moment of life

by dead heart on October 17, 2008, 11:07:38 PM
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first before anythin i apologise for the length of the story... sad11

this is a true story about my frend...a frends story i shall neva forget....i cnt even say its mine coz its his...about his love...but its also about the first person i adviced in my life...the person who told me...rahim....he told me that rahim could make a gud advicor...so here it goes..

i was in primary seven....few months to go to high school...i was the head boy of the school...prefectual head...unopposed leader...
first time in the history of the school that sumone stood for the post of head boy and remained unopposed....wat a great achievement...
umm i met this frend in the class and we wer now frends for about two months...
he could tell me almost everything and i could jst give him little advice n stuff...he then one day told me...i could make a gud advicor...
a real gud one and he asked me for help in getting the firl he loved as he was a shy guy...very decent, smart...perfectly a gentlemen...
so i made the boy and the girl tok as the girl took me as a close frend...a real close frend...they started toking...i could hear the
story from both ends as they wuld both tell me about their personal lives...they wuld sumtimes even show me their "journals"(the most
precious for sum) in which i could see them closing in...but i knew the girl took him as a frend only and i ahd even informed him of that...
they became best frends...the girl then told the boy one day that she loved sumone and the boy she loved also liked her and asked her out...
and dat she said YES to him...that day i saw him sit alone near waves riting these lines:
"kash unse humne pehle pyar ka izhar kar lia hota,
dil ne sache dil se pyar nahin kiya hota,
aj bhi akele jeene ki takat hai hum main,
par kash zindagi ne humari saanson ko humse paraya kiya nahin hota..." as he faded tears down his cheek and i told him "time will test and then
u will taste time...the sweet package of love u will get...her bf wont as i smiled at him and we left for her party she gave for her dating sum1...unrealistic nah???"

it was the last day at primary for us...and she was leaving forever...it was the last meeting for them...best frends meeting to share their time together for the last time...
they met...and these r the words from his journal for that visit...

"my heartbeat was increasing as she stepped towards me...she came n first we neva had words...then we wer toking that will u forget me and stuff...then i took my soul in hand and
told her...that she was the first n may b last love of my life..i expressed my feelings rapidly...and tears could barely stop as they formed a river...she heard every word i said with her
heart and understood with her soul...we toked about it...then she said i gotta leave...she walked a few steps and turned back n hugged me..as tight as her clothes wer...i cnt express that moment
with words but it was the best moment of my life till that time..i neva knew a better one was cumin...the girl said I LOVE YOU TOO!!!! and wiped my tears with her soft touchy fingers and then she said
bye and she walked further more than before....she then came back...luked at my eyes and said...i have neva eva given this to anyone including my bf...n most probably u r the last one i am giving it to...
first and last...before i could say a word her breath was mine and mine was hers...her lips wer mine and mine wer hers...as her lips touched mine and stayed there for i shuld say a long time...i culd say
wow the best moment of my life...i culdnt beleive that she gave me such a gift...and then she walked away with tears of love joy sorrow... neva to return back....althou she luked back n waved and so did i..."

this is one of the incidents in my life i wnt forget...an incident that says sum relationships are better than jst dating relationships...she gave him a kiss of his life...the first kiss...they had their moment and it was so gud that the boy and girl remembered it forever....no one wuld forget such a moment...some dream n neva get it...but i say patience is the best way of getting such moments...he waited for this moment for over 6 months...so this post mainly is for ppl who r single and love sumone but havent got them...u will...jst wait...wat God does and life does a human will neva eva noe so dnt curse God and ur fate...let them test u but one day u will taste....
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2008, 11:26:07 PM »
Very nice real story Heart Applause Applause Very emotional and touching !!
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2008, 11:39:58 PM »
thank u celmira jee
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akki4u
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 05:13:37 AM »
nice one
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