hathon me jam aaya

by bekarar on July 10, 2008, 08:32:59 AM
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«Reply #45 on: July 11, 2008, 03:04:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 11, 2008, 02:57:11 PM
dil behlane ko galib khayal acha hai... janati hu kaya likha hai sad5 

MAGAR DIL RAKHNE KE LIYE SHUKARIA!!!


raheeman heera kub kahe laakh taka mera mol.
heere ko uski keemat kahaan pata hoti he!

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«Reply #46 on: July 11, 2008, 03:12:14 PM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #47 on: July 11, 2008, 06:29:40 PM »
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bekarar ji ka offline hona swaabhavik he ub,din dhal gaya..shaam ho gayi..aur haath khaali....
ub to sub saaf he---wafa dekho inki!!

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jaam ki chand baaten kya likhin  bas bahana mil gaya doston ko dushmani nibhane ka..........janabe ali aap kahan hain?
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«Reply #48 on: July 11, 2008, 06:36:33 PM »
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Pooja ji,

Aap bhole na bane...aapka PM jo aapne mujhe kya thaa yeh bataane ko ki sanjeev ji roz karreb kareeb is waqt-shaam hote he(din dhalne ke baad) kuch samay ke liye chale jaate he aur jub laut ke aatey he to bahut typing error karte hue likhtey he...maine unhe fwd kar diya thaa..ki kya vichaardhara he aapki unke baare mein.(ki unhe sambhhalni bhee nahi aati sharaab).
Rajbir ji aur maine to matra sahi post ko sahi jagah tuk pahuchaane ka chota sa karya kiya he.

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magar mai chup rahunga.................
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«Reply #49 on: July 12, 2008, 03:43:57 AM »
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Maana ki tum haseen ho,,
Par lagte nahin haseen,,
Ek ghont jo utra to,,
Tum lagne lage mahjabeen..

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Maana ki hosh men nahin,,
Par peete hain zoq men,,
Aati hai Jumbash-e-sukhan,,
Jab halaq se utre maye..

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Hum ne kabhi maye ko chhua tak nahin...
Par doston ki kaifiyaat hain jo likh raha hun...
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«Reply #50 on: July 12, 2008, 03:52:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause nice lines sami tumhaari kami si lag rahi thi......
bahoot khoob

har shaam saath de,
ek sahara hai ye,
kisko itna waqt,
koun ab aata hai,
karen do char baaten,
ab waqt humara hai,
kabhi labon se choo ja-ye,
kabhi aankhon se chalka-ye

paimane ki numaish,
nahi mera irada hai,
mai saqi ka raha,aur
pyaala humara hai

do ghunt peekar hi,
hale dil batate ho,
karoge hosh kee baaten,
madhoshi ka bahana hai
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«Reply #51 on: July 12, 2008, 04:12:29 AM »
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bahoot khoob Clapping Smiley

sabhi ne ek se bad kar ek likha hai...
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«Reply #52 on: July 12, 2008, 08:49:10 AM »
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Hum ne kabhi maye ko chhua tak nahin...
Par doston ki kaifiyaat hain jo likh raha hun...
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bahut accha likha he janaab syeednaami ji,pur mein aapki kavita ka nahi niche likhi tippani ka jwaab dena chahunga.


maye meri awaara nahi
ki hur koi choota rahe
dilwaalon ka andaaz he
ya diljalon ka saaz he
maye ke mun mein jhaaka jub
fir khula ye raaz he

jis garv se kehte ho tum
''maine maye ko nahi chua''
nazarandaaz maye ko yeh ulhaana
aur fir bhee deti he dua
ho nahi grahak tum uske
kehti nahi wo dar-badar
aur bin chuye tumhe ye pur
kur gayi dekho kaisa asar

bhram ko apne tod kar
tu kub talak us-se rootha rahe
maye meri awaara nahi
ki hur koi choota rahe!

Prateek
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«Reply #53 on: July 12, 2008, 09:45:39 AM »
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ab kya likhun ...kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha.....prateek bhai aapne itna khoobsoorat likha hai...bahoot khoob.........

ho nahi grahak tum uske
kehti nahi wo dar-badar
aur bin chuye tumhe ye pur
kur gayi dekho kaisa asar
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«Reply #54 on: July 12, 2008, 10:46:13 AM »
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ab kya likhun ...kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha.....prateek bhai aapne itna khoobsoorat likha hai...bahoot khoob.........


bekarar ji,

kyon saadharan ko vishesh bata kar hansi ka patra banaate ho...
hum fuley nahi samaate he, tum mun hi mun muskaate ho!

shukriya hazoor.

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«Reply #55 on: July 12, 2008, 10:52:20 AM »
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aapki baat par Galib sahab ka ek sher yaad aa gaya...

kahaan maikhaane ka darwaaza 'GHalib' aur kahaan waaiz
par itana  jaante haiN  kal wo jaata tha ke ham  nikle,

hazaron khwahishen aisi ki hur khwahish pe dum nikale......
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«Reply #56 on: July 12, 2008, 11:10:02 AM »
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Ek se badh kar ek likh rahe hai sab is thread mein..  icon_thumleft
Its really very Nice reading each and every post of this.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #57 on: July 12, 2008, 11:31:24 AM »
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shukriya mahiya

mai rahun aur tu rahe, saaqi rahe,
mangne ko fir khuda se, aur kya baaqi rahe,
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«Reply #58 on: July 18, 2008, 04:21:18 AM »
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Dil rahe dimaagh rahe aur hosh rahe...
Peenewalo dil men Khuda ka khaof rahe...
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«Reply #59 on: July 19, 2008, 11:40:36 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai.... ek se bad kar ek likh rahe hai sabhi yaha!!!!
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