*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*:Kaifiyaat-ae-maye

Roja

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Peenewalon dekho mujhko kal tumhare haat main tha
Ek toote dil ka rahi raat mere saath tha
Pee saka jitna mujhe mai pitala hi gaya
Kya pata tha dard dil ka gham badta hi gaya
Hosh to uske ude mai magar badnaam hu...

Ek toota Jaam hu.... :cry:

Janta hu dil shama ka raat ka aur saki ka bhi
Zindagi hisab hai beete ka bhi bhaki ka bhi
Dard dil ki mai dawa hu, ik nashili-si hawa hu
Gam bhulata hu, dilon ke phir bhi mai ik bad.dua hu
Shaka-toote-phool ka mai ashq-e=paigam hu...

Ek toota Jaam hu.... :cry:

Pee ke mujhko is jahan main khush nahi koyee hua
Bekasi ne, bekali ne bebasi se hi chua
Jee nahi sakte magar bin mere kuch besahare
Phir bhi aisa kaun hai jo naam to mera dulate
Sehar tak mai saat rahta phir bhi doobi sham hu..

Ek toota Jaam hu.... :cry:

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Rajbir

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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2007, 12:20:25 AM »

Roja

"Ek toota Jaam Hu..." =D> =D> =D>

Keep going ... long way to go :arrow:


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Pooja

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2007, 01:35:07 AM »

bahoot khoob Roja...


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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2007, 04:45:57 PM »

Nice words.. umda koshish !


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Roja

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2007, 02:19:46 AM »

Thanks for coming Rajvirji, Pooja di, and Ricky ji...


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Roja

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Re : Zindagi Maikade main

«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2007, 04:36:22 PM »

Zindagi maikhade main guzarti rahe
Mayi piyale main yaaron thirakti rahe

(Mayi = Madhira)

Laa pila sakiya tujhko meri kasam
Daur per daur ho raat talti rahe

Tak rahe hai khade ranjo-gham-o-sitam
Maikashi ab shabbe-roj chalti rahe

Kya pilaya mujhe shukhriya sakhiya
Umer teri panahon main palti rahe

Jham yu hi bhara ho hamesha mera
Her ghadi yu hi sajti sawarti rahe

Chorna maikada ab toh mumkin nahi
Chahe dunia jale ya sulagti rahe

Mai karu tarak-mayi mere bas main kaho
Tauba karti hai dunia toh karti rahe

Diljalon ke liye maikada khuld hai
Yeh pavitra jagah yu hi khilti rahe

Aadmiyat mile maikade main mujhe
Mayi-parsthon ke sang ab guzarti rahe

Sakhiya ye "Roja" bhi hai diljali
Isko jamo-mina yu hi milti rahe...

(Jamo-mina = Jaam or Madhira)
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Roja

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2007, 11:28:58 PM »

Hamein peene se matlab hai, jagah ki kaid kya "Roja"
Usee ka naam kabha rakh diya, bottal jahan rakh di..!! [/color]


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Roja

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Aa zara aaj pilade

«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2007, 07:00:23 PM »

Aa jara aaj mujh ko pila de
Kuch to ulfat ka aa kar sila de

Khel hoga tumhara ye lekin
Teri furkat, na mujh ko jala de

Dilnashi ho magar kya karu mai
Woh nahi tu ki wada nibha de

Baat dil ki chupaye usse mai
Yaar kaise kahu tu bata de

Bekhudi main kahi mer na jau
Hosh ki ab to koyee dava de

Gair ban kar rahu kyu mai dil main
Isliye naam mera mita de

Dil main tere "Roja" nahi hai
Bath sach ye kabhi to bata de...
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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2007, 06:16:17 AM »

Very Nice Topic and very beautifull words...!!!

Anjaam na bann jaye maikhana teri Mohabbat ka......
Yeh toota Jaam kahin kisi ke dil me chubh na jaye.......!!!


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rajrishi

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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2007, 03:16:53 PM »

very nice Roja and good reply shayar sahab very good,

Maine mana janab peeta hoon,
Bakhuda be hisab peeta hoon,
Log logo ka khoon peete hain,
Main to phir bhi sharab peeta hoon.


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Roja

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #10 on: October 01, 2007, 02:45:15 PM »

Shukhriya Gaurav ... nice line

and Rajrishi ji yours too nice 1 ji


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niraj_191

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«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2007, 03:27:53 PM »

in nigahon ko dekhe bagair ab main jee nahi sakta
magar kambakhat bina paimano ke mar bhi nahi sakta

dil-e-nadan ko tasavur to tab aaye jab vo apne hathon se pilaye
mujhe mat samjhao yaroon kyunki main janta hoon aisa ho nahi sakta


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Pooja

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2007, 03:47:37 PM »

bahoot khoob Roja!!! bahoot acha likha hai...

Good one BS JI, Raj & Niraj!!


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aankhain

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2007, 08:48:24 PM »

bohat acha likha=d>


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Tosha

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*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2007, 12:04:01 PM »

bahut hi accha likha hai Roja aap ne... sari acchi hai.

aur baki sab ne bhi bahut khoob likha hai ... dil ko accha laga.

kuch meri taraf se:-
wo bole peene se gm mittha nahin
tum is kadar behal yuh piya na karo
hum bole bina piya to gm chupta nahin
kya tumne kaha, tum zindgi jiya na karo


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