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khwaaboN ke aashiyaaN ko saNwarne bhee do zaraa
kuchh raNg aashiqee ke to bharne bhee do zaraa
khaamoshiyoN kee bheed me tanhaai bezubaaN
shokhee ke kuchh parinde chahakne bhee do zaraa
dulhan see raat aayee hai apne naseeb me
tum bhee to gesuoN ko mahakne bhee do zaraa
aayee hai muddatoN me ye ikraar kee ghadee
chhoRo hayaa laboN ko thirakne bhee do zaraa
maykhaane roo-b-roo haiN qasam kyuN naa tod dooN
palkeN uthaa di mujhko bahakne bhee do zaraa
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2011, 04:04:25 PM » |
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khwaaboN ke aashiyaaN ko saNwarne bhee do zaraa
kuchh raNg aashiqee ke to bharne bhee do zaraa
khaamoshiyoN kee bheed me tanhaai bezubaaN
shokhee ke kuchh parinde chahakne bhee do zaraa
dulhan see raat aayee hai apne naseeb me
tum bhee to gesuoN ko mahakne bhee do zaraa
aayee hai muddatoN me ye ikraar kee ghadee
chhoRo hayaa laboN ko thirakne bhee do zaraa
maykhaane roo-b-roo haiN qasam kyuN naa tod dooN
palkeN uthaa di mujhko bahakne bhee do zaraa
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2011, 04:30:06 PM » |
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bht badhiya hai ji…
aapke apne andaaz se juda hai thoda sa…
good poetry ji…
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2011, 06:55:28 PM » |
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Wah Wah.. Bahaut khoob Mamta jee..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2011, 08:37:32 PM » |
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Wah..waah Mamta Ji..
Ek aur bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2011, 03:39:43 AM » |
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bhid mei tanha na marta wo kabhi sun lete gar tum uski baat zaraa khwaaboN ke aashiyaaN ko saNwarne bhee do zaraa
kuchh raNg aashiqee ke to bharne bhee do zaraa
khaamoshiyoN kee bheed me tanhaai bezubaaN
shokhee ke kuchh parinde chahakne bhee do zaraa
dulhan see raat aayee hai apne naseeb me
tum bhee to gesuoN ko mahakne bhee do zaraa
aayee hai muddatoN me ye ikraar kee ghadee
chhoRo hayaa laboN ko thirakne bhee do zaraa
maykhaane roo-b-roo haiN qasam kyuN naa tod dooN
palkeN uthaa di mujhko bahakne bhee do zaraa
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2011, 05:18:03 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Nirala jee ! Aap ne khoob pahchaanaa.......
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2011, 04:25:17 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Satish jee! <a href=http://www.yahoodetector.name/ >yahoo detector</a>, <a href=http://daemontools.name/ >daemon tools</a> |
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2011, 01:27:14 PM » |
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khwaaboN ke aashiyaaN ko saNwarne bhee do zaraa
kuchh raNg aashiqee ke to bharne bhee do zaraa
khaamoshiyoN kee bheed me tanhaai bezubaaN
shokhee ke kuchh parinde chahakne bhee do zaraa
dulhan see raat aayee hai apne naseeb me
tum bhee to gesuoN ko mahakne bhee do zaraa
aayee hai muddatoN me ye ikraar kee ghadee
chhoRo hayaa laboN ko thirakne bhee do zaraa
maykhaane roo-b-roo haiN qasam kyuN naa tod dooN
palkeN uthaa di mujhko bahakne bhee do zaraa
Bahut Tarannum MeN ... Bahut Rawaangi Ke Saath ... BayaaN Ki Ghazal Hai ... Mamtaa Ji ! Behad Umdaa Aur Khoobsurat Kalaam Kehne ke Liye Dil se HazaaroN Daad ... Aapke Liye ... yunhi likhti rahen ... aur aati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2011, 06:23:41 PM » |
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Behad shukriyaa Rahim jee!
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2011, 06:24:37 PM » |
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Zarre ko aaftaab banaane kaa behad shukriyaa Naresh.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2011, 06:26:49 PM » |
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Waah waaah waaaah!!! kyaa khoob kahaa aap ne Manoj jee! bahut khoob ! aap ke is sher par humaari or sederoN badhai...
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2011, 06:27:51 PM » |
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Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Manju jee!
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«Reply #14 on: May 24, 2011, 01:33:41 PM » |
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khwaaboN ke aashiyaaN ko saNwarne bhee do zaraa
kuchh raNg aashiqee ke to bharne bhee do zaraa
khaamoshiyoN kee bheed me tanhaai bezubaaN
shokhee ke kuchh parinde chahakne bhee do zaraa
dulhan see raat aayee hai apne naseeb me
tum bhee to gesuoN ko mahakne bhee do zaraa
aayee hai muddatoN me ye ikraar kee ghadee
chhoRo hayaa laboN ko thirakne bhee do zaraa
maykhaane roo-b-roo haiN qasam kyuN naa tod dooN
palkeN uthaa di mujhko bahakne bhee do zaraa
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