hothon ka jaam de humko~~Saahil

by salil2002 on July 11, 2009, 06:10:47 AM
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aa pila de mujhe yeh jaam tere hothon ka
maye toh peete huye arsa ho chuka humko
aaj nasha ho mujhe toh ho tere ishq ka
is maye ka nasha toh chad chuka humko

ae saaki aa beith mere pahlu main
tu kyun gairon k jaam chhooti hain
apni in aankhon main basa le mujhko
aaj doobne ka mazaa lene de humko

kii tera aashiq koi nahin mehfil mein
aa aankhon mein jhaank jaan le humko
is dil kii mohabbat, toh tere liye hai saaki
tu apni mohabbat ka nishaan de humko

aa chal tujhe taaron k paas le chaloon
Bas apne kucch palon ka inaam de humko
chand saansein hai "SAAHIL" kii je lene de
phir toh bas aaraam hi aaram hai humko
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 06:19:11 AM »
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Wah Wah Saahil Ji! Bahut he khoobsurat likha hai! Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 06:39:12 AM »
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Waaah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Mazaa aa gaya pad kar.. Bahoot Hi khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 08:50:53 AM »
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kya baat hai  saahil ji.....

aaja tu saaki aa, paas mere aa bhi jaa,
dire- dire machalti jumhti mere paas aa,
aa bhi jaa, apne hathon se mujhko pila,
aaja tu saaki aa,paas mere aa bhi jaa.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 09:08:05 AM »
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very nice sahil ji

jasbir singh
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 02:46:10 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 11, 2009, 06:19:11 AM
Wah Wah Saahil Ji! Bahut he khoobsurat likha hai! Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause
Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 06:39:12 AM
Waaah Saahil Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai.. Mazaa aa gaya pad kar.. Bahoot Hi khoob!
Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 11, 2009, 09:08:05 AM
very nice sahil ji

jasbir singh
shukriya jasbir bhai, sophi and deepati
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 02:47:34 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 11, 2009, 08:50:53 AM
kya baat hai  saahil ji.....

aaja tu saaki aa, paas mere aa bhi jaa,
dire- dire machalti jumhti mere paas aa,
aa bhi jaa, apne hathon se mujhko pila,
aaja tu saaki aa,paas mere aa bhi jaa.
shukriya cara dear ....aek aur ummda reply aapki taraf se
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2009, 10:20:20 AM »
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Wah Kya baat Hai Salil Bhai.. Behad Nasheeele Alfaaz Likhe hain dost.. Winking Bahut Hi Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai.. Padh kar Bahut Accha laga.. Daad Kubool karen...!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2009, 10:46:35 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 11, 2009, 06:10:47 AM
aa pila de mujhe yeh jaam tere hothon ka
maye toh peete huye arsa ho chuka humko
aaj nasha ho mujhe toh ho tere ishq ka
is maye ka nasha toh chad chuka humko

ae saaki aa beith mere pahlu main
tu kyun gairon k jaam chhooti hain
apni in aankhon main basa le mujhko
aaj doobne ka mazaa lene de humko

kii tera aashiq koi nahin mehfil mein
aa aankhon mein jhaank jaan le humko
is dil kii mohabbat, toh tere liye hai saaki
tu apni mohabbat ka nishaan de humko

aa chal tujhe taaron k paas le chaloon
Bas apne kucch palon ka inaam de humko
chand saansein hai "SAAHIL" kii je lene de
phir toh bas aaraam hi aaram hai humko



Wahhhhh....... bahut accha likha aapne saahil ..wah wah..

Last four line mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya dear. Good work keep up.  Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 09:12:45 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... Good one Saahil bro!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2009, 11:12:22 PM »
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It's really nice good work Mr. Saahil.
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2009, 11:16:03 PM »
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Wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob ,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2009, 12:18:12 AM »
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wah bhai saahil kiya baath hai
kon baaitho ho gairon ki paalko me.

 Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2009, 09:58:26 AM »
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Nice one Saahil Ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2009, 12:21:29 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 12, 2009, 10:20:20 AM
Wah Kya baat Hai Salil Bhai.. Behad Nasheeele Alfaaz Likhe hain dost.. Winking Bahut Hi Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai.. Padh kar Bahut Accha laga.. Daad Kubool karen...!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 10:46:35 AM

Wahhhhh....... bahut accha likha aapne saahil ..wah wah..

Last four line mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya dear. Good work keep up.  Thumbs UP

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 09:12:45 PM
wah kaya baat hai... Good one Saahil bro!!
Quote from: MHussain on July 15, 2009, 11:12:22 PM
It's really nice good work Mr. Saahil.

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 15, 2009, 11:16:03 PM
Wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob ,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause :clap:excellent
Quote from: rizwa00 on July 16, 2009, 12:18:12 AM
wah bhai saahil kiya baath hai
kon baaitho ho gairon ki paalko me.

 Applause

bahut bahut shukriya mann bhai,. roja dear, pooja di, rajesh bhai, madhuwesh deear, Mhussain bhai and rizwa bhai
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