Aadi huye sharaab ke.." ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on March 26, 2012, 08:39:14 AM
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Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga..............

To lutf uthaiye,

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......





Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha


Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath pamane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha


Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha


Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha


Ley na jaye ParwaaZ barbaadiyoN ki raah per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koi bahana naa raha
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2012, 08:46:15 AM »
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Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha


Ley na jaye ParwaaZ barbaadiyoN ki raah per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koi bahana naa raha[/b]
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Bade khubsurat , rindaana  kalaam  se  nawaaza  hai.
Meri taraf se tahe dil se bahut baut mubarakbaad
aur daad qubool karein.
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2012, 08:51:08 AM »
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Parwaaz bhai kaafi hunarmandee se kahe gaye ashaar in oar beshumaar daad. mubaarak ho
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2012, 08:51:40 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 26, 2012, 08:39:14 AM
Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga..............

To lutf uthaiye,

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......





Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha


Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath pamane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha


Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha


Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha


Ley na jaye ParwaaZ barbaadiyoN ki raah per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koi bahana naa raha


  achcha rindnamaa hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2012, 09:28:02 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 26, 2012, 08:39:14 AM
Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga..............

To lutf uthaiye,

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......





Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha         Applause Applause Applause


Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath pamane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha         Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha         icon_salut icon_salut


Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha      notworthy notworthy


Ley na jaye ParwaaZ barbaadiyoN ki raah per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koi bahana naa raha  hello2 hello2


Parwaz ji ati sunder daad kubuk karein
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2012, 09:30:25 AM »
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BAhut hi Maikash peskash hai ye aap ki parwaaz ji .. Bahut khub
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2012, 09:52:49 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooob Parwaaz Ji..

behad Khoobsurat Ghazal..Sabhi A'shaar bahut Khoob rahe Khaas Taur par yeh A'shaar Ke Kya kehne..

"Ghar Ghar Mein Ho Rahi Hai Maikashin Kuch Aisi
 Maikhane Hi Maikhane Hue Maikhana Naa Raha"

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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2012, 10:11:54 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 26, 2012, 08:39:14 AM
Ahel E Bazm ko mera salam,

Shayari E sharab ke padhne waloN ke liye aaj main ek khaas peshkash nazar pesh ker raha hun, abtak maine is forume ke iye kabhi dilse likhane ki koshish nahi ki thi per meri yeh koshish sabhi saaqi E yaar ke liye tahe dil se ki gayi hai, gar aapko pasand aaye to apne rai se nawaziyenga..............

To lutf uthaiye,

Mulayzaa farmaiye.......





Saaqi E yaar ka hi ab koyiN thikana naa raha
Aaj mere hi hisse kyuN koi paimana naa raha

dhal gaya , ab rindon ka zamaana na rahaa Applause Applause Applause
Sabhi ne badhaya tha, hath paimane ki taraf
YeH zamana us roz se woh zamana naa raha
isliye aisi behki-behki baatein karte ho ji
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Ghar, ghar mein ho rahi hai maikshiN kuch aisi
Maikhane hi maikhane hua maikhana na raha
 Applause Applause Applause

Uske aashique thi kayi pagal pan ki hadh tak
Dekh meri diwaangi koi uska diwana naa raha

khoob.khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ley na jaye ParwaaZ barbaadiyoN ki raah per
Aadi huye sharab ke aur koi bahana naa raha

kya baat hai. barbaad karne ke baad ye khyaal aaya janaab ko

aaj to chchaaaaaaaaaaaaa gye. oye sharaabi.......................!
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2012, 02:28:27 PM »
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bahut khoob parwaaz bhai vaah raja aa gaya. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2012, 04:45:23 PM »
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Bahut khoob! Parwaaz Saheb.
Khaas taur se second last sher bahut pasand aayaa.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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waa waa bhot khub bhot mast Applause Applause Applause
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