jaam-- mujhe maaf karna~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 11:56:37 AM
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jaam lekar chala aaya hoon mehfil mein
behak jaun toh mujhe maaf karna

dil main hai dard bahut thehra hua
aaj oose sabko sunaao toh maaf karna

jara bhar do jaam mera yeh phir se khali hai
chhalak jaaye isse ashq toh ise maaf karna

kya hua tum sab khamosh kyun ho
yeh mera jashn hai ise tum abaad rakhna

mehfil mein khatam na ho paayengi roshni
jo kam ho lakdiyaan ,toh Ghar se mere aab karna

saaki aa paas mere dil ko behal jaane de
chhu loon jo tere lab toh mujhe maaf karna

yoon toh bahut khwahish hai meri khud ko mitaane kii
jo mit jun mein yaaron toh mujhe yaad rakhna
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 12:07:58 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 11:56:37 AM


jaam lekar chala aaya hoon mehfil mein
behak jaun toh mujhe maaf karna

dil main hai dard bahut thehra hua
aaj oose sabko sunaao toh maaf karna

jara bhar do jaam mera yeh phir se khali hai
chhalak jaaye isse ashq toh ise maaf karna

kya hua tum sab khamosh kyun ho
yeh mera jashn hai ise tum abaad rakhna

mehfil mein khatam na ho paayengi roshni
jo kam ho lakdiyaan ,toh Ghar se mere aab karna

saaki aa paas mere dil ko behal jaane de
chhu loon jo tere lab toh mujhe maaf karna

yoon toh bahut khwahish hai meri khud ko mitaane kii
jo mit jun mein yaaron toh mujhe yaad rakhna

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji, Bahut Umda likhte hai aap aajkal, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Mein hoon thodi si moohfatt,
Keh du agar buri baat to mujhe maaf karna,

Sachayi dekhkar chup reh nahi sakti,
Jhooth bolne par na du saath to mujhe maaf karna,

Dost to hai jaan meri aur dushman pehchaan,
Phir bhi agar samajh na pao to muje maaf karna,

Aata nahi mujhe hasna gaana khushiyoon me,
Aake mehfil-e-rounak me dil ko dukhao to muje maaf karna,

Meri zindagi ne diye honge bahut gamm tumhe,
Meri mout pe bhi nikal aaye agar aansoo tere to mujhe
maaf karna...

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 02:08:33 PM »
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Chu lu jo tere lab mujhe maf karna.....Wah Salil aaj to tumne khush kar diya. Bohat Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 02:12:38 PM »
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bahoth qoob salil kya likha wah bhai wah ..allah khush rakhe tumhe !!

Qadeer
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anush
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2009, 06:32:33 PM »
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 Applause bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne salil ji.

 
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2009, 06:36:29 PM »
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 Applause shally ji aapne bhi bahut kamaal ka likha hai

" meri zindagi ne diye honge bahut gamm tumhe
meri maut par bhi nikal aaye agar aansoo tere to mujhe maaf karna " wah!
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 07:04:12 PM »
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wah wah wah kaay baat hai salil ji bahoot khoob likha apne... us se bhio kamal shally apne jawab diya hai...

Good work by both!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2009, 04:52:16 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 30, 2009, 02:08:33 PM
Chu lu jo tere lab mujhe maf karna.....Wah Salil aaj to tumne khush kar diya. Bohat Khoob.
Quote from: anush on April 30, 2009, 06:32:33 PM
Applause bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne salil ji.

 
Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 07:04:12 PM
wah wah wah kaay baat hai salil ji bahoot khoob likha apne... us se bhio kamal shally apne jawab diya hai...

Good work by both!!!


thanks sajid bhai........ anush  and pooja di.........aaplogo ne sach mein aur likhne kii prerna di
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 04:57:18 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 30, 2009, 12:07:58 PM

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji, Bahut Umda likhte hai aap aajkal, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Mein hoon thodi si moohfatt,
Keh du agar buri baat to mujhe maaf karna,

Sachayi dekhkar chup reh nahi sakti,
Jhooth bolne par na du saath to mujhe maaf karna,

Dost to hai jaan meri aur dushman pehchaan,
Phir bhi agar samajh na pao to muje maaf karna,

Aata nahi mujhe hasna gaana khushiyoon me,
Aake mehfil-e-rounak me dil ko dukhao to muje maaf karna,

Meri zindagi ne diye honge bahut gamm tumhe,
Meri mout pe bhi nikal aaye agar aansoo tere to mujhe
maaf karna...

Shally.


bahut achche shally bahut hi khoobsurat reply kiya hai aapne.........

nazrein jhukaaye beitha hoon main kissii se kuch nahin kehta
ashq jo karde bayaan haqeeqat toh mujhe maaf karna

teri aankhon mein dekhi hia maine nafrat khud k liye
meri dil mein dikh jaye mohabbat toh mujhe maaf karna

salika na pesh aaya tujhe jaam hothon se chhoone ka
jo kar di mehfil mein galat bat toh mujhe maaf karna

main toh chahta hi raha tujhe ummra bhar "Saahil"
tere labon par bhi aaye mera naam toh mujhe maaf karna
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2009, 05:02:13 AM »
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bahut khoob salil ji n anush ji.
wonderful.bahut pasand aaya.
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2009, 05:13:19 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Salil ji n Shally sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2009, 05:43:05 AM »
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good work salil
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2009, 07:45:50 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 01, 2009, 05:02:13 AM
bahut khoob salil ji n anush ji.
wonderful.bahut pasand aaya.
Quote from: salma786 on May 01, 2009, 05:13:19 AM
Bahoot khoob Salil ji n Shally sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Pooja on May 01, 2009, 05:43:05 AM
good work salil
thanks madhuwesh , salma ji and pooja di
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2009, 08:50:05 AM »
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Quote from: anush on April 30, 2009, 06:36:29 PM
Applause shally ji aapne bhi bahut kamaal ka likha hai

" meri zindagi ne diye honge bahut gamm tumhe
meri maut par bhi nikal aaye agar aansoo tere to mujhe maaf karna " wah!

Shukriya Anush Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2009, 08:50:30 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 07:04:12 PM
wah wah wah kaay baat hai salil ji bahoot khoob likha apne... us se bhio kamal shally apne jawab diya hai...

Good work by both!!!

Shukriya Pooja didi,

Shally.
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