Sharaabi~~ Naam rakhta~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 23, 2009, 12:52:22 PM
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khwahish bas yeh rahi dil kii koi yaad karta
baad mere yeh mehfile gulzaar rakhta

roz pi jaati sharaab mere naam se
saaki meri kabra par roz ek jaam rakhta

har mehfil mein goonjta mera aadhoora nagma
har sharaabi mere dard se pehchaan rakhta

kii is kadar sharaab se mohabbat kar li maine
jo jinda rehta toh "Saahil" , "SHARAABI" naam rakhta
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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2009, 01:30:16 PM »
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This is quite a pretty ghazal Mr. Saahil
Bravo!
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2009, 01:40:45 PM »
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wah Wah Salil Bhai.. Behad lajawab Alfaaz Likhe Hain Dost..!! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2009, 06:46:02 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Salil
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Sammual
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 08:11:12 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Saahil Ji.
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2009, 08:28:23 PM »
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very nice Sahil ji... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2009, 10:36:17 PM »
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Wah wah very beautiful gazal Saahil ji,too good. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hmm naam toh A se rakh diya maine phir sharabi rakhne ki kiya zarurat. Winking Giggle
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2009, 07:02:03 AM »
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Quote from: MHussain on June 23, 2009, 01:30:16 PM
This is quite a pretty ghazal Mr. Saahil
Bravo!
mh bhai aapne pasand kiya bahut khushi huyi is baat kii..........agar aapko kabhi bhi koi galti lage meri toh please kahiye...........
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2009, 07:03:27 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 23, 2009, 01:40:45 PM
wah Wah Salil Bhai.. Behad lajawab Alfaaz Likhe Hain Dost..!! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
shukriya bade bhai
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2009, 07:04:13 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Salil.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: June 24, 2009, 07:05:47 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 23, 2009, 06:46:02 PM
Bohot Khoob Salil
Quote from: Sammual on June 23, 2009, 08:11:12 PM
Bahut Khoob Saahil Ji.
Quote from: superspawn10 on June 23, 2009, 08:28:23 PM
very nice Sahil ji... Applause
talat di ,sam bhai, and SS bhai aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: June 24, 2009, 07:06:49 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 23, 2009, 10:36:17 PM
Wah wah very beautiful gazal Saahil ji,too good. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hmm naam toh A se rakh diya maine phir sharabi rakhne ki kiya zarurat. Winking Giggle
kya kare laila dear .....aashiq bhi sharaabi ho jaate hain aksar
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«Reply #12 on: June 24, 2009, 07:08:16 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 24, 2009, 07:04:13 AM
Wah Wah Bahut Khoob Salil.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.


thanks a lot nawab saheb
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MHussain
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«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2009, 11:00:24 PM »
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Mr. Saahil, why not, I'll let you know, thank you.
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2009, 07:15:50 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat likha hia aapne. saroor aa gaya .
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