Jaam-e-Ruqsar:Kaifiyaat-ae-maye

md.ayad

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MAIKADO KI MEHFIL ME AB HUMARA BHI NAAM HOGA SHAMIL Feared.

Apne Ruqsar ka wo jaam pilane lagte hai
Aetbar kare bhi tho un par kaise zaalim
Wo hume aksar nashe me ch'hod jaate hai

Unhe dekhna bhi ab Gunah hoga shayad sad11

Wo aksar Naqab pehne guzra karte hai
Mere AansuO ki Qadr karta nahi hai koi crybaby2

kyu hum begano ke liye inhe bahaya karte hai

Gar Pyar karna zulm hai tho hamaine kiya hai zulm
Mujhe mere zaalim se juda kyu karte hai
Mere Afsane me hone shumar dekho
KAHA KAHA SE PATHAR CHALE AATE HAI Clapping Smiley

wo paband they mere pyar me
aur main bhatakta tha unki yaad me tearyeyed

Shayad a jaadu tha Ishq ka ya thi hasad jawani ki BangHead

Hum Apno me Lazzat dhoonda karte hai
NAFS ki is Behkave aakar,Ae AYAD
HUMAPNE HI RAAH PAR KAANTE BICH'HA RAHE HAI................... Crying


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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 11:36:00 AM »

NiceOne Ayad Ji,.


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MHussain

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 10:48:43 PM »

Good effort Mr. Ayad, but try to balance the lines.
Example

Hum pee ke jame rukhsar behek jatey hayn
Kia masti hay jo madhosh se ho jatey hayn
Khoob nasha hay us ki har ada mein samaya
Kia Ramz hay yeh hum samajh na patey hayn

'Ramz'

This is a simple example of Rubai, follow the meter as mentioned.
Any help please let me know.


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md.ayad

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 08:02:41 AM »

Quote from: MHussain on June 09, 2009, 10:48:43 PM

Assalamu Alaikum
Hum abhi thode nahi bohat zyada kache shayar hain
Is liye galti ho to sudhar dena
yours Ayad


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Roja

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 08:05:19 AM »

Nice shayari Ayad ji..Accha laga padkar


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syednaami

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 11:37:35 AM »

MD.Ayad sahib,
Bahut bahtreen shayiri hai, parh kar achha laga...
Hussain Sahib, aap ne bhi achhi shayiri aur sabaq paish kiya hai...


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salil2002

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 11:45:36 AM »

ayad bhai pahle toh aapka yoindia mein swagat karte hain
........aur aapne yeh jo behtareen peshkash kii hai uske liye daad kabool kijiye


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_Vicky_

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2009, 06:25:36 AM »

Ayad Ji Behad Khubsoorat aur Dil Ko Chhoo jane Wale Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Lajawab Peshkash hai aapki.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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deepika_divya

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 04:52:25 PM »

wah Wah Ayed ji.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!


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md.ayad

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 07:56:33 AM »

Quote from: Mann on June 11, 2009, 06:25:36 AM

Ayad Ji Behad Khubsoorat aur Dil Ko Chhoo jane Wale Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. Lajawab Peshkash hai aapki.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

Aap sab Dost o ahbab ko is nacheez ki taraf se shukriya
khaas kar MANN sahab aap wo pehle shaqs hai jinho ne meri shayari su kar taliya bajai
syed.nami,saahil,sophi aap sab ka phir ek bar tahe dilse shukriya


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MHussain

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2009, 11:03:27 PM »

Not to disappoint you Mr. Ayad, just a little effort towards poetry. Waiting to see your new work.


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shab

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2009, 11:19:28 PM »

BADHIYA QALAAM HAI AAPKA AYAD SAHAB,HAME BHAA GAYI


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madhuwesh

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2009, 03:29:57 AM »

Beautiful creation mdayad ji. Clapping Smiley


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pandit

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Re: Jaam-e-Ruqsar

«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2009, 01:56:49 AM »

BAHUT ACCHE AYAD JEE..


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md.ayad

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KITAAB.......

«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 06:56:36 AM »

Zindagi ke sawalo ka Jawab Dhoondta hu
Dard ko kam kar sake wo sharab Dhoondta hu
WaQt ke Haatho majboor ek shaQs hu
Jo Jeene ka de Bahana WO KITAAB DHOONDTHA HU
NM


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