Kuch tho pila dena..........

by md.ayad on September 01, 2012, 11:54:18 AM
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Meyassar nahi Sharab tho Zeher pila dena
Tere Aagosh me aae hain,kuch tho pila dena
    Dard jo diya hai Apno ne,tujhpar luta denge
    Gar ho jaga Mehfil me tho,Humko bhi bitha lena  love9 love9 love9
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 01:37:13 PM »
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Good one
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 03:31:03 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 05:59:15 PM »
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Quote from: md.ayad on September 01, 2012, 11:54:18 AM
Meyassar nahi Sharab tho Zeher pila dena Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tere Aagosh me aae hain,kuch tho pila dena Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
    Dard jo diya hai Apno ne,tujhpar luta denge icon_silent icon_scratch icon_scratchye kya baat hui janaab
  mehboob ka dard baanta jaata hai aap to mehboob ko hi dard deney ki baat kar rahey hai. baat kuch jamii nahin icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
    Gar ho jaga Mehfil me tho,Humko bhi bitha lena  love9 love9 love9ye line samajh nahin aayii icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 09:26:28 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2012, 12:40:04 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2012, 03:40:37 AM »
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acha likha hai but..dard jo diya hai apno ne tujh per luta dainge thoda thik nahi lag raha hai ....
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2012, 09:41:14 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2012, 02:08:39 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 01, 2012, 05:59:15 PM

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shukriya 4 cmnts
Dard mehboob ko nahi, jo dard APNO ne diya hai us Dard ko MAIKHANE,JAAM par lutane ki baat kahi hai Dosto
 
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