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by akela on October 12, 2004, 09:27:45 PM
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well ....let me share u a story..
 
friends i believe that there is nothing in this world like the mother's love.
only mother's love is so pure ,selfishness and so great.Everyone knows it,so it sucks to write a story on that.but iam unable to resist..so here it is.
 
ek baar ek ladke ko ek ladki se pyar ho jata hai.ladki bhi ladke ko chahne lagti hai.baat shadi tak pahooch jati hai.par ladki ko bharosa nahi hai ki ladka ussse sacha pyar karta hai.doosari baat usse ladke ki maa bhi pasand nahi thi.
issliye ussne ek shart rakhi.
agar tum mujhe apni maa ka dil nikal kar doge ,tho hi mai tumse shaadi karungi,ladki ne kaha.ladka yeh sunkar bahoot hairaan ho gaya.woh apni maa se bahoot payar karata tha ,par woh uss ladki ko bhi khona nahi chahta tha.so woh raaji ho gaya.
ussne apni maa ka dil nikaal diya.phir woh ladki ki taraf bhaga.raaste mai usse thokar lagi auur woh gir gaya.
dil se awaj aaye 'beta kahi chhot tho nahi lagi'
ladke ki aankho ke aage andhera chha gaya.kisi tarah woh himmat batorkar ladki ke paas pahucha.
tho ladki ne kaha  mai tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti.jo kisi ladki ke liye apni maa ko maar sakta hai,woh kisi auur ke liye mujhe bhi maar sakta hai.
yeh sunkar ladke ki aankho ke aage andhera chha gaya auur woh wahi gir pada.
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sammu1984
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2004, 03:40:26 PM »
sad5
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2004, 04:02:04 PM »
hmm  a veryyyyyyy touching story. i heard it in a Bajan.
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2005, 06:52:46 AM »
nice...
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2005, 02:23:07 AM »
NICE
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desikuri
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2005, 11:46:34 AM »
bahut acha likha hai
pad ke rona a gya
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2005, 04:05:10 AM »
tum ko bhi ata hai rona
yeh aaj hai ajna
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shyama
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2005, 04:21:45 PM »
Quote from: "akela"
well ....let me share you a story..
 
friends i believe that there is nothing in this world like the mother's love.
only mother's love is so pure ,selfishness and so great.Everyone knows it,so it sucks to write a story on that.but iam unable to resist..so here it is.
 
ek baar ek ladke ko ek ladki se pyar ho jata hai.ladki bhi ladke ko chahne lagti hai.baat shadi tak pahooch jati hai.par ladki ko bharosa nahi hai ki ladka ussse sacha pyar karta hai.doosari baat usse ladke ki maa bhi pasand nahi thi.
issliye ussne ek shart rakhi.
agar tum mujhe apni maa ka dil nikal kar doge ,tho hi mai tumse shaadi karungi,ladki ne kaha.ladka yeh sunkar bahoot hairaan ho gaya.woh apni maa se bahoot payar karata tha ,par woh uss ladki ko bhi khona nahi chahta tha.so woh raaji ho gaya.

akela my mum used to tell us this story when we were little, you just brought some beautiful memories back for me. thanks for that. and it's so true no one can compare 2a mother's love.
ussne apni maa ka dil nikaal diya.phir woh ladki ki taraf bhaga.raaste mai usse thokar lagi auur woh gir gaya.
dil se awaj aaye 'beta kahi chhot tho nahi lagi'
ladke ki aankho ke aage andhera chha gaya.kisi tarah woh himmat batorkar ladki ke paas pahucha.
tho ladki ne kaha  mai tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti.jo kisi ladki ke liye apni maa ko maar sakta hai,woh kisi auur ke liye mujhe bhi maar sakta hai.
yeh sunkar ladke ki aankho ke aage andhera chha gaya auur woh wahi gir pada.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2005, 09:38:42 PM »
good one!!!
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dhadkan
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2005, 09:31:25 AM »
nice story
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main_aisa_hi_hoon
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2005, 06:54:44 PM »
nice story i heard before but still very good n heart touching
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