*Ek Toota Jaam Hu*

by Roja on July 07, 2007, 12:10:37 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 15, 2007, 12:05:57 AM »
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Thank you Niraj, Pooja di, Aankhain..

Bahut bahut shukhriya Tosha... and yours also very good lines.

Jhor sehkar gardishe-aiyaam ke
Ban gaye hai aadmi hum kaam ke

Humne dekhi hai subah ki her adha
Rang ab dekhenge talthi shaam ke

Sakhiya, tumko mubarak maikada
Hum to pyase hai fakat ik jaam ke

Bad gaye shaitan se bhi do kadam
Aadmi bas reh gaye hai naam ke

Mauj dunia se hame kya vasta
Hum pujari hai Khuda ke naam ke

 :D
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«Reply #16 on: October 15, 2007, 06:28:15 AM »
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Roja Talat nahi Tosha tongue3
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«Reply #17 on: October 15, 2007, 03:52:50 PM »
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Quote from: "Tosha"
Roja Talat nahi Tosha tongue3


oooh... Edited dear Sorry  sad5
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«Reply #18 on: October 15, 2007, 07:13:59 PM »
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lol!! koi gal nahi ... kabhi kabhi jam ke rang main choti choti bate ho hoti raheti hai.

thodi si aur chakhle, yeh strangi sama thoda aur dekhle
jo nahi hogi yeh piyali to hai gm bhi thokr maarte

teri bewafai ka zindgi me kya gila ab kare
haatho me jam labo pe piyaas yuhi sada rahe

vo jeene ko peete hai hum hai peene ko jeete
katil seena raundh rahe hai, hai hum muskra rahe

thodi si aur pee lane do yeh daard nahi kahi aur chupte
jo nahi hogi yeh piyali to hai gm bhi hai thokr maarte


थोड़ी सी और चखले, एह स्तरांगी समा थोड़ा और देखले
जो नही होगी एह पियाली तो है गम भी ठोकर मारते  

तेरी बेवफ़ाई का ज़िंदगी मैं क्या गिला अब करे
हाथो मे जाम लबो पे पियास यूही सदा रहे

वो जीने को पीते है हम है पीने को जीते
क़ातिल सीना रौन्ध रहे है, है हम मुस्करा रहे

थोड़ी से और पी लाने दो एह डार्द नही कही और छुपते  
जो नही होगी एह पियाली तो है गम भी है ठोकर मारते
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«Reply #19 on: October 15, 2007, 07:54:30 PM »
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Really nice ones roja........aur uss par Tosha ki madhoshi.......kya baat hai..............tongue3

Sabhi kehte hain maye se ulfat acchi nahi hoti,
Kuch palon ka sath hai, ye dosti sacchi nahi hoti..
Hum magar iss madhoshi ke deewane hain doston,
Jab tak bhi hai, sath hai ye, mehboob si kacchi nahi hoti..
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Tosha
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«Reply #20 on: October 15, 2007, 08:34:59 PM »
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kya baai hai janab wah ji wha!!


chashak me naache mera mahboob
mere mahboob ko slami do
suraagaar se tan pe chalka do
pee lene do magh in thamti saason ko

khyalo me hai mahboob
daard dil ka chupa lene do
chalkaya jahr unke labo ne
hamme is vish ke nashe me so lene do




चषक मे नाचे मेरा महबूब
मेरे महबूब को सलामी दो
सुरागार से टन पे छलका दो
पी लेने दो मघ इन थमती सासों को

ख़्यालो म है महबूब  
दार्द दिल का छुपा लेने दो
छलकाया ज़हर उनके लबो ने
हम्मे इस विष के नशे मे सो लेने दो
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Roja
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«Reply #21 on: October 30, 2007, 11:25:12 PM »
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Lovely reply.... Tosha and Thy Creator tongue3
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: October 30, 2007, 11:27:53 PM »
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Virodhi her hawa hai aur mai hu
Umadthi gam gata hai aur mai hu

Udhar dukh-dard hai sansaar ber ka
Idhar saki sura hai aur mai hu

Udhar hai tu aur teri bewafayi
Idhar meri wafa hai aur mai hu

Nibhaye gagan wale aap apni
Meri pyari dhara hai aur mai hu

Udhar aalochna aalochakon ki
Idhar meri kala hai aur mai hu...!!

 :lol:  :D  :lol:
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«Reply #23 on: October 31, 2007, 10:15:49 PM »
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bahoot khoob Tosha and Roja!!!
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«Reply #24 on: January 31, 2010, 04:54:42 PM »
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bahoot khoob Tosha and Roja!!!

Thanks Pooja di. Kahan ho aap?  sad7
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