"" baati - maati ""

""
doobti kasti pe sawaar
               bujhhte diye ki baati
mitt jayega pal bhar me
               ban jayega tu bhi ek din maati

 kya gumaan, kya irshya-Jalan
     samajh bhi ja ab duniya
                 ka chalan

        tera mera iska uska
kya apna paraya
       sab dhara rah jayega bhaiya
        jagg hai ek saraaya

do ghoont pyar ke chaar bole
           mohabbat ke
    jee le zara tu ab bande
          kisi ka to sachha
               ! ban ke !
""

haha thanx---
"
jagg ke andhiyare ujjale hain sab
    ghani dhoop bhi ghupp andhiya
"
thanx

"
aji aapki wah bhi hain kamaal
   kaise aate hai ab dekho mujhe nirale khayal
"
thanx
"

wahji par soory ji kam kam kam aa gaya hi.... abhi aate hain

ham aa gaye kam karke...

bahot hi meaning ful aur sacchi baat likhi he apne nirala ji.....

kya gumaan kya irshya kya jalan.........

sach jo apne lkiha he wo sab samjte to he but us par jeet nahi pa sakte.........agar jeet jaye to har zindagi khushiyo se bhar jaye.....

bahot hi sundar aur prerna dene wali poetry he sahab...

thx for shairng it....

thanx Matrix ji
 and Rishi ji
aaplogo ko thoda achha laga bas kaafi hai.
Matrix ji aapne sahi farmaya.
amal karna bahut muskil hai.
"
thanx
"

wah aapne isko kaise dhunda aur pasand karne ke liye thanx
"
thanx
"