ishwar aur madira

by Prateek Mardia on April 15, 2008, 05:19:07 PM
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                              Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                              Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                              Kyon choru mein saath kisika
                              Mujhko he dono se aas

                              Tark utha-te log bohut he
                              Pur mere to dono he khaas

                             Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                             Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                             Ek shikaayat bus choti si
                             Shayad sunle woh ardaas

                            Tere dar se kal seedha pohucha
                            Swagat -saaki-sampurn-abhaas-*

                            Nahi koi bhee fikra kasta
                            Nahi koi kehta- vanvaas*

                           Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                           Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                          Aur wahan se dar tere fir lauta
                          Uthi ungaliyan kitni saath.

                          Meri bhakti mein masti thee
                          Unhe nahi aayi yeh raas

                         Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                         Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                         Nahi gila tumse he prabhuvar
                         Arz yahi  karti har shwaas

                        Unhe Pyaar  jaatne ka var dedo
                        Jo bante he tere daas

                       Gyaan unhe dhyaan lagane ka kuch dedo
                       Samajh sake kya hoti ‘pyaas’.

                       Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                       Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas [/color] [/color]                        prateek                      



*swagat-saaki-sampurn-abhaas—yeh jaanke ki koi iswar ka chahne waala unki sharan mein betha hein—swagat mein,maan –samman mein,mehmaannavazi mein kahi koi kami nahi ki saaki ne.

*Vanvaas---kisi ne bhee mehfil se uth jaane ka ya wahan nahi aane ka ishaara nahi kiya.
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2008, 05:23:30 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai prateek ji,, bahoot hi ache se apne shabdo ko kavita main piroya hai.. good creation!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2008, 05:37:27 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai prateek ji,, bahoot hi ache se apne shabdo ko kavita main piroya hai.. good creation!!!

shukriya pooja ji.

shabd nahi he yeh haala he,sach poocho gum ka pyaala he
kabhi bhatakti kabhi bhabkti,jaam nahi he yeh jwaala he.

prateek
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2008, 05:39:04 PM »
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App Harivansh bachhan rai ji ki kitab Madhushala ki yaad dila rahe hai!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2008, 05:44:45 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 15, 2008, 05:39:04 PM
App Harivansh bachhan rai ji ki kitab Madhushala ki yaad dila rahe hai!!!

unki amar kriti''madhushaala'' ki yaad agar meri tukbandi se ho jaaye
to yeh tukbandi bhee sammanit he.shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2008, 04:12:27 PM »
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Aap ne kuch mushkil words ka arth b likh diya tha isliye padne main suvida huyi hame. bahut accha likha hai aapne. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2008, 04:13:27 PM »
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arre bhool gayi Thanks dehna tha for the nice poem with meaning k liye
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2008, 02:24:45 PM »
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sonia ji,

aapko kavita pasand aayi,lujhe iski khushi he,aapka bhee shukriya,hausla afzaahi ka.

Prateek
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2008, 03:26:56 PM »
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Tum laakh chhupao pyar magar
duniya ko pata chal jaayega
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Prateek Mitr,

Inhi rachnaon ke anveshan men hi bhatakta rahta hun, par aap bhi aise chhalkapat ho ki pal men swaha pal men dhuwan ban adrishya sthan ke bhitar kyun chhup jaate ho.
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2008, 03:51:18 PM »
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Bohot khoob Prateek Ji Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2008, 05:28:21 PM »
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syeednaami ji,

shukriya ki aapne fir dhoond nikaala.

Celmira ji,
Thanks a lot for prasing above poetry.

Prateek
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2008, 10:23:54 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 15, 2008, 05:19:07 PM
                             
                              Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                              Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                              Kyon choru mein saath kisika
                              Mujhko he dono se aas

                              Tark utha-te log bohut he
                              Pur mere to dono he khaas

                             Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                             Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                             Ek shikaayat bus choti si
                             Shayad sunle woh ardaas

                            Tere dar se kal seedha pohucha
                            Swagat -saaki-sampurn-abhaas-*

                            Nahi koi bhee fikra kasta
                            Nahi koi kehta- vanvaas*

                           Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                           Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                          Aur wahan se dar tere fir lauta
                          Uthi ungaliyan kitni saath.

                          Meri bhakti mein masti thee
                          Unhe nahi aayi yeh raas

                         Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                         Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                         Nahi gila tumse he prabhuvar
                         Arz yahi  karti har shwaas

                        Unhe Pyaar  jaatne ka var dedo
                        Jo bante he tere daas

                       Gyaan unhe dhyaan lagane ka kuch dedo
                       Samajh sake kya hoti ‘pyaas’.

                       Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                       Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas [/color] [/color]                        prateek                     



*swagat-saaki-sampurn-abhaas—yeh jaanke ki koi iswar ka chahne waala unki sharan mein betha hein—swagat mein,maan –samman mein,mehmaannavazi mein kahi koi kami nahi ki saaki ne.

*Vanvaas---kisi ne bhee mehfil se uth jaane ka ya wahan nahi aane ka ishaara nahi kiya.


bahoot khoob likha hai... lazawab
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2008, 10:30:22 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai... lazawab

shukriya bekaraar ji aapki pasandgi ka. Khoob ka to pata nahi pur bahut tedha likha he...(fonts lagta he seedhi lines mein nahi aaye)...Oho!!! ub samjha....madira ka asar he un pur.ladhkhada rahe he....

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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2008, 11:08:32 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 19, 2008, 10:30:22 AM
shukriya bekaraar ji aapki pasandgi ka. Khoob ka to pata nahi pur bahut tedha likha he...(fonts lagta he seedhi lines mein nahi aaye)...Oho!!! ub samjha....madira ka asar he un pur.ladhkhada rahe he....
Prateek
peene ke baad to achche khase log bhi ladkhada jate hain..
Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2008, 07:05:10 PM »
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kya baat he,bekarar ji,mun jeet liya aapne bhee.

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