ishwar aur madira

by Prateek Mardia on April 15, 2008, 05:19:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 23, 2009, 01:51:19 PM »
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Behtareen rachna hai Prateekji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ishwar aur Madira
Good comparision...Ek pe aastha...dusere pe vishwaas
Sabdo ka sunder prayog kiya hai aapne chun chun kar...

Anaam
                             
                              Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                              Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                              Kyon choru mein saath kisika
                              Mujhko he dono se aas

                              Tark utha-te log bohut he
                              Pur mere to dono he khaas

                             Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                             Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                             Ek shikaayat bus choti si
                             Shayad sunle woh ardaas

                            Tere dar se kal seedha pohucha
                            Swagat -saaki-sampurn-abhaas-*

                            Nahi koi bhee fikra kasta
                            Nahi koi kehta- vanvaas*

                           Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                           Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                          Aur wahan se dar tere fir lauta
                          Uthi ungaliyan kitni saath.

                          Meri bhakti mein masti thee
                          Unhe nahi aayi yeh raas

                         Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                         Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                         Nahi gila tumse he prabhuvar
                         Arz yahi  karti har shwaas

                        Unhe Pyaar  jaatne ka var dedo
                        Jo bante he tere daas

                       Gyaan unhe dhyaan lagane ka kuch dedo
                       Samajh sake kya hoti ‘pyaas’.

                       Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                       Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas
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*swagat-saaki-sampurn-abhaas—yeh jaanke ki koi iswar ka chahne waala unki sharan mein betha hein—swagat mein,maan –samman mein,mehmaannavazi mein kahi koi kami nahi ki saaki ne.

*Vanvaas---kisi ne bhee mehfil se uth jaane ka ya wahan nahi aane ka ishaara nahi kiya.

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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #16 on: January 23, 2009, 05:19:17 PM »
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Behtareen rachna hai Prateekji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ishwar aur Madira
Good comparision...Ek pe aastha...dusere pe vishwaas
Sabdo ka sunder prayog kiya hai aapne chun chun kar...

Anaam

aapki hausla afzhai ka atyant shukrguzaar hu aaam ji. aapko yeh rachna pasand aayi yeh jaan kar accha laga.
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«Reply #17 on: January 31, 2009, 01:02:24 PM »
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Ek aur bahut he shaandaar shashakt rachna....Mubarak ho...Prateek
 Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: January 31, 2009, 01:34:25 PM »
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                              Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                              Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                              Kyon choru mein saath kisika
                              Mujhko he dono se aas

                              Tark utha-te log bohut he
                              Pur mere to dono he khaas

                             Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                             Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                             Ek shikaayat bus choti si
                             Shayad sunle woh ardaas

                            Tere dar se kal seedha pohucha
                            Swagat -saaki-sampurn-abhaas-*

                            Nahi koi bhee fikra kasta
                            Nahi koi kehta- vanvaas*

                           Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                           Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                          Aur wahan se dar tere fir lauta
                          Uthi ungaliyan kitni saath.

                          Meri bhakti mein masti thee
                          Unhe nahi aayi yeh raas

                         Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                         Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas

                         Nahi gila tumse he prabhuvar
                         Arz yahi  karti har shwaas

                        Unhe Pyaar  jaatne ka var dedo
                        Jo bante he tere daas

                       Gyaan unhe dhyaan lagane ka kuch dedo
                       Samajh sake kya hoti ‘pyaas’.

                       Ishwar tujhme meri aastha
                       Madira tujhpe mera vishwaas
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*swagat-saaki-sampurn-abhaas—yeh jaanke ki koi iswar ka chahne waala unki sharan mein betha hein—swagat mein,maan –samman mein,mehmaannavazi mein kahi koi kami nahi ki saaki ne.

*Vanvaas---kisi ne bhee mehfil se uth jaane ka ya wahan nahi aane ka ishaara nahi kiya.


wah ji kya asth aur kya vishas mein samndh dikhaya hain, veryy nice ji


ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwaas
ishwar rahtey sada dilon meain
madira milti shaam saaki saar

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwas

geeta saar yahi hain bhakton
ishwar mile dwaron-dwaar
saaki  saar yahi hain yaaron
madira mile baram-baar.

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishvas

kuch dikhate apni bhakti,
kuch rakhte sirf vishwas
kuch peete chupte chupate
hum toh peete sare-bazar

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwas
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #19 on: February 01, 2009, 03:51:46 PM »
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Ek aur bahut he shaandaar shashakt rachna....Mubarak ho...Prateek
 Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aapke manobal badhaane se kuch urja si aa jaati hai. shukriya.
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #20 on: February 01, 2009, 03:52:58 PM »
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wah ji kya asth aur kya vishas mein samndh dikhaya hain, veryy nice ji


ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwaas
ishwar rahtey sada dilon meain
madira milti shaam saaki saar

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwas

geeta saar yahi hain bhakton
ishwar mile dwaron-dwaar
saaki  saar yahi hain yaaron
madira mile baram-baar.

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishvas

kuch dikhate apni bhakti,
kuch rakhte sirf vishwas
kuch peete chupte chupate
hum toh peete sare-bazar

ishwar tujhmein meri astha
madira tujhmein mera vishwas


saraahna ke liye shukriya rawat ji.aapne bhee dilchasp likha hai.
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