash
Guest
«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 09:46:52 PM »
Great story bro really inspiring
Good job dude...............
Logged
RAJAN KONDAL
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 11:02:06 PM »
v. Gud
Keep writing dear
Logged
zarraa
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 100
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
8 days, 7 hours and 33 minutes.
Posts: 2251
Member Since: May 2012


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 11:14:55 PM »
Very nicely written !!!!
Logged
sarfira
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2013, 12:13:48 AM »
acha moral h pr story to aaj kal ke sabhi new Facebook users ka h
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2013, 12:17:17 AM »
 Applause nice
Logged
Mohammad Touhid
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 35
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
38 days, 12 hours and 35 minutes.

'I' 'Luv' d Way 'U' 'Forget' Me..!.!

Posts: 7160
Member Since: Aug 2009


View Profile
«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2013, 06:56:44 PM »
sahi hai..
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 01:44:22 PM »
good
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Stories, Quotes and Related Stuff > Inspirational Stories and real life Incidences. > Topic: facebook story
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 06:08:42 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.13 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer