Maine sharaab pee hain.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 17, 2009, 07:36:10 PM
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Ajeeb mayusi si nazar aayee mehfil me,
Socha chalo khud ko badnaam karte hain
Jise dekh mere dosto ke lab pe hasee aaye
Aisa koi kam karte hain.......

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain

Koi q mere kirdaar pe ungli uthaye
Yaha kaun hain jisne sharifo si zindagi jee hain

Khud ko mukamal kehne walo pe hasi aati hain
Meri tarah mehfil me har shaks me kami hain

Maine mana mera pesha mohabbat hain
Kya isse behtar tumne koi kamaiee ki hain

Khamosh hu main lekin gunahgaar nahi hu
Tumse hazar gunah behtar Ghayel ki bandagi hain

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain....
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«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2009, 09:53:28 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Sajid Saheb... Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: April 17, 2009, 09:58:40 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2009, 03:48:26 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 17, 2009, 07:36:10 PM
Ajeeb mayusi si nazar aayee mehfil me,
Socha chalo khud ko badnaam karte hain
Jise dekh mere dosto ke lab pe hasee aaye
Aisa koi kam karte hain.......

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain

Koi q mere kirdaar pe ungli uthaye
Yaha kaun hain jisne sharifo si zindagi jee hain

Khud ko mukamal kehne walo pe hasi aati hain
Meri tarah mehfil me har shaks me kami hain

Maine mana mera pesha mohabbat hain
Kya isse behtar tumne koi kamaiee ki hain

Khamosh hu main lekin gunahgaar nahi hu
Tumse hazar gunah behtar Ghayel ki bandagi hain

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain....


wah kamaal kar diya aapne aaj to........jitnee kee jaye kam hai..

netra..
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2009, 04:02:34 AM »
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badee muddkat ke bad toone
jo do ghoot pee hai

mat kar afsos iskaa
badee muddat ke baad tune
jindgee jee hai.



netra...
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2009, 05:00:05 AM »
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  ALFAAZ MAIN NASHAA HAI.....

(K_A)
 
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2009, 06:28:00 AM »
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Baad muddat ke ye ghadi aayee
Ghayal ne pee aur ek sunder ghazal wazood main aayee

Very nice Sajid
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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2009, 06:50:19 AM »
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sajid bhai.....bahoot dino baad pee?? kyun jhooth bol rahe ho bhai.......ama kal hi to ek hafte se dopno saath me pee rahe hain....tum bhi yaar tull ho jaane ke baad sab bhul jaate ho.. Winking Winking

apart from joke bahoot achchi rachna hai daad kabool karen Applause Applause Applause Applause yoindia par likhi hui meri ek rachna yaad aa gai fir se likh raha hun....

kya khoya kya paaya ab tak, bhulane do hisaab mujhe,
bahoot hua ashqon ko peena, peene do sharab mujhe,

fir yaad teri ne ghera hai, fir dard utha hai seene me
hosh abhi tak baaqi hai, aur do sharab mujhe,

hosh rahe to mai bhi, baaten jhoothi si kahata hun
mai dhoott nashe me kaha gaya, jo baaten lagi kharab tujhe,

Nasha ishq ka, talab husn ki, aur naya shikaar koi,
kyun kisi ke dil se khele, kya mayyasar nahi sharab tujhe

jee bhar ke pee hai aur hosh me aaya hai "bekarar"
jhuth laga jo kahte ho, ye karti hai barbaad mujhe
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2009, 07:11:46 AM »
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sajid bhai jaan arz hai:

na bhooloon kabhi mein tujh ko ya rab ke anjaam se dar lagta hai
banney jo teri narazgi ka sabab, iss ghayel ko uss jaam se dar lagta hai

 
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2009, 07:22:30 AM »
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Nice addition by Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2009, 08:34:53 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Sajid Ji.

Nice addition Netrapal Ji, Sarvesh Ji, Bekarar ji , & lovepeace.

Gud job All..Winking
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2009, 10:02:11 AM »
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Kya baat ho gayee dear sab kuch thik to hai na.. Is it SO!
Waise Bahut Bahut Bahut achha likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause

Kyun mere dost aaj tune itni pee..
kam ho gaya dostana ya jee chuke zindagi
chalo ye bhi achha hai dil ki baat jubaan par aayee
Aapki ye ada bhi hume dil se hai bhayee... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2009, 02:24:03 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 17, 2009, 07:36:10 PM
Ajeeb mayusi si nazar aayee mehfil me,
Socha chalo khud ko badnaam karte hain
Jise dekh mere dosto ke lab pe hasee aaye
Aisa koi kam karte hain.......

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain

Koi q mere kirdaar pe ungli uthaye
Yaha kaun hain jisne sharifo si zindagi jee hain

Khud ko mukamal kehne walo pe hasi aati hain
Meri tarah mehfil me har shaks me kami hain

Maine mana mera pesha mohabbat hain
Kya isse behtar tumne koi kamaiee ki hain

Khamosh hu main lekin gunahgaar nahi hu
Tumse hazar gunah behtar Ghayel ki bandagi hain

Baad muddat ke maine sharab pee hain
Maf karna dosto thodi nahi behisaab pee hain....


bohat khoob Sajid bhai! bahot achchha kaha, umda...
 Applause Applause Applause

boaht khoob Netrapal ji, Sarvesh ji, Bekarar ji, lovepeace ji aur jannat ji. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2009, 04:25:08 AM »
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WAAH GHAYAL JEE....
DIL JEET LIYA AAPNE.........
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2009, 09:46:44 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Ghayel Saheb...
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