jab aaye mehfil meN tera NAAM peeta hooN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on November 20, 2012, 12:56:30 PM
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aaj khoob peene ko jee karta hai,teri yaadon me me sahi ,jeene ko jee karta hai,mana tu ho na sakegi meri kabhi,par humse na cheen tu apni wo yaaden sabhi..............



nazaron se nazaaron ke jaam peeta hoon,
jab aaye mehfil me tera naam,peeta hoon.

har din na peeta yahaan main yaaron,
bas jab-jab dhalti ye shaam,peeta hoon.

saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,
bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.

tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.

lagataar na kabhi peeta hooN "Taish",
har do lamha kar aaraam,peeta hoon.
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 04:15:10 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 12:56:30 PM
aaj khoob peene ko jee karta hai,teri yaadon me me sahi ,jeene ko jee karta hai,mana tu ho na sakegi meri kabhi,par humse na cheen tu apni wo yaaden sabhi..............



nazaron se nazaaron ke jaam peeta hoon,
jab aaye mehfil me tera naam,peeta hoon.

har din na peeta yahaan main yaaron,
bas jab-jab dhalti ye shaam,peeta hoon.

saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,
bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.

tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.

lagataar na kabhi peeta hooN "Taish",
har do lamha kar aaraam,peeta hoon.

nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2012, 12:41:48 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2012, 01:01:30 AM »
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saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,

bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.

 kya baat hai taish jee umda ghazal hai, aur is shair ke liye khas taur se daad  qubool karen ,,,,
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2012, 05:17:46 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on November 20, 2012, 04:15:10 PM
nice

thanks mate... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2012, 07:48:40 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Taish ji... dheron daad kubul kijiye sahab
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2012, 09:38:16 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2012, 03:08:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob likha hai aapne tareef ke liye lafz nahi
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«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2012, 07:52:55 AM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne Bhai bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Kia baat hai kis ki chatra chaya meiN hai aajkal
bade hi dilfareb kalaam kah rahe hai janab... Usual Smile

Behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai waaH bahut khoob... bade
achche ashaaroN meiN khoob kalaam piroyi hai janab.. Usual Smile

Meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 12:56:30 PM
aaj khoob peene ko jee karta hai,teri yaadon me me sahi ,jeene ko jee karta hai,mana tu ho na sakegi meri kabhi,par humse na cheen tu apni wo yaaden sabhi..............



nazaron se nazaaron ke jaam peeta hoon,
jab aaye mehfil me tera naam,peeta hoon.

Achcha matla kaha hai janab daad...

har din na peeta yahaan main yaaron,
bas jab-jab dhalti ye shaam,peeta hoon.

Oye hoye janab kia baat hai bahut umda waqai sher hua
hai yeH behad khoob daad daad daad... Usual Smile

saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,
bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.


Bahut khoob janab...

tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.


Bahut khooob janaab

lagataar na kabhi peeta hooN "Taish",
har do lamha kar aaraam,peeta hoon.


Bahut umdaa daad...


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«Reply #9 on: November 22, 2012, 07:55:09 AM »
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boht khub taish sahab
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2012, 02:33:19 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 12:56:30 PM
aaj khoob peene ko jee karta hai,teri yaadon me me sahi ,jeene ko jee karta hai,mana tu ho na sakegi meri kabhi,par humse na cheen tu apni wo yaaden sabhi..............



nazaron se nazaaron ke jaam peeta hoon,
jab aaye mehfil me tera naam,peeta hoon.

har din na peeta yahaan main yaaron,
bas jab-jab dhalti ye shaam,peeta hoon.

saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,
bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.

tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.

lagataar na kabhi peeta hooN "Taish",
har do lamha kar aaraam,peeta hoon.



Bahut Bahut Khooooob Taishji..

Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2012, 02:33:40 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on November 21, 2012, 12:41:48 AM
bahut khoob

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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2012, 02:53:56 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 12:56:30 PM
aaj khoob peene ko jee karta hai,teri yaadon me me sahi ,jeene ko jee karta hai,mana tu ho na sakegi meri kabhi,par humse na cheen tu apni wo yaaden sabhi..............



nazaron se nazaaron ke jaam peeta hoon,
jab aaye mehfil me tera naam,peeta hoon.

har din na peeta yahaan main yaaron,
bas jab-jab dhalti ye shaam,peeta hoon.

saans lene ke siwa na koi kaam mujhe,
bas jab-jab hota koi kaam,peeta hoon.

tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.

lagataar na kabhi peeta hooN "Taish",
har do lamha kar aaraam,peeta hoon.


Waah waah Taish jee bahut khoob...
tune jo humarese ki hai itni bewafaai,
khud se uska le-le inteqam,peeta hoon.

bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2012, 07:21:28 PM »
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Aarish sahab, ghazal ki taareef aur us sher ko jo tawazzo di aapne maiN dono ke liye hi aapka shukraguzaar huN, yuNhi aage v aap saath dete rahiyegaa...
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2012, 03:46:41 PM »
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Quote from: Sunil Malhotra on November 21, 2012, 07:48:40 AM
Bahut bahut khoob Taish ji... dheron daad kubul kijiye sahab
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sunil sahab, bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye... bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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