MAIKHANE KA RAASTA BATANA...!

by pandit on May 19, 2009, 06:08:47 AM
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«Reply #60 on: June 19, 2009, 04:26:07 PM »
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Quote from: harish Thakur on June 04, 2009, 06:29:23 AM
Woh jo aaye the haal poochne tumhara
hum khud kaa dard byan kar chale
unki chahton ki chaadar ke peeche
apni nagme ki mahak zrra kar chale...
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HARSH JEE,
BAHUT KHOOB....
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«Reply #61 on: June 19, 2009, 06:43:00 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 19, 2009, 06:08:47 AM

GAR KISI SE WO POOCHE TO MERA PATA BATANA,
UNHE SIRF MAIKHAANE KA RAASTA DIKHANA.

MOHABBAT ME HO JAATI HAI BAHUT RUSWAAI,
KISI DOST KO BHI NA APNE DARD DIKHANA.


...PANDIT....

Bahut Khoob Pandit Ji

Hum ne poochha pataa teraa
Kisi ne kahaa maikhaanaa
Hum ne poochha kaun sa
Us ne kahaa jahan taikhaanaa
Ab peene ki aadat meri hogayee
Bas ghoomte hain maikhaanaa se maikhaanaa
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«Reply #62 on: June 20, 2009, 01:40:33 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 19, 2009, 06:43:00 PM
Bahut Khoob Pandit Ji

Hum ne poochha pataa teraa
Kisi ne kahaa maikhaanaa
Hum ne poochha kaun sa
Us ne kahaa jahan taikhaanaa
Ab peene ki aadat meri hogayee
Bas ghoomte hain maikhaanaa se maikhaanaa

bahut bahut hdanyawaad rajesh bhai...
aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai..
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«Reply #63 on: June 20, 2009, 12:49:08 PM »
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Pilati rahi jam pe jam woh hasina
aur jhool raha tha merey hosh ka safina

'Ramz'
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«Reply #64 on: June 20, 2009, 04:15:31 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 20, 2009, 12:49:08 PM
Pilati rahi jam pe jam woh hasina
aur jhool raha tha merey hosh ka safina

'Ramz'

Kya baat hai husain jee..
aapne to jaan bhar dee.........
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pandit
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«Reply #65 on: June 20, 2009, 10:13:13 PM »
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sonu je,,
kuch add kizea....
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MHussain
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«Reply #66 on: June 21, 2009, 09:32:54 PM »
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Thank you Mr. Pandit
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«Reply #67 on: June 22, 2009, 01:36:31 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 21, 2009, 09:32:54 PM
Thank you Mr. Pandit

U WELCOME HUSSAIN JEE..
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«Reply #68 on: June 22, 2009, 01:38:04 AM »
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JAAM PE JAAM PIYA HUMNE UNHE BHULANE K LIYEA,
BHOOLE KHUD K GHAR KA RAASTA,UN K GALI ME CHAL DIYEA..
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«Reply #69 on: June 23, 2009, 12:56:28 PM »
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Very good very nice Mr. Pandit

Khoob pee hum ne bhi behek janey ke liye
aey 'Ramz' rasta batana ghar janey ke liye
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«Reply #70 on: June 23, 2009, 01:01:22 PM »
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bahut achche mh bhai

ghar jo pahuncha toh maikhana yaad aaya
woh kaun tha kambhaqt jo mujhe ghar le aaya
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«Reply #71 on: June 23, 2009, 01:29:24 PM »
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wonderful Mr. Saahil


Mat pee kaheen toot na jaye zabt
zara si peeli to chillaya 'Ramz'
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«Reply #72 on: June 24, 2009, 05:49:55 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 23, 2009, 01:29:24 PM
wonderful Mr. Saahil


Mat pee kaheen toot na jaye zabt
zara si peeli to chillaya 'Ramz'

Thanks Hussain jee..
aapne bhi zabardast likha hai...
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«Reply #73 on: June 24, 2009, 11:21:23 PM »
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Yeah thanks Mr. Pandit, why do you quote a post when you have to reply below the same person's post, is it not unnecessary?

Na rok 'Ramz' mujhe botal kholney se
Aa tu bhi chakh aur apney hosh khoney de
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«Reply #74 on: June 27, 2009, 12:01:55 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 24, 2009, 11:21:23 PM
Yeah thanks Mr. Pandit, why do you quote a post when you have to reply below the same person's post, is it not unnecessary?

Na rok 'Ramz' mujhe botal kholney se
Aa tu bhi chakh aur apney hosh khoney de


Hello Mr Hussain,
M extremely sorry for that...I could have done it just by mistake..

Nyway,
wonderful lines...........
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