MADHUSHAALA

by NETRAPAL on July 13, 2009, 05:20:19 AM
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dhalte suraj kee belaa me
sandhyaa ke faile anchal me
nikal padaa ek albelaa
thithuraatee saredee me bhee,
wo odh tan pe  doshaalaa
chal padaa wo  us path par
wo path jo pahunchaataa
madhushalaa..

mad ke pyaale me aisaa dooba wo
ansoo priyatam ke bhool aayaa wo
bhoolaa nanhe masoomo ko
mat pietaa ko bhool gayaa wo
sab kuch bhoola us pal wo to
nahi bhoolaa to madhushaalaaa

dikthaa kaisaa adbhud ab wo
pahunch gayaa jo madhushaalaa
chaltaa to ruk ruk kar chaltaa
kabhee uthtaa wo kabhe girtaa
hanstaa kabhee wo apne aap pe
apne pe hee kabhee wo rotaa
hoaa tan se bhee ab wo jar jar
pee kar jahar bharaa pyaalaa
madhushaala ye madhushaalaa
kiasee adhbhut madhushaala

bech aayaa dhartee tak apnee
Leel gayaa  saaree poonjee
nahi bache ghar ke bartan tak
aisee adbhut hai  ye shaalaa
har sahar ke har nukkad pe
baste hai ye madhushaalaa……
madhushall ye madhushalla

har pal kartee jagmagak jagmak
har pal muskaatee ye shaalaa
chahe tapke ankho se ansoo
chaahe saje arthee pe geshoo
bike chahe ghar kee koi ablaa
lasho pe rotee ho kai sablaa
har kafan pe har aansoo pe
sej sajaatee ye madhushaala
mahu shaala ye mahu shaala
kaise adhbut madhushaala
usse nyaayar hai wo pyaara
ho ayaa jo madhu shaala


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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 06:28:40 AM »
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Waah Netra Bhai, Behad, Adbudh, Ati Sundar,.
Ek Behtareen Kavita Arse Baad Pardhne Ko Mili, JO Haqeeqat Ka Chehra Dikhaa Gayi,.

Pardte Pardte Wo Saara Mahual Saamne Aa Gaya, Jo Ek Sharaabi Ke GHar Guzarta Hai,.
Bohat Achchi Kavita Likhi Hai Aapne,.

Bohat Achche,.

May Allah Bless You,.

KHush Rahein,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2009, 06:31:07 AM »
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Wah Netra ji,excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2009, 06:57:26 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 13, 2009, 06:28:40 AM
Waah Netra Bhai, Behad, Adbudh, Ati Sundar,.
Ek Behtareen Kavita Arse Baad Pardhne Ko Mili, JO Haqeeqat Ka Chehra Dikhaa Gayi,.

Pardte Pardte Wo Saara Mahual Saamne Aa Gaya, Jo Ek Sharaabi Ke GHar Guzarta Hai,.
Bohat Achchi Kavita Likhi Hai Aapne,.

Bohat Achche,.

May Allah Bless You,.

KHush Rahein,.

thanks azeem bhaayee aapne ise padha mai kafee dino se apne kaam me vyast tha isee beech tv pe dekha kahi 190 ke kareeb sharaab pee kar gujar gaye n jane kitne bevaa huyee na jane kitne anaath... bas isee ko dhyan me rakhte hooe likhaa..

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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2009, 06:59:28 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 13, 2009, 06:31:07 AM
Wah Netra ji,excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

thanks sir for reading....

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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2009, 07:05:42 AM »
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Netra ji kyun mujhe sir kahaaapne, crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2009, 03:40:16 PM »
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Wah wah Netra Ji, wonderful work
bada achchha laga
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2009, 04:04:39 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyad sarvesh ji kaise hai haap....

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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2009, 05:33:25 AM »
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kya baat hai  netrapal ji......

diya tha mujhko kuch paise gharwalon ne, daan karne gaushalla  main,
socha maine kya faida daan-puen se,majaa karne jaa pouncha madushalla main.
nasha utarne par pashtaya,na fikar ki biwi ki,na bachon ki,na baap ki,na maa ki,
aur na fikar ki maine,hum sabke gau-maa ki.
na jaane kaise lat lagi thee mujhe,us maye ki.
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2009, 05:49:38 AM »
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thanks cara bahut achaa likha hai aapne bhee...


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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2009, 04:15:21 PM »
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MashaAllah Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai Netraji aapne...very well expressed. bahoot hi umda

Cera ji kya khoob likha hai aapne .. bahoot bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2009, 03:53:59 AM »
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thanks sophi ji.....

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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 04:09:27 AM »
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lye gam seene me apne
pahunch gaye koi mahushaala
bhoole kuch pal ko wo gam ko
pahuch gaye fir madhushaalaa
chalaa gayaa gam saath me uske
yahee rah gaye mahushaalaa
madhushaalaa mashushalaa
kaise adbhut madhushaala

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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 10:36:34 AM »
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ACHI COMPOSITION HAI NERTAPAL JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2009, 10:39:27 AM »
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thanks sheba ji....

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