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by vikas2210 on May 21, 2009, 01:19:35 PM
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Doobana chah jo khud ko sharaab main
bhul jana chaha jo tujhko sharaab main
tasver aur saaf hogai har jaam ke saath
har baat aayi yaad mujhe har jaam ke baad


hansata tha zamane ke samane shaarb se pehle
bahut roya pee kar main sharab ke baad
na khaali rehne diya main jaam ab kabhi
waise to na sahi yaad to aayi har jaam ke baad

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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 01:42:01 PM »
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Doobana chah jo khud ko sharaab main
bhul jana chaha jo tujhko sharaab main
tasver aur saaf hogai har jaam ke saath
har baat aayi yaad mujhe har jaam ke baad


hansata tha zamane ke samane shaarb se pehle
bahut roya pee kar main sharab ke baad
na khaali rehne diya main jaam ab kabhi
waise to na sahi yaad to aayi har jaam ke baad

Wah kya khoob likha hai aapne. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 03:50:00 PM »
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Wah wah Vikas Kya baat hai .. chaa gaye tum tho... Bahoot Khoob!:)
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 03:54:26 PM »
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bahut khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 05:38:38 AM »
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Wah kya khoob likha hai aapne. Thumbs UP



thanks a lot roja........
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 05:40:05 AM »
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Wah wah Vikas Kya baat hai .. chaa gaye tum tho... Bahoot Khoob!:)

pasand karne ke liye shukriya sophi madam....
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2009, 05:41:12 AM »
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bahut khoob!

thanks a lot vitasta
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