Likhna sikha diya.................

by md.ayad on June 16, 2009, 07:52:13 AM
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Door kar diya tha Nigaho ne teri maikhano se mujhe
par teri Bewafai ne mujhe peena sikha diya
Waise tho shayari se bohat Door tha main par
Tere Intezar ne mujhe likhna sikha diya............... sad11
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 08:34:18 PM »
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Bahut Khoob MD.
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2009, 03:25:12 AM »
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Very nice and beautiful creation,mdayad ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2009, 11:18:51 PM »
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Well said, enjoyed it Mr Ayad


Mayn bhi apnee kismat peh nam hoon
rahat naheen apney gham mein kham hoon
do ghoont utarey to mila mujhey sukun
ab mila surur aur likhney mein magan hoon

'Ramz'
 
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2009, 11:31:17 PM »
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Wah wah M hussain ji,beautiful lines. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2009, 11:48:07 PM »
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Ms. Madhuwesh, the thing you are calling 'lines' is actually a 'Rubai' in Urdu poetry. Rubai is a short and simple form of poetry, also the initiation while writing long metered ghazals.

Oh well thanks for the clappings.
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2009, 06:19:33 AM »
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bahut acche ayad
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 09:25:31 AM »
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very well said md.ayad ji..
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 01:57:25 PM »
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Nasar likhna tha nazam likh betha
Jhoot likhna tha sach likh betha
Mera naheen sharab ne behkaya mujhey
Mazi likhna tha mustakbil likh betha

'Ramz'
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2009, 06:45:51 AM »
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Quote from: md.ayad on June 16, 2009, 07:52:13 AM
Door kar diya tha Nigaho ne teri maikhano se mujhe
par teri Bewafai ne mujhe peena sikha diya
Waise tho shayari se bohat Door tha main par
Tere Intezar ne mujhe likhna sikha diya............... sad11
Ye Intezar-e-Hayat THO kuch yu guzra
ke ladi harpal Main Aks e Ghum-e-yaar se
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 06:33:51 PM »
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Good Mr. MD.Ayad
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«Reply #11 on: July 06, 2009, 07:03:09 PM »
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bahoth qoob ayad sahab badi masti wali shayari ho rahi hai yahan hum bhi eak adath suna hi dete hain umid hai pasand ayenge misre kissi ki juda-e-se mutasir hokar ke likhi hain janab hifazath kijiyega !!

arz hai !!

tere intezaar ne shayar bana diya !!

qatre ko jaise samandar bana diya !!

tujh se milne ke din hum ungliyun per ginte hain !!

ache bhale aadmi ko tone calender bana diya !!

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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2009, 07:07:53 PM »
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Ha ha ha
Last line is quite hilarious.
Oh you funny man Mr. Qadeer
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2009, 07:24:27 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 06, 2009, 07:07:53 PM
Ha ha ha
Last line is quite hilarious.
Oh you funny man Mr. Qadeer

hussain bhai yaar kya karen kabhi kabhi dard had se guzar jata hai to aksar mazaq hi ban jata hai !! bade khush mizaj maloom hote ho hussain bhai !! kahan se taluq rakhte ho .. watan se door rahete honge shayad ap bhi !!

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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 07:26:54 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 05, 2009, 01:57:25 PM
Nasar likhna tha nazam likh betha
Jhoot likhna tha sach likh betha
Mera naheen sharab ne behkaya mujhey
Mazi likhna tha mustakbil likh betha

'Ramz'

wah wah kya baadi baath kahe di mazak mazak me hussain bhai last mire me jaan nikal di apne !! wah bhai wah !!

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