Nazar, nazar sey milaaney key liye aaougey?

by abdbundeli on October 03, 2008, 08:11:14 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 3396 times)
abdbundeli
Guest
Reply with quote
Nazar, nazar sey milaaney key liye aaougey?
Fir eik baar, pilaaney key liye aaougey?

Khumaar ab bhi hai baaqee, yeh sach hai, pahiley kaa:
Jaam-e-altaaf* dilaaney key liye aaougey?

Dahar sey eik ham aagosh naheen hain ham-tum!
Waqt kuchh, saath bitaaney key liye aaougey?

Paas rah kar bhi, faasaley banaaye hain tum ney?
Fir eik baar sataaney key liye, aaougey?
* Purlutf mehrabaaniyoun ka jaam 
                             - abd bundeli
 
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 04:20:30 AM »
Reply with quote
bahoot khoob abd ji
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 05:04:22 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks bekarar ji,
I'm happy you read it.
               abd bundeli
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 05:30:09 AM »
Reply with quote
your welcome abd ji,
ek adna koshish

koun aata hai ab bulane se,
baaz aao tum bhi milne milane se
kuch ab nashe ki aadat bhi nahi rahi,
unko bhi ab fursat nahi jamane se
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 06:03:44 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: bekarar on October 04, 2008, 05:30:09 AM
your welcome abd ji,
ek adna koshish

koun aata hai ab bulane se,
baaz aao tum bhi milne milane se
kuch ab nashe ki aadat bhi nahi rahi,
unko bhi ab fursat nahi jamane se

Bahut 'sunder' hai, aur badhhiyaa hai!
bekarar ji,
Tabhi to, bekarar ji, yeh bekararee hai!
Aatish-e-ishq hai, qaayam hai, naheen haaree hai!
Koshisheyn laakh keejiyegaa, zamaaney bhar keen,
Rooh-e-aashiq to azal sey gamoun ki maaree hai!!
                           - abd bundeli
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 01:28:28 PM »
Reply with quote
ek choti si koshish

na karo hosh ki baten, bekhudi me abd,
ya ke ab unki aankhon se may barasti nahi hai,
ya ke ab usane touba kar li pilane se,
aisa to hai nahi ki may asar rakhti nahi hai,
Logged
Sonia01
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2008, 01:39:07 PM »
Reply with quote
Humne bi pada  aur bahut accha laga abdbunduli ji  Applause
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2008, 04:48:56 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause bekarar ji / Sonia01 ji,
Woh, pilaaney kaa hai shouqeen, maykadey waalaa!
Binaa piye hi, magar, ham ko nashah rahtaa hai!
Woh pilaataa hai, maantaa hi naheen hai, fir bhi:
Dil-o-dimaag usee shai mein basaa rahtaa hai!

Woh pilaataa hai, mein peetaa hoon, par nashah hai kahaan?
Guzar rahey hain shab-o-roz pee rahaa hoon mein!
Kah naheen saktaa, ki, beyhosh hoon, ki hosh mein hoon?
Pahloo-e-yaar hai, pee-pee key jee rahaa hoon mein!!
                                          - abd bundeli

 
Logged
Sonia01
Guest
«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2008, 05:01:34 PM »
Reply with quote
nazar se pilaya pyar usne
mai nashe mein hogayi chur
ab madhira ki kya zarurat, jab
pyar mein mai dagmaga gayi hu
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2008, 05:19:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Sonia01 on October 04, 2008, 05:01:34 PM
nazar se pilaya pyar usne
mai nashe mein hogayi chur
ab madhira ki kya zarurat, jab
pyar mein mai dagmaga gayi hu

Wah kyaa baat hai Soniao1 ji!!

Pee key aaye jo nashah wo to 'abd' yoon hi hai:
Binaa piye jo dagmagaa dey us kaa kyaa kahnaa?
                    - abd bundeli
Logged
Sonia01
Guest
«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2008, 05:31:20 PM »
Reply with quote
 Usual Smile

Mohabbat aah mohobbat ki zindagi math poocho
baksh de sakhi zara-si roshni
zindai ka rasta bahut andhera hai
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2008, 06:13:12 PM »
Reply with quote
Sonia01 ji!
Yaar pahloo mein hai, to, saaraa jahaan roshan hai!
Lakh roshan ho jahaan, woh naheen, to kuchh bhi naheen!!
Nisf shab syaah ho, par, saath noor-e-yaar na ho:
Tab to, hai zindagee taareek, aur kchh bhi naheen!!
                                  - abd bundeli
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #12 on: October 27, 2008, 05:20:57 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahoot khoob Abd ji, Nice work Bekarar and Sonia
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2008, 09:51:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriyah Pooja ji!
          - abd bundeli
Logged
Praachi
Shayari Qadrdaan
***

Rau: 1
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
6 hours and 56 minutes.
Posts: 161
Member Since: Oct 2014


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2014, 11:07:04 AM »
Reply with quote
Nice creation...
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Kaifiyaat-ae-maye > Topic: Nazar, nazar sey milaaney key liye aaougey?
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 05:41:26 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.116 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer