shayri after daru.......(ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on November 07, 2008, 04:30:08 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 08, 2010, 11:04:56 AM »
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Suna hai..jo peete hain sharab unki dua kabool nahi hoti Shocked Even More
jise botal mil gai use dua ki jaroorat bhi nahi hoti  NaNaNa
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«Reply #46 on: November 26, 2010, 12:11:29 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 07, 2008, 04:30:08 PM
lafzo ka her fer hain
koi doodh ka dhula nahi
mujsa bada ghatiya shayer
ghayel ko mila nahi

nazro ka her fer hain
yaha koi shaks bhala nahi
mujse bada papi yaro
ghayel ko mila nahi

                  -sg-

for me its reality with humour dont shift this poetry to some serious boring section

               Ghayal Miyan, aapki Shayari
               Her dil Aziz hai uske liye
               shukriya. Per Janab Ek boond
               bhi Maye/daaru ka terka tek
               aapke sher main nazer na aaya.
               Ye bari na-insafi hai. Isa pe
               Janab aap amal kijeeyega.

                "Kahan maikhane ka derwaja
                ' Ghalib'aur kahan waaid,
                Ki main jata tha aur wo nikla.' 
ru
           
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«Reply #47 on: July 27, 2011, 08:34:40 AM »
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kanoon mein ek aisi dafa di jaye,

jo pita na ho use saja di jaye,

aur jo pita ho dar-b-dar bhatakta meri tarah puri bottal,

yaro use rat ko mekhane mein sone ki jagah di jaye....
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«Reply #48 on: September 26, 2011, 06:11:53 PM »
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Ghayalk sahaab aadaab!

Kiaa janab aap ne to bus naam ka title de diya ..
Yaar daru ka zikar to kahiN kiya hi nahi aapne.. Huh?

Phir yeH after daru kyuN ?

Aapki is kalaam ke jawaab meiN Sharabi Movie ka sher yaad aa gaya. "

Aaj itni bhi mayyassar nahi is maikhane meiN
Kabhi chhod diyaa karte the hum paimaane meiN

Yaar hum se to khud ki shayari bhi nahi ban paa rahi hai ... pata nahi
humara lafz laraj rahe hai yaa kadam ladkhada re hai.. Huh?
Aap ki kalaam ko daad dena to bhool hi gaye daad hazir hai janab..

Hum aapki kalam par kuch kaheN itni to humari aukaat nahi hai shayad.. but
Don't worry waise hum aapki kalaam ke title par khare hai is waqt..
Aur sher bhi usi ke hisab se kaheNge... mulayzaa farmaiye..


Quote from: bekarar on November 08, 2010, 11:04:56 AM
Suna hai..jo peete hain sharab unki dua kabool nahi hoti Shocked Even More
jise botal mil gai use dua ki jaroorat bhi nahi hoti  NaNaNa

Waah waah waah Bekaraar sahaab kia kahne janab...
Dil khush kar diyaa aapne ... bahut khara sher kaha hai daad hazir hai
janab....  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yeh baat huyi naa ... SharabiyoN wali... kia baat hai kia baat hai waa
jee waa...... maza aa gaya aik hi sher meiN puri mehfil loot li janab ...
bahut khoob...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Likhate rahiye... Mehdil sajate rajhiye..
Khush Rahiye......... Khuda hafez...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #49 on: February 25, 2012, 06:50:05 PM »
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Akela hun, akela hi jina chahata hun,
pyar ko gaye kuch lamha hi bita hai
In aansuo mein aab bhi uska chehera jita hai.
palko par bund ban kar uski yaaden aab bhi taza hai,
rota hun, sochkar, k ye pyar hai ya saza hai.
aab pyar se kampta hun, pyar mein dar ko bhapta hun.
akela hun, akela hi jina chahata hun.

khawabo mein uski yaaden sanjoi rakhi hai,
jagjaun to zindidagi hakikat bayan, roti hai.
akela hun, shayed akela hi jina chahata hun.

Ujjwal
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«Reply #50 on: March 26, 2012, 05:17:21 AM »
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 tearyeyedhume pine ka souk nahi tha par jab se mohabbat hui wo apni aankho se pilaya karti thi....
wo humse bewafai kar gai par unki yade aaj bhi hume botal se pilaya karti hai...........
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«Reply #51 on: April 04, 2012, 06:18:41 PM »
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tumne nahi pi
humne bahut pi
par sach kahoon!

tum bhi mar jaoge
hum bhi mar jaenge
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«Reply #52 on: May 04, 2012, 06:49:20 PM »
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Daru Meh Woh Dam Kaha Joh Humsey Shayri Karwa Sakey
Behak Gaye Hum Unki Aakhoh Meh, Kadam Ladkhada Uthey
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«Reply #53 on: August 05, 2012, 01:01:06 AM »
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Aap sang mai bhi kuch keh deyti ho....
Dharti jis ki ambar jis ka
kuderat sari jis ki hai
woh baitha hai chupkar jis nay
sara kheal rachaya hai.
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«Reply #54 on: August 12, 2012, 06:07:36 AM »
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vodka ki bottle uski yaad dilati hai
rum ki bottle uske hone ka ehsaas dilati hai
main sharabi nahi hoon doston ,
uski duriyan mujhe sharabi banati hai...
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«Reply #55 on: September 11, 2012, 04:44:42 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 18, 2010, 08:25:50 AM
Yahan pee pee kar sab bahak gaye
Hum aaye saamne to sab dubak gaye
Ye saraab aisi cheez hai yaaro
Kas ke piyo aur sab ko goli maro
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 07, 2008, 07:18:41 PM
mere dost tera ek ek lafz sach hain

khud ko sambhalna hhain mushkil
tumko kya sahara dege
bohat bohat agar hua humse
fakat ek salam ka ishara dege
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«Reply #56 on: October 22, 2012, 04:02:01 PM »
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Rat ko Pi sharab to rat katgayi


subah kiya hisab to G......................... Fat gayi
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«Reply #57 on: November 06, 2012, 06:42:28 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 07, 2008, 04:30:08 PM
lafzo ka her fer hain
koi doodh ka dhula nahi
mujsa bada ghatiya shayer
ghayel ko mila nahi

nazro ka her fer hain
yaha koi shaks bhala nahi
mujse bada papi yaro
ghayel ko mila nahi

                  -sg-

for me its reality with humour dont shift this poetry to some serious boring section
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«Reply #58 on: December 30, 2012, 02:09:21 PM »
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«Reply #59 on: August 20, 2013, 11:36:01 PM »
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Mera dard logo ka jaam ban behane laga har oor...
Jo milta bas yahi kehta, ek aur, ek aur, bas ek aur..
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