hathon me jam aaya

by bekarar on July 10, 2008, 08:32:59 AM
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Kahne lage sharaabi, jo bekhudi me choor hain
Is dour-e-jindagi me, ye kaisa mukam aaya
Touba kai baar kee, fir tera khayal aaya,
Din dhala, shaam hui, haathon me jam aaya..

Dour-e-mufalisi bhi badi sogwar guzri,
Jise thokron me rakha, wo patthar hi kaam aaya,
Apni samajh pe ab mai, hairaan ho raha hun,
Fahrist-e-dushmano me yaaron ka naam aaya,

Taklifen uthai, dar-badar bhi bhatka,
Insaniyat ka rasta, kisko hai raas aaya
Jhooth kaha, dhokhe diye, duniyadari nibhai,
Tumne jo sikhaya, wo hunar hi kaam aaya

Ta jindagi tarsa kiye jinki nazar ke liye
Ab khak ho chuke aur unka salam aaya
Bakhabr anjam se tha, fir bhi gaya aagosh me
Lo fir se is shama pe, parwana kaam aaya

Likhne ke karobaar se touba hazar ki
Ban gai khudbkhud gazal, jo samne tera kalaam aaya
Baarishon ka mousam, wo roothna-manana
lo aaj fir yaad wo, kissa tamam aaya

dour-e-jindagi me ye kaisa mukam aaya
din dhala, sham hui, haathon me jaam aya
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2008, 08:36:34 AM »
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Sanjeev bro

Superb ! Excellent ! Applause Applause Applause

One can feel the whole poem ! Thumbs UP

din dhala, sham hui, haathon me jaam aya
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2008, 09:11:59 AM »
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shukriya raj bhai.....

(neeche mera pic kyun lagaya) DOH

dil ke bhare piyale, ashqon ki mai banai,
khwabon ka boot tumhaara, saaqi ke kaam aaya
ye dour-e-jindagi me kaisa makam aaya,
din dhala, sham hui haathon me jaam aaya
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2008, 09:13:34 AM »
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Wow.. Just Beautiful and very very meaningful... Applause
Excellent Work.. Sanjeev..  Clapping Smiley

Ek chhoti si koshish.. Arz hai,


"Dhadkan thithak gayi hai, halak tak aate aate,
Sulage Dil ke viraano mein ajab sa mukaam aaya!
Bujhi bujhi nigaah mein lau thartharaa utthi hai,
Rukhsat hoti zindagi ke naam tera paigaam aaya!!"
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2008, 09:18:35 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on July 10, 2008, 09:13:34 AM
Wow.. Just Beautiful and very very meaningful... Applause
Excellent Work.. Sanjeev..  Clapping Smiley

Ek chhoti si koshish.. Arz hai,


"Dhadkan thithak gayi hai, halak tak aate aate,
Sulage Dil ke viraano mein ajab sa mukaam aaya!
Bujhi bujhi nigaah mein lau thartharaa utthi hai,
Rukhsat hoti zindagi ke naam tera paigaam aaya!!"






 Applause Applause Applause

shukriya mahiya aur jo tumne likha ab gar me aur aage likhta to wo yehi tha.....mai bahoot surprise hun ki jo mai abhi soch hi raha tha wo tumhaari kalm se nikla........bahoot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2008, 09:54:53 AM »
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Mahiya ko sue kar do .... usne tumhari soch ko agwaah kiya Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2008, 10:29:58 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 10, 2008, 09:18:35 AM
Applause Applause Applause

shukriya mahiya aur jo tumne likha ab gar me aur aage likhta to wo yehi tha.....mai bahoot surprise hun ki jo mai abhi soch hi raha tha wo tumhaari kalm se nikla........bahoot khoob

Main bhi surprise hoon..  Shocked Even More Yeh meri kalam me kaise aur kab aa gaya.. NaNaNa
Neways, Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka..  notworthy

Quote from: Rajbir on July 10, 2008, 09:54:53 AM
Mahiya ko sue kar do .... usne tumhari soch ko agwaah kiya Laughing hard Laughing hard

Laughing hard

Agwaah nahin kiya.. samajhne ki koshish ki..  NaNaNa

Khair, Samajh ki baatein Aapko samajh nahin aayeingi...  tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2008, 11:07:58 AM »
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chali jab wafa ki baaten aur ishqon ke kisse,
tera naam yakbayak labon pe, sare aam aaya
badi shiddaton se tujhko gaali hazaar di
har baar dua-on me bhi tera hi naam aaya,
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 11:10:50 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 10, 2008, 11:07:58 AM
chali jab wafa ki baaten aur ishqon ke kisse,
tera naam yakbayak labon pe, sare aam aaya
badi shiddaton se tujhko gaali hazaar di
har baar dua-on me bhi tera hi naam aaya,



Kya baat hai... chha gaye aap toh.. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2008, 11:39:07 AM »
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shukriya shikha....arz hai.....

waqt-e-rukhsati me,na mai khali haath aaya
kuch khilkhilate pal, kuch lamhe veeraan laya
kuch yaaden maili kuchali, kuch uljhe hue sawal
na poocho wahan se mera, kya-kya saman aaya,
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2008, 08:10:49 PM »
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hindu kah saka na, musalmaan kah saka,
unke liye bhi mazhabab, ab mere naam aaya,
jo paida hua jahan me, dekha hai maine inme
kabhi rahim ko aur kabhi inme bhi raam paya
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2008, 08:19:04 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 10, 2008, 08:32:59 AM
Kahne lage sharaabi, jo bekhudi me choor hain
Is dour-e-jindagi me, ye kaisa mukam aaya
Touba kai baar kee, fir tera khayal aaya,
Din dhala, shaam hui, haathon me jam aaya..

Dour-e-mufalisi bhi badi sogwar guzri,
Jise thokron me rakha, wo patthar hi kaam aaya,
Apni samajh pe ab mai, hairaan ho raha hun,
Fahrist-e-dushmano me yaaron ka naam aaya,

Taklifen uthai, dar-badar bhi bhatka,
Insaniyat ka rasta, kisko hai raas aaya
Jhooth kaha, dhokhe diye, duniyadari nibhai,
Tumne jo sikhaya, wo hunar hi kaam aaya

Ta jindagi tarsa kiye jinki nazar ke liye
Ab khak ho chuke aur unka salam aaya
Bakhabr anjam se tha, fir bhi gaya aagosh me
Lo fir se is shama pe, parwana kaam aaya

Likhne ke karobaar se touba hazar ki
Ban gai khudbkhud gazal, jo samne tera kalaam aaya
Baarishon ka mousam, wo roothna-manana
lo aaj fir yaad wo, kissa tamam aaya

dour-e-jindagi me ye kaisa mukam aaya
din dhala, sham hui, haathon me jaam aya

Yeh aap ki may aur jaam ki baaten,,, kya nirala andaaz hai...
Buhat pasand aaya buhat umda likha hai,,, bhai jaan aapne...
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2008, 08:32:36 PM »
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wah!!!  wah!!! wah!!! Jitani tareef ki jaaye kam hai!!! BAhoot khoob!! Sanjeev jee

Bahoot acha sath diya hai Mahiya!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2008, 03:51:27 AM »
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shukriya sami.....
dhanywad pooja ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2008, 07:35:52 AM »
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badli hui fizayen, ye betuki barsat
lagta hai dar se unke, fir koi nakaam aaya,
ghar ke haal chal ki mujhe khabar nahi hai,
al-subah hi nikla tha, sare-shaam aaya
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